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Hello author, I am a student. It's my birthday tomorrow. I hope you can update Chapter 100 and give me a birthday gift. Don't be disrespectful.

Expand before subscribing is quite amazing, but the first chapter of subscribing gave me a big blow. It showed the ability to transform the killed enemies into brainless boys in desperate situations. To be honest, it was too deus ex machina. Later, when facing strong enemies, I directly used the golden body to learn skills to fight back on the spot... And the protagonist is so smart. The character design is too conflicting. Nowadays, breaking through on the battlefield is no longer attractive Especially because the protagonist is not a hot-blooded person. It is even more awkward. Moreover, God intervenes too much. Sometimes it becomes the protagonist's external brain. Jin Jia is also the same. Does the author hope that we like Jin Jia, a green skin? There are a lot of saucy lines... The ability to beat someone to death and turn him into a loyal younger brother is certainly convenient for the author, but like the "slave contract", it has unparalleled destructive power on the relationship between characters. Of course, maybe it's just a matter of my personal preference. The character design and plot are both good.

A salute to Teacher Kui's new students

Is the plot about to collapse? In the first 300 chapters, the protagonist doesn't upgrade at all. He keeps pushing the protagonist to build roots. In less than 100 chapters, the protagonist upgrades quickly and suddenly becomes a ghost. Is it because the author can't continue writing and needs to finish it quickly?

It seems like Shakui just came to Qidian? Not bad. I only read Shakui's books in Shuke. They have their own unique style. The stories and characters are very interesting. I like them very much. I recommend them to everyone. This author does not write serious fantasy works, but if you want to read a relaxed, happy and sexy story, you can definitely come here 🤓

I am a disabled person, and my greatest pleasure every day is reading novels. Author, if you have a little bit of kindness, you can update 10 pictures every day. Otherwise I will sue you for disrespecting people with disabilities.

After reading the introduction, it's either a harem or a stallion. Or Teddy

As the saying goes, when everyone adds firewood, the flames will rise! A person's power is limited after all. In order to better focus on the plot, we are now collecting different characters and abilities from book friends! I hope my few book friends will be willing to participate. Well - in order to help everyone think, let me give you a format. [How many apertures and strange phenomena] + [Skill details] + [Approximate level] Not to mention the first two, anyone who has read the book will know what is going on. The general level is [beat by Yu Ci], [similar to Yu Ci], [beat by Yu Ci]. I'll use it if one fits, but that's subject to change! Complete!

Aoi, you will definitely finish the book this time, right?

You are really good, do you want to get a copy of 🦔Mao Zai Eunuch?

In fact, should we consider changing the name? I feel that this name is too shuke style. Maybe Qidian readers are not so eager to click in. It should be more popular. I feel that Kui Kui can refer to the naming style of Tingri who also came from there.

The writing about the wisdom of this divine ticket to the underworld is a huge failure, just how many words were said in vain about the divine coupon to the underworld.

I really want to turn Shakui into my assistant, and then let him mine a hundred update ores every day. You only have to dig for five days a month. One hundred chapters a day should be easy under the temptation of taking 25 days off a month.

Not bad, but one flaw is that it is sloppy. It is very sloppy. It feels like the author wrote the book on the spot without thinking about perfection. It feels like where it is when it is written. Many things are not explained. Why can the male protagonist win first place? Others have already awakened to the abnormality, and then a random person can break into the school and take people away. It turns out that 8 people are mixed in and it turns into 9 people and they have to drink until they realize it halfway. It feels like it was written as soon as it was written. I don't recommend it to serious friends. I feel that the author could add more comedy plots, so that the sense of dissonance would not be so strong.

I have read 60 chapters, and I think it is quite interesting. The protagonist and supporting characters have good IQs, and the basic logic is good. The only drawback is that this book does not seem to be very good. It is only about 600,000 words and I am really afraid that it will be a eunuch.

Is this upgrade so sudden? It feels like the speed is being pushed forward forcefully. Is it going to be cut?

The heroines are quite good, but I don't know if there is too little writing and the charm of the characters is not reflected. The first heroine, Xuan Zhenqiang, can't keep up with the male protagonist now. Her level and talent are not comparable. Since she has a eldest lady background, she must have practiced before going to school. Why not increase her appearance level? Now the protagonist has surpassed her by several years in a few months The upgrade setting is too complicated and I can't understand it. I have written so many words. Although the protagonist can reach the upper level, his level is still a foundation.

In my opinion, this book should be a light novel with traditional fantasy at its core. The introduction seems to be a light novel, but the text involves the race war related to the "green skins" and most of the plot has a traditional fantasy flavor. When it comes to system functions and the description of female characters, the writing style tends to be light novels. This resulted in me having a very strange feeling when reading this book. I neither felt the grandeur and tension of reading traditional fantasy nor the relaxed and joyful feeling of reading light novels. I couldn't get up and down, and I got stuck. I suggest that the author's positioning of the book should be clearer and more accurate, and the writing style is quite good.

First, the title of the book is uninteresting. Second, there is a lack of exposure channels. Third, there is no accumulation. The first book is rarely an immediate hit. You can learn from Haoyu Zhenxian, which is also a new book by a new author. As long as it is a good book, give it a good name, and then advertise it under many books, now it will become famous.

How about improving combat effectiveness? I don't think this is a breaking point at all. Ghosts and gods can do more things. The platform has expanded a lot. Everyone is saying that the writing is a bit broken. The author himself said so, but I think the writing is very good and interesting.

It's lighthearted and funny, but it insists on plotting conspiracy, and the character of the protagonist feels inexplicable.

The Demon King's Cadre, haven't you written it yet?

Is the book club gone? Will I stop writing books in the future?

So what? Did the old book club group explode? Is there a new group account?

What is the name of Kui Zi's new book? The newly opened book squeaks

Yu Ci: Lord God, where are you going? Shen Lian: Alas? Are there any powerful enemies? Looking at the children's creations in front of them, they have concerned looks on their faces. Kui Kui was silent. After a while, she opened her raw lips: "I'm going to face a powerful enemy, so take care of yourselves." Yu Ci scratched his head: "Is there anything we can do to help?" "Thank you," Kui Kui sighed: "But the enemy I have to face can only be solved by myself." "What is it?" "Reality."

What is the answer to the question asked into the group?

Why can't I enter the last group in this book? What's the answer?

Touching Shakui, it felt really good when I saw the male protagonist pass on the female protagonist's sacrifice of strength, and it was also very good before. But I feel like I can't pick it up later.

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