The Heavens Begin from Konoha

I've only read a few chapters, how can I put it, I'm really good at thinking about it, but I really don't know how to complain about this way of writing. It's just written from the narrator's perspective and outline, with no substantive content, no diverse events and ups and downs, so that the reader can completely become the protagonist. From the perspective of the author, the writing method is completely like a robot without any emotion. If the author does not improve the writing method in the future, no one will be able to follow this book. If the writing method improves in the future, the writing method in the previous articles must also be changed, otherwise it will not retain people.

It's quite good, at least it's very thoughtful. It is created through the setting that chakra comes from the combination of spiritual and physical energy. It has its own original skills and plot, rather than like other Naruto fan novels, where you know the Eight Gates Dungeon, Flying Thunder God, Reincarnation of the Earth, Samsara Eye, and the Reincarnation Eye. Nothing changes after you have the ability.

Drawn by myself

There are no cheats on the surface, but the actual cheats are incredible. You can try out any idea and it will be successful, just like the NPC in the game world wakes up and discovers that this is a data world, and can quickly modify the non-underlying rules.

I recently changed my job and worked 12 hours a day. In these three days, I coded more than a thousand words. I'm really sorry, but you can keep it and I will update it.

It's different from other Naruto fans, it's very interesting

Don't take easy things for granted. You should know that one minute on stage can take ten years of work off stage. Even if I tell you the principles, you still can't create some things. The development of science is basically in stages. To be honest, if you don't have tens of thousands of research-oriented talents for this type of article, you may not even be able to get started.

The name Wang Tianda is really not very good.

This is not writing a novel, this is writing an outline

It feels like there is less story. After watching your Naruto movie, I don't want to read the following. There is too little story, and there is no plot that attracts me. This should be regarded as the shortcoming of the fast travel novel.

After reading some, I found it very interesting. The plot is ordinary, the pain shadow clone training method, the Senshi Sharingan technique, the blood successor learns puppets, and imitates superman training by absorbing solar energy. However, Chapter 28 is very bad. The protagonist's will is not broken even when burned by the flames, but he does not want to kill people. He thinks that he has killed the original by traveling through time. He is frightened and wants to escape from the ninja world. Yes, the protagonist who has cultivated to the point of being invincible wants to escape from the ninja world because of killing people. Author, have you ever experienced will training? , The protagonist's will that is not afraid of fire is absolutely impossible to be panicked just because he doesn't know whether someone has killed someone. Chapter 28 is definitely a persuasion chapter. He has no courage and cruelty to avenge his original parents. Compared to Dr. Chen, he is a universe away. I was very depressed when I saw this type of protagonist who is self-absorbed. Doesn't the enemy have to kill the protagonist's closest relatives in order to grow? Knowing that ordinary morality and ordinary laws can no longer protect oneself, but shackles. Of course, pure evil cannot do it.

Kryptonian:? ? ? Our genetic technology, which has been developed for tens of thousands of years, was developed from zero to all by a 12-year-old child? 😰

I heard that there is no female protagonist in this book, but she is a member of my generation Occasionally, a peerless master taught me a wonderful method, and after practicing it, I can become a sword master. How stupid and shallow. Now passed on to everyone at the starting point. Do it and cherish it Determination: There is no woman in the heart, draw the sword and the god of nature The first page of the sword manual, forget your sweetheart The second page of the sword manual, be careful of stinky women The third page of the sword manual, women are so annoying The fourth page of the sword manual, women are heartbroken The fifth page of the sword manual, kill the old lover in anger The sixth page of the sword manual, inappropriate lover The seventh page of the sword manual, no woman must be a god The sword manual no. Eight pages, kill all those who have betrayed your heart Nineth page of the sword manual, wipe out the mortal world with a sword Return my free soul on the tenth page of the sword manual Eleven pages of the sword manual, I should not be a prisoner Twelve pages of the sword manual, there is no love in the world Thirteen pages of the sword manual, the sword cuts off the soul of love Fourteen pages of the sword manual, cuts off love and kills the demon god Fifteen pages of the sword manual, abandons love and closes the heart The last page of the sword manual, no love is a god Who is willing to inherit this peerless martial arts.

The imagination of the time traveler and the thinking of the indigenous people

More like a long composition than a novel...

Food and grass, but why is the protagonist so generous? Is the United States strong in scientific research? I haven't seen it generously teach others how to make nuclear bombs, and then say such silly things as "The most important thing is the ability to innovate. I'm not afraid of you learning, because you can't surpass me."

Without saying anything else, just the name of the protagonist, Wang Tianda, can dissuade more than half of the readers.

My imagination is okay, but I can't stand this civil science approach. There are a lot of little pitfalls.

I can't understand the progress of roasting the clone, but I can understand it if I roast myself, but it is easy to cool down, and the hair will fall apart when roasted.

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