One Piece: Enlisting with the Enterprise

I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 30. I was originally looking forward to Gran Blue + One Piece, but it turned out to be just the author's own pleasure. Let me tell you a few questions 1. The protagonist's name is Lu Li. Since it is set in the world of One Piece, don't call him such a Chinese name. It is full of contradictions, not to mention that there will be Brother Lu and Master Lu later. You should be writing martial arts novels! 2. Called "Lord Garp" at the beginning? As a modern person, how do you manage to call someone "adult" when you travel back in time? If it wasn't a habitual call, then it was a deliberate lick. You can call him "Mr. Karp" or "Uncle Karp". Respecting people does not mean licking! 3. Can anyone become an admiral? Even if you don't know that One Piece requires the nod of the Celestial Dragon to be a general, a normal person knows that general represents the highest status under the navy marshal, which means supreme power. How can you give it to a person of unknown origin? First of all, you will not pass the background check. You cannot be a general if you have the strength. You must at least have a clean background and a righteous heart recognized by the navy. What does a company meet? Arranging the company to Impel Down is good, as it is a disguised form of imprisonment, but the question is, can Magellan keep her under control? Unless the protagonist is used to threaten the company, it is meaningless. 4. Hawkeye agreed to teach the protagonist swordsmanship. The reason is that the company said that the commander has a reason to become stronger. If you have a reason to become stronger, I will teach you? Hawkeye doesn't know you, and he doesn't see any talent in swordsmanship in you. If Hawkeye is so easy to talk to, he has already become famous all over the world. Also, do you really dare to write about the protagonist 8-Day Swordsman? Is the protagonist rushing to be reincarnated to save the next world? Strength improvement does not follow common sense. If you say that you rely on system cheats to improve your strength, I have nothing to say. I will train myself as a swordsman for 8 days, ha! 5. The setting of the garrison is quite reasonable. The navy asked the general company to establish a new branch base, and then it became the protagonist's garrison. This is no problem. The question is, what is the purpose of establishing the navy branch in the windless zone? The only people who can freely enter and exit the windless zone are the Navy's warships and the pirate ships of Kuji Island. Other pirate sailboats cannot enter the windless zone at all. Otherwise, pirates would not need to climb the Upside Down Mountain to enter the Grand Route from the four seas. The navy's duty is to combat pirates and protect the people. Are you establishing a branch in the windless zone where there are neither pirates nor residents to attack the Sea Kings? I am the marshal, so I let the company establish branches in the New World. Anyway, I am afraid that the company can't control it. It would be better to abandon the New World and fight with the four emperors. 6. I don't want to complain about the rest.

It is recommended that the author set up the ship girl to learn physical swordsmanship and domineering to add some new ideas There is also scientific research on the Devil Fruit analysis. For example, after the Castle Fruit analysis, the main gun base is +++, the carrier aircraft is +++, and the equipment column is added. The Target Fruit is analyzed to increase hit points, and the Swimming Fruit is increased to maneuver, speed, and can sail like the sea in any environment. There are too many things to write By the way, I will talk about the great swordsman Bailong and the great swordsman Ling Zhanxian😏. I have seen a lot of Ship B fans, but there is nothing new

If the male protagonist has nothing to do, he can accept that the commander does not need to be all muscles, but it would be better not to be a dog for the navy, but to call the ship girls and rely on strategy and cross-era artillery fire to crush them.

There is a ship girl who wants to join the navy, so I asked the author, if the Tianlong people ask you for your girl, what are you going to do? Don't doubt it, those pigs from the Tianlong people have this possibility.

The company's output is really unreasonable! Replacing the Cannon Team's Emperor with the Enterprise, the output is actually higher than New Jersey (although this New Jersey seems to be playing the role of me).

Everyone is here for the ship girl. You write this just to disgust the blue players. Maybe you feel that you are also a player, but if you don't understand everyone's enjoyment of reading blue novels, don't write it. To be honest, your novel made me so angry that it almost gave me a brain hemorrhage.

The theme is perfect, but is it really interesting to be a Draconian dog? Don't be poisonous. It's a good book with a good title, but I just want to be a dog and build a garrison and restore Azur Lane. Isn't it good?

Originally it was for the ship girl, but if the author continues to poison me like this, I really can't stand it anymore.

This time the protagonist of the latest chapter is embarrassed. He knows that the observer is good at disguise and dares to go out on his own. Moreover, if a character who did not appear in the original appears next to Luo Bing, why should he not be wary? Luo Bing did not trust others in the early days.

The author recommends taking the route of crushing with artillery. After all, even the technology and warships of World War II are enough to defeat most powerful pirates. Even admirals can be crushed.