Future Love Game

The writing is very fresh, and it can be seen that the author really wants to express his thoughts and ideas. This has achieved the ethics of an excellent online literature writer, but its shortcomings are also obvious. I hope to put forward a few points to bring some help to the author. 1 The writing is intermittent, incoherent, and the rhythm is not grasped well. Sometimes the entangled resonance of the characters' emotions and the environment feels abrupt. 2. The writing quality is uneven. Some places are acceptable, but sometimes some golden sentences suddenly appear and suddenly stand out. They are a bit inexplicable and uncoordinated. There is no need to destroy the overall beautiful and warm background of the novel in pursuit of a temporary burst of emotion. It should be gentler and the transition will be made after the writing level improves in the future. 3. Do you think what you have is a puppet, an obedient machine, or a human being? Personal opinion, I hope it can provide some help to you. I hope you can study hard in your future writing and surpass Zhongyuan Wubai.

This book is too cool, it's obviously very well written.

If you have any comments and suggestions, you can put them forward in this building. Including and not limited to: (The sweetness of daily plots, the increase in midnight tea party members, the types of games you want to see, the emergence of reasonable future technologies, etc.)

Maybe it's because I've watched too many emotional anime in the past two days, and I found that the sense of immersion is so strong! The more I watch, the more I can't stop.

Damn, I'm about to take the college entrance examination. I won't watch it for the next four months. Automatic subscription is on. Come on.

I found it on the book list, why does it have such good reviews but so few people? 😥 This feels like the most harmonious book club with the best reviews I have ever seen 😊

Isn't this book a censorship review? It's all good reviews.

The name of the future love game is a bit misleading. There are not many plots in the game. They are all normal light novel plots. It's good to watch! I was almost dissuaded.

Except for the first dungeon, the next two dungeons all have the shadow of Small World. For example, the second dungeon has the shadow of the first game killer in Small World, Bloody Banquet, and the second game has the shadow of a strong person who can reach 10,000 meters. The third dungeon has the shadow of the high energy ahead.

The setting looks a lot like Small World. If you're interested, take a look.

It is obvious that the author borrowed ideas from several books, but the writing is still very good. I am just worried that if more people read it later, someone will say plagiarism or something. Although I have always felt that I just borrowed ideas and the story was written by myself, and it does not count as plagiarism, but some people don't think much about it. I hope this book will get better and better.

Please, all handsome and handsome readers, please catch up on the latest chapters every day. Sunday recommendations have begun. Reading is very important. I will work hard to update every day. Thank you.

The author is going to work hard, come and read! Don't raise it!

Hiss, I can't stand it anymore, it's so sweet! ! But I still want to go to Shura Field

The heroine is quite unique and lovable, and the author did a great job in portraying her.

It's well written, but I always think it's too bland.

It's finished, congratulations, I'm done spreading flowers

Is there a Shen Nong? What are you writing about? Is it edible? 🪖

Extensive use of flat narration, the article has a clear context, and the richness of story emotions is expressed in the narration of flat talk. Personally, I feel that the author has a strong literary foundation, the subject matter is relatively small, and he is a new author, so the results may not be good. Come on, author, after you finish this book well and accumulate popularity, the next one should be popular if the subject matter and writing style are well matched.

Good luck authorｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

Thanks for the invitation. I was scared when I saw the update three days ago. It would be better to just run away.

Talk about sweet love and save the world

Is this the end?

Is the author serious about clearing the first copy with three stars so easily?