A Romantic Comedy Where the Cannon Fodder Male Lead Will Never Win

What should I say? I read half of it in one day. Apart from the acceptable description of the heroine's appearance, there are too many problems with the plot of this book. I will list them one by one below. 1. System issues (1) The system is conscious Although I read in the book that there may be a tendency for the system to be the heroine, but at present, the system talks a lot and has a small increase effect, which is extremely restrictive. For example, that fucking otaku halo, I know the author may have set it up because he didn't want the protagonist to be so disturbed by women other than the heroine, but this is too ridiculous. (2) The system function description is unclear I have read almost half of it, but my understanding of the system's functions is still not very clear. At the end of the first volume, the protagonist talks to the system and inexplicably mentions that the system is the incarnation of the "will of the world". It can have the effect of going back in time, which is a bit too deus ex machina. 2. Problems with role creation (1) Problems with the creation of the male protagonist This male protagonist is too old-fashioned and too strong. I can see the flow of luck, I had a master in my past life, I can control the rise and fall of large financial groups to a certain extent, I can deal with ordinary people at will, I can make money by betting my own hands in the casino, and there is a third job that sounds very mysterious - probably exorcism or something like that. Where did this urban soldier king come from? This male protagonist is exactly the kind of urban male protagonist who is a military king or a miracle doctor, and is a rigid combination of the male protagonist template of modern light novels, which creates a serious sense of déjà vu. (2) Problems with the portrayal of Saeko Hoshimiya At the beginning, the author emphasized that Saeko Hoshimiya was aloof and cold, but when facing the male protagonist, she seemed quite normal. Then why doesn't she communicate with others at school? This question was raised in the book, and I was quite curious, but the author did not give an explanation. Then the author wrote that the male protagonist felt very dangerous when touching Saeko Hoshinomiya, making it seem like she was very mysterious. I thought it would give an interesting reason based on her cold behavior before, but the explanation given by the author was simply that Saeko Hoshimiya is very strong. And the most outrageous thing is the reason why she doesn't agree with her mother and that teacher being together. She laid a lot of groundwork before, including some bad premonitions and evil spirits, but the result is that she will feel lonely after her mother remarries, which is really anticlimactic. 3. Plot issues (1) Issues in Volume 1 After the death of the first pure love couple assisted by the male protagonist, the male protagonist only has one hour to convince the woman in the couple to overcome her psychological shadow and confess to the man. The book said that this was so difficult and the time was so short. I thought the male protagonist was going to do something unexpected, but in the end he rushed over and started talking! Yes, such a difficult thing was solved by talking! I was really disappointed. (2) Questions of the second volume The second volume can actually be explained clearly in one sentence: the former head of a certain family tried to control Hoshinomiya Saeko through evil spirits. Why control? Because he has to find a bodyguard for his little granddaughter, which is already ridiculous. Then why are you looking for Saeko Hoshimiya? Because Saeko Hoshimiya is a strong person. Why do you know she is a strong person? I forgot the specifics, but it seemed to be the aura of a strong man or something. What is this? And from what I can see, these things seem to have nothing to do with Saeko Hoshimiya trying to prevent her mother from getting married for the second time. The whole plot seems boring and disconnected. Not to mention that the author also added the conspiracy of the four major families into it, and the story about Kisaragi Walnut becoming the head of the Kisaragi family in order to save the protagonist, etc., Which is not the point at all. In general, I personally think that the author should not think about adding too many elements to the book, but should subtract well, make the candy good, and write the plot in a simpler way.

This book can still be looked forward to, but I personally still feel that there are some immature aspects 1. The positioning of the system is too vague. If the anthropomorphic upgradeable system is not used as a foreshadowing, it feels that anthropomorphism is of little significance simply as a task publisher and time backtracking tool; 2. The cool points are also not clear enough: The protagonist's original ability is weakened at the beginning, and the system directly backhands and adds a debuff; The system's punishment mechanism has given me a sense of discomfort at being controlled by the system, not to mention a system that has not been able to give the protagonist a clear effect so far. I have reason to suspect that the system is an insider; After completing the first mission, there was no improvement for the protagonist itself, but for the improvement of the system. Originally this was not a big problem, but combined with the first two points mentioned above, ๑•́₃•̀๑, I feel a little uncomfortable. Another point is that the function of completing the task is to get back my own power, which is a bit like the illusion of something that was originally my own, being robbed and then getting it back. However, there are also advantages. The author's ability to reverse roles and highlight the charm of "bad women" is still there. For this reason, I will keep reading. Come on, author, spit out the manuscript you saved!

. . . What the hell are you writing about?

This novel seemed good at the beginning, but Chapter 43 directly persuaded people to quit. People are originally social animals, but now it is okay to directly clear the memory. Even if they set up a false friendship, the experience together is real. It is really disgusting to delete it at any time. In the end, the protagonist is still alone? Forced to have no friends? I read this kind of light novel to see the various experiences and bonds formed, not the kind of stud novel that has no friends and only revolves around women.

What is the situation and how old are you still writing the system like this? ? ? What is that at the end of Chapter 1? Are you filming idol love Korean dramas? ? ? Too cliche? In reality, your teeth will be knocked out. Novels can be divorced from reality, but bye bye

The system's text-based dialogues are already very poisonous, so why don't you create a punishment mechanism? . .

I hope the author will continue to persevere. I have read the latest chapter. The novel is very good, especially the role of the senior sister is very well created.

This is quite well written, why are there so many bad reviews? It's said that he is a working man, but the original protagonist's circle of friends can't advance the plot at all. Wouldn't it be more awkward if he helps people he doesn't know to fall in love?

Ah, this, the first chapter intentionally or unintentionally persuaded me to quit. It's really your fault.

I prefer Hatsuno to Kisaragi, although she is not very beautiful but her heart is pure. She is my ideal partner. A good-looking body is just for lust. Only a pure heart is the most important. I feel like the protagonist suffered a big loss and got a good-looking skin.

It's really outrageous. After the task is completed, other people's memories will be cleared directly. People will be sent to another world and told to work. There will be punishments if they don't work. If you do, you will be rewarded. You will be forgotten by everyone. You have no hope and no goal, nb

I can't even stand Chapter 3, it's so embarrassing

Am I raising a eunuch?

The beginning of the second volume is so boring😭😭

I can barely read it. After reading the first few chapters, why is the system the male protagonist? So much drama

Um, so few people have read this book?

There are inexplicable self-talks, strange narrations, and systematic anthropomorphic chatter. There are really more than one. It is a very boring reading experience. I feel that as an author, I am not here to tell stories.

Just tell me if it's broken, I just subscribed

It's pretty good, but many people can't stand that the protagonist will be forgotten after completing the mission.

The three golden chapters are written like this, and the book is hopeless.

Brothers, this smell is too strong and I can't stand it. This male protagonist gives me the feeling that the male protagonist in the brainless novel a few years ago is too strong. Especially in the casino, I'm going to fucking vomit. Bye, bye, it's so poisonous. Goodbye by fate 😰😰