Be Free from Naruto

If you like to set it yourself, you can write an original one. Otherwise, it would not be fun to take advantage of a fan and still have to play with the set you set!

I wrote it according to this timeline, which is more consistent, except that the death time of the Second Hokage is a bit unreasonable, but you have a basis for saying it is reasonable. There were too many bugs in Kishimoto's early stage, especially the timeline issue. In fact, it was very difficult for the Second Hokage to deal with it. 😐

Eight of the ten Naruto books have Tsunade as the heroine. Can we not have the heroine? Isn't this perverted? Tsunade just falls in love with a child. Is this an insult to Tsunade or someone else? Isn't it good to grow and become stronger? After getting married, is she still a free person? ? ?

Why are most of the protagonists good-looking, handsome and so on? How unconfident are you?🤔

I don't know if you remember what you wrote in the first chapter. From the seed of "freedom" planted by the disgust with Tsunade Jiraiya's argument at the beginning, to the protagonist's various performances after getting the mask, and the hatred for Kushina, after writing so much foreshadowing, in the end, Uzumaki Mito came out with a so-called "betrothal gift" scroll and changed the protagonist's mentality? ? ? ? ? The protagonist sees Tsunade unable to walk, right? If the protagonist pretends to be okay, author, take a look at what you wrote next? Doesn't your protagonist look like a clown who jumps around repeatedly? One day, I assassinated Danzo out of revenge, and the next day, he was related to Tsunade and gave me benefits. Let's just let it go? Why are you always thinking about forcing Tsunade? You have to have a kid to drive a big car, right?

Abuser + self-pleasure, slip away ~ slip away

In the third golden chapter, the young protagonist's parents died in the war and he became an orphan. Then he was old enough to go to ninja school. Because of his young age, the protagonist decided to grow up obscenely and not be a waste. Hook well. The result... In the personal introduction session, the young protagonist said in front of the whole class of students and teachers that his ideal is freedom. Absolute freedom. (Protagonist: I want to be a rebellious ninja, and Konoha's rules must not be violated by me)

I just want to know if the heroine is a steel hand. I only read the previous part. I feel that the protagonist and the steel hand are too warm. If so, I will give up and insist on my child driving a big car. Is the steel hand so beautiful? The character is not good. Could it be that the protagonist has breast control? This is very undesirable. Moreover, there cannot be an original heroine, or even Orochimaru can be the heroine. At least she has the same aspirations as the protagonist.

Why do we need to eat when we are alive? ! No! This is not free! ! !

I want freedom, I want freedom to kill and set fire, I want freedom to buy for zero dollars, anyone who dares to resist and refuse to die obediently is blocking my freedom 😂

I'm super addicted to the plot. Uchiha Hinata and Hitahashi know part of the protagonist's affairs, but Tsunade doesn't know anything about it. The medical department of the frontline camp was actually harassed like this? There are various mysteries surrounding the protagonist. As soon as he came out of the root, the root was attacked. Chiyo's target is Tsunade, but she only brings one Ye Cang with her. The protagonist runs away, but Chiyo pursues her, instead of surrounding and killing Tsunade first? Aren't you afraid of being run away? Anyway, all kinds of crazy operations

Playing with puppets in Konoha, I don't want to say anything more.

After reading three chapters, he was poisoned and died, a declaration of admission, and I spoke out what was in my heart. But the author always asked my protagonist to be a little more cautious. Unexpectedly, he died of poison immediately, and then one thousand taels can be recharged with ten gold coins. It doesn't matter if you change it to precious metals. Money is made of hard materials and is not worth anything at all.

Well, I think a time traveler with a system should have a very strong character. Otherwise, if you have a system and are always humble and tolerate other people's bad character, it will easily make people feel that you are licking others, and it will be more frustrating, right? Then it is better not to have this system. As for Tsunade, she is addicted to drinking and gambling, and she always loses. In contrast to the protagonist who wants to amass money crazily and become stronger, she has a violent and strong personality, and is prone to conflicts with the protagonist. When two people are together, one of them must compromise. In order to please the heroine, it is often the protagonist who compromises. I think this is very boring. If you don't grasp it well, it can easily become a licking story. Moreover, Tsunade admires Senju Hashirama very much and values ​​the village more than herself, which conflicts with the protagonist's ideology. Therefore, I think the heroine of the system novel has a dependent personality, gentle and considerate, and everything is centered on her husband. She regards her husband as more important than other things. In this regard, I think Hinata in Naruto is more suitable, although this is impossible, after all, she is not born yet, I am just giving an example. There are also many people who say that the heroine is Hinata and fellow Hokage fans will vomit if they find a new heroine. I have nothing to say. I still feel that this kind of personality is not easy to break down or conflict with, and it is not easy to annoy people.

Jiraiya keeps Kyukina under his wing, will Minato explode?

I think we should consider changing the cover🙂🙂

It's really poisonous ~ Xiao Baiwen, has no common sense about Hokage.

If you want to play with puppets, there are many good templates in many games, such as the demon puppet Sword Demon in Genshin Impact. Think about it, there is a samurai-shaped puppet in Naruto that is unkillable and indestructible and has a huge facial mask. It can also use ice and wind attributes and can clone itself. Isn't the style of painting not inconsistent at all? But recently I heard a news that the unreleased Thunder General puppet is in a cooler state😂

Even Shen Nong couldn't bear it. He was so stubborn, but his self-introduction immediately caught people's attention. This book is making money. With Konoha's investigative power, it is impossible not to know that it is you, a commoner child, who defeated Uchiha and published a book. What kind of talent are you? !

The author is so talented. He writes so well. How do you persevere?

When I opened the bookshelf, I felt something was wrong.

It's too poisonous, Naruto's writing is too dreamy and simple

I think it's well written, why are there still people confused about the setting of the original work and the fanfic? To put it bluntly, fan fiction is a secondary creation based on the story background of the original work. There must be many differences from the original work. When we read these, we can regard them as the author's secondary settings. If everything in the fan fiction is the same as the original work, then there is no need to read the fan fiction. Wouldn't it be better to read the original work directly?

Well written, that 2-column is the heroine, right?😁😁

Stop updating for a month. Then finish it directly. Already entered the palace. Already tried poison

First: Poison Second: Filial Son and Great Grandson Third: RZ

The mid-to-late game of playing with attribute points is better, author Mouse Tail Juice

I have a question: How to ensure that the protagonist uses the puppet master in Konoha without being beaten to death by his own people?

Not once, I was persuaded to quit after reading the first chapter, and I read it several times. , I don't know what happens next.

The system is good lj, there is no passion for krypton gold at all, it's just about what you get during this period of time