League of Legends: Please Stop Carrying!

This is the author himself, just to reiterate. This book is purely for entertainment, and the author is just a comedian. The content is not directed at any real club or person. If any meme is used inappropriately, the author, being a coward, will be given a direct 🇫🇷 military salute 🏳️. Since this is a fanfiction, there may be oversights and bugs sometimes. Please feel free to point them out! And please be gentle with your criticism. I will do my best to write a good book, so...

There's no need to criticize, it's alright. It's just that the female lead is a bit awkward; try to reduce the romantic scenes. Occasionally weaving in some flirtatious interactions or female streamer commentary would be fine to smooth things out. Also, that last Pantheon game was really bad; the teammates were terrible, he went invisible and the game ended…

The content is alright, but I think the female lead is too awkward. It would be better if she didn't appear at all. If a game-themed novel is going to be successful, it either needs a female lead who rides the wave of popularity, or it needs to focus on writing about the game itself.

I really don't want to watch Zhou Shuyi being bothered every day.

Based on the League of Legends fanfiction I've read before, the more famous ones are either those with good tactical analysis and game descriptions, or those with a smooth plot and clear, satisfying moments, like those featuring cheat codes.

Those who follow are mostly there for the esports aspect. Let me ask you this: can your urban romance writing compare to those who specialize in urban dramas? So it's not that you can't write it, but it's best not to write too much.

Women can be easily manipulated; don't get emotionally involved. Faker and Scout said it well: Esports doesn't need love! P. S. I'd like to see the main character interact with the guys on the Anti-Japanese War forum. The recent activity where Zoom and Ice Emperor read each other's Anti-Japanese War forum comments was quite interesting; it really shows how close people are to Bengbu.

I just finished watching the Spring Finale. I just have a tiny question. The title said that the teammate was too good, so they could only win by being carried, but the result was that Faker was just a nobody. The introduction describes a god of character. After the match, he continued to make harsh remarks to his opponent who had just lost, kicking them while they were down.

My personal suggestion is that if you can't write romance, don't write a female lead. Chapters 19 and 20 were too awkward. Why is the protagonist, who is only 18, in such a hurry to find a female lead? Is he in a rush to have a third child? Most readers of this type don't care whether the protagonist has a girlfriend or not.

Can you please stop bringing up Bai Xixi?