
When Did Health Bars Start Appearing in This World?
这个世界什么时候有血条显示了
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Alas! Miss Fox ran away again!
Successfully cutting off the channel connecting Chaos to the universe should have been something worth celebrating, but accidents often happen inadvertently, in a form that no one expected, just like the scene in front of Gu Mo at this moment - The birth of human evil. The person in front of him looks the same as Tamamo Mae, but Gu Mo knows that "inside" has changed. She is no longer the right-hand man who accompanies him to control the moon sea and ascend to the true country, but the Nine-Tailed Hime God who possesses the divinity of the sun and is about to destroy everything he cares about. High-energy storms are surging in this space, just like his complicated mood. Tamamo, what should I do... Should I destroy you? "Extinction is the norm, survival is the exception!" With the declaration of human evil, the brilliance of the sun seemed to be taken away, and the entire sun dimmed at a speed visible to the naked eye. At the same time, the glorious human form became more and more dazzling, as if all the endless sunlight was gathered here, the light and heat were cheering, praising, and praising the birth of a brand new 'sun'! At this moment, on the surface of the planet, the endless darkness seems to have swallowed up everything. As long as the creatures on the ground hear the proud laughter of 'Tamazo Mae', they will become puppets with no sense of joy and sorrow. Whether they are humans, goblins, or other fantasy species, their minds are too small in front of His huge spirit. It is as simple as turning the pages of a book. As for their so-called resistance, it is useless under this great power. They can only let it wave and write at will. "You will follow me next." 'Tamamo Mae' smiled slightly and turned her gaze to Gu Mo, looking like a good wife and mother, but there was no smile in her eyes. Instead, they revealed a cruel and bloody taste, just like a hunter looking at the prey that is about to step into a trap. "Star destruction method, right?" The magic method that once destroyed the god Zeus is now counterattacking itself, but its scale and power are not as good as before. Is the opponent playing cat and mouse, or... … A flash of light flashed in Gu Mo's eyes, and the Earthly Evil Technique was operating at full strength. An endless stream of air escape techniques, avatars, and divination predictions were used to recreate the scene of the original battle with Yokai Sakura—— It is not the art of clones, which can be transformed into millions, but it is the art of air confinement, which will not hurt; Occasionally, the false form changes, which can be large or small, and has thousands of changes; you can also send a staff to replace the form to transfer the damage; More Not to mention separation, marriage, marriage, formation, etc., The star power exerted by the sovereignty of the sun advances and retreats freely, strolling in the courtyard, as if the endless light, the heat that boils the sea and burns the sky, and the infinite electromagnetic radiation are not worth mentioning! "It's so nostalgic!" 'Tamamo Mae' seemed to have remembered something, the smile on her face became more and more dangerous, and she praised in a tone that was so gentle that it seemed to freeze everything. In fact, every step was like dancing on the tip of a knife. Gu Mo tried his best to avoid the bombardment of light beams one after another, but in his mind, he recalled the scene when Tamamo Mae said goodbye - 'This is good, Master. ' 'Tamamo is really happy to meet you,' It turns out that I have become accustomed to this little fox acting coquettishly and mischievously around me. It makes me dumbfounded every time, and I have to deal with the aftermath for her; It turns out that I always I ignored the beautiful figure beside me, who was always by her side and never left her, but only when I lost her did I realize that I couldn't live without her company; It turned out that there was an extra person in my heart, who came quietly but only knew my heartache when she left... I will definitely save you! "I've got you!" 'Tamamo-mae' suddenly appeared in a flash, and then attacked with her body, her five fingers turned into claws, and she swung down viciously. Her long and sharp nails shone with a metallic matte, vowing to pierce the opponent's chest in one fell swoop! Facing this dangerous blow, Gu Mo did not dodge, letting the attack that was filled with all the opponent's magic power, will, and spirit, and condensed to the extreme, penetrate the original divine body. Almost instantly, the conceptual defense was broken through, the divine flesh was torn, the blood near the wound instantly evaporated, and the muscles showed signs of carbonization. The flames from the sun were transformed by the divine power. , Burning every inch of flesh and blood, every cell, and even the soul from the inside out... "No!!!" The heart-wrenching screams echoed in the spiritual sea. Tamamo Mae, who had been resisting with all his strength, turned completely red at this moment, and the pupils in his eyes stood up, as if he was a gambler who had lost everything, desperately trying to drag the other person into hell. 'Tamamo Mae' had to put more effort into suppressing the crazy counterattack, and even the strike that was supposed to be made up was disturbed and delayed for a moment. Just as a small horseshoe determines the direction of a kingdom, it is often just a small factor that determines the outcome of a battle. Whether you can seize this opportunity is the key to victory or defeat, and Gu Mo seized this momentary opportunity. "No, I caught you!" Gu Mo pulled away the arm that penetrated the heart, pulled Tamamo Mae into his arms, ignored her look of shock and anger, and kissed her deeply. A strange power rose up from him, and in the disbelief of 'Tamamo Mae', it turned into shackles wrapped around her body - Divinity, seal! Spell, seal! All abilities, even precious phantoms, are sealed at this moment! The sealing technique of the alien spirit from the clone became a life-saving straw at this moment. With the crazy blessing of the "Human Intelligence Integration Style", it was sublimated into a total sealing technique that transcended common sense, putting an end to this sudden battle. … Sea of the Moon, the emperor's palace. "Master, take the medicine~" Miss Fox was holding a bowl of dark soup, still looking so full of energy, as if the previous accident had not left any blow to her. However, when Gu Mo heard this, he couldn't help but be startled, and then his head was full of black lines. After all, Pan Jinlian's famous sayings were really popular, and Miss Fox had a lot of criminal records. No wonder he thought of that... Tamamo Mae seemed to be unaware, picked up a spoonful of soup, carefully blew it to cool down, and then put it to his mouth, staring at Gu Mo, frowning and drinking the medicine in one mouthful before nodding with satisfaction. "Master, why didn't you do it then?" Putting the bowl aside, Tamamo Mae Suiwa asked unintentionally, but the pair of secretly erect fox ears on her head clearly revealed her nervous mood. Gu Mo was silent for a while, watching Miss Fox moving around, her fluffy ears in ecstasy, as if touching them, they were really cute, just like a little hamster moving around - Ahem! Looking at Tamamo Mae's increasingly nervous look, Gu Mo came back to his senses and coughed two or three times, then pretended to have a calm expression and replied calmly: "Of course it's because you are my companion! Or it's because What?" Tamanamae puffed up her cheeks in dissatisfaction, looked at Gu Mo who turned his head away, rushed forward and gently hit his chest with his small fist, and shouted angrily: "Liar! Master is a big liar!" Gu Mo touched the smooth fox ears and couldn't put them down for a moment. Satisfied, he looked at the little fox lying on him who had stopped playing, recalling her past experiences. In a daze, he seemed to see a person who had been lost in the long years. , A tired figure who was constantly pursuing love, a feeling of pity surged into his heart: "Tamazao, I will always be by your side." Tamazao did not reply, but looked at him deeply, and the attachment in his eyes seemed to overflow. The room fell silent, and the two of them stayed in this position, leaning on each other, like polar bears keeping each other warm in the cold ice fields in winter. As time moved forward step by step, Gu Mo felt fatigue slowly creeping in, and his eyelids seemed to be getting heavier and heavier. He slowly closed his eyes and seemed to fall asleep. Tamazo Mae narrowed her eyes, enjoying the quiet moment to herself, without having to worry about the annoying black long straight miko coming to disturb her, with the fluffy fox tail dangling behind her, just as she was in a happy mood at the moment. She rested her head on Gu Mo's chest, feeling the beating heartbeat, but her expression was rare and peaceful. Looking at Gu Mo who was sleeping tiredly, Miss Fox gently stroked his sleeping face and whispered in his ears with a charming voice that was almost whispering - "Tamamo is so cute~" "I love you the most!" "I love you~Mastet~" Floating City, shrine. Platycodon platycodon was sitting in the middle, closing his eyes and concentrating, trying to calm down his uneasy mind because Gu Mo suddenly fell into a deep sleep. A burst of heartache suddenly came over him. Kikyo touched her heart gently, and the warning from her spiritual sense made her alert. Then she thought of someone sleeping, and a trace of sadness could not help but appear on her face. She looked into the distance and murmured to herself: "What happened?" PS: It's finally finished, T_T, it's really hard to write, especially the battle part, it's a hard work, but I can learn from it,_(•̀ω•́ ∠)_ PS2: There are too many proper nouns, and I don't remember them when I write them. I have to go back and look them up. I envy people with good memories, (づ ̄³ ̄)づ PS3: My writing power is limited, Bojun smiled~
I can't bear it anymore, I suggest you start reading from Chapter 12
The first 12 chapters are extremely polarizing. Old fans keep turning away, while new readers force themselves to continue following the book despite being ridiculed and uncomfortable. Are you really going to recruit old fans to wash your hands? Forced transformation, cognitive impairment, and lack of logic. Let me just say one thing, does this author often engage in cognitive impairment, and it is particularly strong, so that the protagonist forcibly loses his subjective initiative? Ask yourself, don't wash it hard. Also, you emphasized that the protagonist is a normal person, so you wouldn't take out your phone to take a photo or video? No Internet access hinders these functions? Afterwards, I will show it to others and say, hey, this forest is nice, why don't we go and play at night? Why don't you, a normal person, take a photo? Do you still insist on insisting that you are a normal person? Then why is there no mention of normal people's verification practices? Is it all psychological stress? It's better to start reading directly from Chapter 12. At least you won't feel uncomfortable. The first 11 chapters will not affect your reading at all. Thank you for the personal reminder. I also read it in person and highly recommend starting from Chapter 12.
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The Day the Dragon God Disappeared Chapter 2
Just as Shenqi was secretly cheering herself up, Kikyo, who had hidden her figure with the help of a time gap, also came out. Her body's self-healing ability was restrained. With the help of Hagoromo alone, not even half of her injuries were healed at this moment, but the miko still endured the pain and prepared for the next step. She seemed to be transformed into the bright moon, her whole body glowing with light, her clothes flying like the Dunhuang flying fairy in the mural, and five treasures surrounding her, shining brightly. Fire Rat Fur. Stone bowl in front of the Buddha. Dragon Head Jade. Anbei, the son of Yan. Penglai Jade Branch. As well as the Goddess's Feather Clothes and the Mirror of Life on Platycodon, the abridged version of the time-stopping spell learned from Gu Mo - the Mirror Shisui Technique - was activated. With the cooperation of the power of the Platycodon Goddess and two gold-level high-level magic weapons, this technique that has been reduced to a strategic level has not reached the original world-class level of exaggeration, but it is probably enough to deal with the current situation... --but it is probably enough. "???" As the god of the demon world, Shen Qi naturally did not have her own time stopped by Ming Jing Zhisui, but the seal that imprisoned her was within the scope of influence. The effect was stopped at that moment, and the seal's effectiveness was directly solidified forever, just like the indestructible background board in the game, which was equivalent to her being completely locked up. If you want to break through this static seal, you have to let time flow again. Under the blessing of the full moon, carrying two gold-level magic weapons and consuming almost no energy, the witch almost has the upper hand... Shen Qi looked at the bright moon. She was stunned, and she could actually operate like this, which directly dumbfounded the Demon Goddess who had not experienced much fighting. She angrily used various methods, but failed to escape the predicament in front of her. She could only raise her head in dissatisfaction, pouted her mouth, and angrily condemned the miko's behavior: "Cheating! You cheated! " Jikyo ignored the other person's child-like behavior and asked directly: "Who are you?" (I am the god of the demon world - Shen Qi or something, it's embarrassing to say it!) "What are you doing here?" (To find a father for Xiao Ai, of course!) "What's the purpose?" (To capture him back, of course! Damn it! We lost!) Miss Miko ignored the words of 'the defeated general' and asked in a deep voice. But the girl with silver hair and silver eyes turned away angrily, as if she didn't speak anymore. Jikyo frowned. Although he successfully exploited the opponent's mentality of underestimating the enemy and locked her in this static world, he must also admit that he really had nothing to do with her at the moment. Almost none of the spells he mastered could cause decisive damage to the opponent. 'Do you want to take a chance...' Recalling the last counterattack before Shen Jiuye disappeared, the power of time that directly caused everything in the world to decay and collapse, Kikyo weighed it in his mind for a long time and hesitated. She looked at Shen Qi, who was in jail, and seemed to want to say something, but she was keenly aware of something and seemed to have thought of something. In the end, she said nothing and just stared at Shen Qi calmly. That look is so annoying! Even if she was caught in a dilemma, Miss Shenqi still refused to admit defeat, especially the look in her eyes that aroused her inner grievance. She looked at Kikyo with eyes full of dissatisfaction: "You are the one who is arrogant! After all, you are just a human being!!" There was a hint of crying in the angry voice. Jikyo sighed secretly, her eyes couldn't help but soften. She seemed to be able to see the figure of a certain fox lady on Shenqi, the same enthusiasm and liveliness, the same vitality... At the moment when the shrine maiden was distracted, an extraordinary feeling filled the air. The originally stationary talismans all returned to the normal flow of time, and then reached the end in the rapid passage of time, and were burned one by one... "Is this?!" "It's you?!" Shen Qi's exclamation immediately made Kikyo realize that there were others in the dark, and subconsciously took action to force the other party to act, but in the blink of an eye , Shen Qi, who had broken through the restraints, had already come directly to kill him—— "Get out of the way!" Shen Qi only had eyes for the Dragon God who had disappeared for an unknown number of years. This time, she had no intention of holding back. The power to move mountains and seas; The boundless magic power; The lightning speed; Finally transformed into the purest ultimate power—— Destruction! Face this terrifying attack, Kikyo felt an indescribable trembling feeling from the bottom of her heart. The physical fear infected every cell in her body, and her spiritual sense beyond ordinary people reminded her crazily at this moment—— Danger! Danger! ! Danger! ! ! But now Gu Mo was behind her, how could she get out of the way so easily! Jikyo's cold face remained the same as before, but a trace of determination flashed in her eyes. Without hesitation, she activated all her spiritual power at once, building a defensive barrier with the highest strength that she could achieve, and enveloping herself and the Dragon God in it. "Master!" A charming voice sounded. Then the roar of the explosion drowned out all sounds, and the atmosphere was completely torn apart in an instant, turning into a howling storm that surged in all directions. The ground and walls seemed to have been ravaged by giant beasts from the wild, and in the deafening roar, they shattered and dissipated like sand castles at high tide. Tamamo Mae, who arrived immediately, was shocked. He covered his face with his hands, and the magic power of his whole body burst out, setting off a strong storm around him. Unexpectedly, in this situation, he relied on the powerful magic power to stop the aftermath of the storm. Even so, the entire room was still as if a large-yield nuclear bomb had been directly detonated. The walls, ground, etc. Were completely shattered directly in front of the shock wave. The resulting strong shock caused the entire city to visibly shake. If it were not for the construction of the city, both the design and materials were at the highest level in the empire. With the addition of magic technology, they also considered how to deal with various extreme situations. In this case, this impact far beyond the normal level was enough to cause the Predator's spacecraft to disintegrate directly in space... The residents in the city felt this unprecedented shock, and looked surprised and uncertain. After all, since the moment the floating city was built, such a thing had never happened. The people were at a loss and didn't know what to do. Some devout believers knelt down directly on the ground and prayed to the Dragon God they believed in. After being pushed a few meters away, Tamamo Mae stopped and pulled her calf out of the ground. Looking at the mess in front of her, Miss Fox's eyes suddenly sharpened, with a dangerous light shining in her eyes, vaguely smelling of blood. "... Is gone." As the smoke and dust dissipated, a voice of gnashing teeth sounded, and the moment you heard it, you felt like a danger signal was rising. "So does the witch." At this moment, the throne was already empty. The Dragon God who was supposed to be sleeping here was nowhere to be found, and so were the two warring parties. Only the jealous ones were left, shouting "Not good! Not good! Xiaoyu smelled the secret of the affair. Taste!", "Damn! The fox can see through it all!", "It's up to me to kill or behead you, Master!" Tamamo-mae, who was holding his head in hysterics, looked at each other at this scene, not knowing what to do. The rapid reaction force... "What... What should we do now?" William Adams, who had unknowingly sneaked into the position of captain, pressed his temples with a headache, looked at the bewildered eyes of the surrounding team members asking for help, sighed helplessly, and gave the order: " Stay where you are! Wait until His Highness Hidechiyo comes." Feeling the rising murderous intent over there, William seemed to be back in the cold and damp Tower of London prison, and the sense of precariousness lingered in his heart again, making his whole body tremble involuntarily. 'Your Highness, please come early! ' As for Hidechiyo, he is still on his way to the Floating City. "This is..." The awakened Platycodon looked at this strange scenery blankly—— Like a magnificent miracle of nature, a network of crisscrossing roots spreads into the distance. When you look up, what you see is the colorful root system. The huge sea of trees is boundless and seems to cover the entire earth. The most surprising thing is that most of the tree roots here are extremely huge, and the smallest ones are as big as several people can hug each other. It is conceivable how huge the tree itself is. It is not an exaggeration to say that it is a sacred tree that only exists in myths. And the pure spiritual energy flowing on it is not as good as even the era tree in Maple Village. Platycodon looked up at the sky - It was not a full moon. Or the night sky without stars and moon. It seems that I have entered a new world. Looking back, I chased the other person into a strange time and space tunnel, but met a blond girl on the way. Then I only remember being stared at by countless strange eyes, laughing and sarcastic, and my consciousness sank into darkness. , When I woke up, I was in this strange space... The next moment, a violent explosion suddenly came from the distance. Kikyo looked over, as if she had noticed something. She raised her eyebrows, thought for a moment, and then moved forward there. In this sea of trees, several girls were fighting hard, taking away hundreds of enemies with each blow. However, facing a monster group with enough numbers to cover the sky, this damage was really insignificant. The monsters seemed to have no fear, and attacked one after another like locusts. There were several extremely huge individuals among them, and their combat power was far superior to other small individuals. Under such a tireless offensive, the front line that the girls managed to maintain had to gradually retreat, and it would not be too far away from complete collapse. 'The strange creatures seem to be some kind of special creation, and there seems to be a certain relationship between the small monsters and the large individuals. ' Platycodon grandiflorum stood on a huge tree root in the distance. From here, you could have a panoramic view of the entire battlefield. It was an excellent position to observe the situation. PS: There is actually a limit of 5,000 words, OTZ, it can only be split up PS2: I don't know if there are talents in this world, _(•̀ω•́ ∠)_ PS3: The writing power is limited, Bojun smile~
(❀」╹□╹)」*・Well... I got engaged today. I want to say to you, thank you all for supporting me all the time.
I just read Chapter 9 and couldn't help but post a book review. I hope it will be helpful to the author and readers. (There are only nine chapters, so there are no spoilers or in-depth information. It is for reference only. The logical order of this book review is: subjective feelings, thoughts on this type of novel, and based on this, expectations and negative points about this book) Subjective feelings: Speaking of the perception of Chapter 9, I am now in a state of looking forward to the world view setting of this story but being choked by the characters that are not very matching. Thoughts on this type of novel: In the content of these nine chapters, it is generally a kind of novel where it is obvious that the protagonists are all abnormal but I have no idea about it due to chance. There are also premonitions such as fighting with the air and dihua. The coolness of this type of book comes from the ever-increasing information gap between the two conflicting parties, and the process of dramatic balance of the final information gap (you can refer to Bone King to think about what you are looking forward to when watching Bone King). This is more interesting than pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, because the protagonist is the one who is disappointed by the one-sided information, and the God is the one who is disappointed by the two-way information. What builds this information gap is the world view of the work, the character's personality and the matching thinking and behavior. About expectations I really want to know what kind of existence the protagonist is, whether he has traveled to a parallel game world, or something else. In short, the author gave me a feeling that the appearance of the health bar is not just a simple background board. The author may have prepared something in the world view. About the poisonous points or the parts that don't match well: The character's behavior does not match the personality, or it does not match the world view. The behavior of this protagonist is too exaggerated compared to the previous foreshadowing, or the previous few pictures did not give sufficient reasons to explain why the protagonist can still think it is his fantasy when facing such a real impact. And because the author has written a lot of psychological descriptions, this sense of abruptness is very strong For example, in the animated version of Pokemon, Team Rocket often gets blown away. When writing fan fiction, if the world view set by the author is close to the real world, then it will generally be said that in the world of Pokemon, people have good physiques and strong resistance to attacks, and the behavior of the protagonist and supporting characters is closer to reality, and then there will basically be no plots of being blown away. If the world view set by the author is very loose and close to the original version, then it must be that most people in this environment behave off-line, and then Team Rocket can fly around casually, because it is not obtrusive and matches. Talking back to this novel, when the protagonist discovers a strange voice in his head, and discovers that he only wakes up for eight hours a day, the author's solution is to ask the protagonist to see a doctor. The logic is: the protagonist discovers something strange - the doctor says everything is normal - the diagnosis conflicts with his own understanding - the protagonist corrects his own understanding and believes that he has a mental illness. Through such a logical chain, the protagonist is prevented from realizing the strangeness of his body. But this logic is not rigorous. Considering the content of the novel, the earlier part of the novel is not enough to explain why the protagonist, despite discovering an obvious supernatural phenomenon like a blood bar, still felt that he had a mental problem and had almost no suspicion at all. If we can use a paragraph to describe the protagonist's experience of such a real fantasy, or give a reason based on the world view that readers will find reasonable after entering it, then the subsequent plot and psychological description will be reasonable. The more coincidence there is, the more rigorous logic is needed to construct it to make the coincidence real and believable. My personal suggestion is to adjust the contents of the first few chapters appropriately according to the world view, especially after the third chapter. I was attracted by the possibilities presented in the first three chapters, but it was also the later chapters that made me a little uncomfortable. On a whim, write carefully, comment casually, and refer carefully.
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Wenwen Daily The two-day battle for the Dragon God has finally come to an end. Now I will bring you the latest news. First, let us interview the person involved, the legendary Dragon God of Gensokyo. "Lord Dragon God, what do you think of this matter?" A small pile of bloody mosaics:... "The mood of the person involved is very stable. We have invited the next participant, Lord Shenqi, the mother of the Dragon God's daughter. Lord Shenqi, what do you think of this matter?" "I'm so stupid, really. I thought I had already won. Who knew they (then looked down at the piece of clothing in my hand), but I can try to restore a doll..." "The following is another heavyweight participant, the founder of Gensokyo, the 17-year-old woman who has been entangled with the Dragon God for hundreds of years, the monster idler Murasaki Yakumo. Murasaki-sama, wait a minute, where did Murasaki-sama go? Forget it, we have the next one, Kazami Yuuka-sama, why are you also participating?" "It seems good to have such a person to fight with me. Although I only got this little, my flesh and blood are very active. I will try it in the flower field after I go back and see if it can grow." "This is the so-called beating, kissing and scolding, love, right? Wait, Yuuka-sama, I was wrong, don't point the magic cannon at me. Let's go interview one of the onlookers, Hakurei Reimu-sama, what do you think of the fate of Ryūgami-sama? Seeing the god you serve become like this, is it inconsistent with the behavior of a miko?" "I deserve it. Who told him to never pay me a salary (the word salary is specially emphasized)." "It seems that this Dragon God is not very popular. Let's ask others. Teacher Huiyin, what do you think of the Dragon God?" "When we first met, I thought Gu Mo was a pretty good person. Later I found out that he's pretty good at teaching." Halfway through his words, Shirasawa Huiyin was covered by Fujiwara Meihong who rushed over. "We have nothing to do with him, no!" Fujiwara Meihong said as she dragged Huiyin away. "It seems like there are stories that have to be told between these two and the Dragon God. That's it for today's Wenwen Daily."