Hong Kong Crime Files: Starting as an Exorcist Detective

After reading this book, well, what can I say? It feels like the protagonist's personality is such that, in order to increase his magical power, he kills all the ghosts, good or bad, without even showing respect to his fellow cultivators or elders. He's also selfish; he goes to Dr. Lin's clinic, where Dr. Lin treats him like a junior apprentice, but he sees him as a big fish, taking large bags of stuff with him.

The protagonist's character is indeed unlikable; he's too selfish and has no principles whatsoever!

The book is good, but the protagonist's character isn't well-developed. The supporting characters are all familiar, but frankly, the protagonist's presence or absence is negligible. For example, the protagonist's lustful nature was ignored; I didn't see any interaction with him. His gaining soul power through slaying demons and monsters is also problematic.

If killing earns points, I have no doubt the protagonist would kill, regardless of whether the victim is innocent or not. The greater the power of such a person, the greater the danger they pose. Goodbye.

The protagonist's personality is not very likable, it's hard to describe.

I feel like I'm straying further and further from the topic. The topic should be something like Taoist magic and exorcising demons. How did it turn into martial arts and police daily life? Especially the latter kind of book, which is already quite tiresome here. If I keep writing this, I'm afraid it will sink before it even goes on sale.

Maoshan isn't ignorant of martial arts, so why do they insist on going to Shaolin?

The film doesn't distinguish between magic and spells, and the protagonist doesn't cultivate Qi, so how can he drive the Thunderclap Fist? Without Qi, how can he possess spirits? Even with a cheat-like ability, how could the protagonist memorize Taoist classics and cultivate them on his own in just one month unless he has a photographic memory? Furthermore, this movie world doesn't allow cultivation (magic), so what exactly is the Nine Chrysanthemums Sect's corpse control technique?

The protagonist gives me the impression that he got arrogant after gaining some power, and he didn't care about the good karma he accumulated from killing so many ghosts.

Author, could you please stop using punctuation so carelessly? It's a perfectly coherent sentence, and you have to add two commas. It's really hard to read! Author, could you please stop using punctuation so carelessly? It's clearly a coherent sentence, and you insist on adding two commas. It's really painful to read!