My Super Talisman System

If I guessed correctly, isn't this an amazing simulator for cultivating immortals? I remember that there are various talismans in the module, and there are also modules for drawing talismans.

It took me watching the protagonist Goldfinger several times to understand it. . . It's too complicated. There is also a Tianyi Zhen Water Talisman that suddenly appears, directly turning into the 12th level of Qi training. To be honest, my thoughts changed too quickly. .

The creativity is OK and the thinking is relatively clear. However, the writing style is a bit immature and needs to be strengthened, especially the character interaction and dialogue, which is too textbook-like and gives people the feeling of reading a text.

5 Lotus Leaves I remember there was a 999 Tianyi Zhenshui before. Why wasn't it depicted? Then I asked about the plug-in Refresh it every day, then compare it, and choose the higher one to keep? Or is it refreshed every day and unable to be retained? Isn't this golden armor brought by a plug-in? That's why it needs to be depicted and preserved? I'm sure there can be more lotus leaves, right? The idea is The cheat cheat brings auxiliary functions, used as a buff, and it gets stronger by refreshing it every day? Xiu Xianxian is temporary, so you have to draw it when it refreshes to 999, otherwise it will become random the next day?

Are these spells and talismans of yours a one-time use or are they written indefinitely? I don't understand. Do you refresh it every day? Can you only draw one drawing with the power doubled or only the first one? I can't even write it down clearly, and what do the numbers mean? Is it a percentage or simply a few hundred times?

It looks like a great immortal cultivation simulator😂

It's so well written. It's much better than the blue and silver entanglement. It's a perfect platinum look! 🤗

This book makes a big mistake at the beginning. There are so many characters appearing at the beginning, and they are all minor characters. Who has the energy to memorize bit parts? The current trend in online novels is to be short, quick, and featureless. It is best not to give too much ink to the story. That just makes the novel boring.

The author's writing style on the battle was weak and weak, which made me embarrassed. 😅

I don't understand what the purpose of taking that woman in is to be a pick-up girl?

Support, hope you can stick to it

Awesome cultivation simulator?

A short story about a running account, it's okay to make into a TV series, but it's really far worse when viewed as a novel.

The pace is so fast, it looks a bit tiring.

Isn't it? This book doesn't even have an advertisement. It's so desolate!

I think it's okay, but I can't understand some parts. First, the part about sending Zhuyan Dan and the two bandits feels inexplicable.

The subject matter is good, the content is too empty, the protagonist looks like a dawdle but not like a dawdle, the plot progression is not reasonable, the content is too little, there are only a few good frameworks, the characters' emotions, the plot is rich, the struggle, the contention, the copy type, etc., The writing lacks thoughtfulness.

What kind of plot is this? Were many chapters deleted in the middle? What is grafting and why are you here to steal things? Nothing is introduced? What do you think of this?

There's nothing bad about it, and there's nothing attractive about it either.

By the way, Super Talisman Master hasn't appeared for a long time.

I have a question. As mentioned earlier, the Tianyi Zhen Water Talisman comes out randomly. Why does it change into the Fire Cloud Talisman after two lines?

Why does the system not appear after paying? The powerful spell at the beginning is gone too.

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It should be written down, but it's a pity.

What do the numbers in parentheses about author quality mean?