Dimensional Games Begin with Overlord

If you write like this, the gap is too big. You have already reached full combat power in the Bone King World. No matter how careful you are, there is no need to be like this.

The overlord chapter started to be very full, and after overlord finished the game, he immediately dived 🤔

This book is now the same as the original DNF, invincible at the beginning, but the result is afraid of this and that. In this way, the author, you can write that it is invincible compared to the reincarnation, but its performance in the dungeon is equivalent to the middle and upper-level combat power of each world, and it gradually becomes stronger in the dungeon. Otherwise, according to the author, your current writing method is no different from this book. You can learn from Mosquito's Paradise of Reincarnation.

I hope the author will not treat everyone as a fool. The protagonist can have plot advantages, but in the world of One Piece, if you inquire a little, you will know about the secret treasure in the sea-Devil Fruit, let alone other worlds. The four trial worlds have not been thoroughly studied after such a long time. I can only think that this dimensional world has a worldwide intelligence-reducing aura.

I looked at the label and saw someone pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. This was very successful. It was indeed a pig, eating a gecko.

Overall, it is quite satisfactory, and the writing level and rhythm are at a standard level. In terms of plot, the early adventures in the Bone King world were a bit disappointing. The dozens of chapters of the story in the dimensional world that followed probably dissuaded many readers who wanted to follow the Bone King fandom. I didn't return to the world of Bone King until the next 50 or 60 chapters, but the story line felt a bit intermittent. It was not until the plot was released that the focus returned to the world of Bone King. I don't know how long this part of the plot will last (Elantier Strategy Battle) Generally speaking, it is okay as a heaven-type novel, but as a Bone King fan, the concentration is still a bit low (for now). Most of the people who clicked in to read this book came because of the title of Bone King, but the excessive plot in the early stage can easily dissuade such readers. It is a little bit toxic (Albedo's description, the dimensional world is overly dependent on firearms), but the overall impact is not great. If you can stick to it, it can be considered a good work.

After reading the previous eight chapters of Bone King, I gave up after reading the last few chapters of Crimson King. The first eight chapters paved the way for an awesome protagonist, but then he made some minor mistakes that he shouldn't have made, and wrote a bunch of original characters and stories that have nothing to do with the comic... The author's mistake was that he shouldn't have paved the way for the Bone King in the first eight chapters, setting expectations too high, and then directly exaggerating, which made people stop watching. It would be okay if the characters and stories were original from the beginning. After using Bone King to attract a lot of people who like Bone King and watch variety comics, it turns out that after the eight chapters of Bone King, the original character is revealed and there are several chapters in a row that are original and have story content that has nothing to do with anime and games. It is basically a result of how many come and go. I won't comment on it until I finish reading it. Let me tell you my review after reading the first ten or so chapters. There are no major negative points, but there are some minor negative points. The first eight chapters are full of expectations, and the last few chapters... Well, it's just like what I said above.

The pig's trotter has an IQ of 60, and the others have an IQ of 20.

The first eight chapters are about the Bone King, and then there are other worlds. After the Bone King becomes invincible, he immediately starts to suppress the protagonist's strength. It's not cool enough. If he is strong enough, why not just conquer the world by himself? He is afraid of being exposed, and he has to follow the team. It's a double standard.

It felt pretty good in the beginning, but starting from the creation of the NPC Donghuang, it felt weird~