DNF: I Am the New Version

The biggest problem with this book is that it is too inconsistent. It is said at the beginning that everyone else's DNF is 60 version. You are already level 100 and are still working as a beggar. Others are pretending to be pigs and eating tigers. You are a pig who suddenly has the power of a tiger, and you are still living the life of a pig.

This kind of protagonist is also called extremely irritable. Stop being funny... From the beginning to the end, all you can see is frustration. What else can the protagonist do besides endure it?

The setting is a good one, but the author is not good at it. The writing is too vicious. In a world where the average person is level 60, I am on tenterhooks. I am deeply afraid that a level 60 "big shot" will come out and kill me. Haha, I laughed to death. I wanted to follow the trend and write a pig-eating tiger style, but ended up writing a pig style, hahaha. I really can't figure it out. I have three skills at level 100, why would I be afraid of someone with level 60 and one skill? Why should I be afraid? Why be afraid? What are you afraid of? The protagonist himself has also played DNF. Does he not know what 60 and 100 mean? Don't know what one uniqueness and three uniquenesses mean? The protagonist himself doesn't know how strong he is. I originally thought it was "the protagonist knows he is very strong, but he didn't expect to be so strong." But it turned out to be a mentality of "I may have some strength, but I may also be defeated", which is a coward. Level 100 is cowardly to level 60.

I think this is a standard apocalyptic story, because zombies eat the protagonist's brain

It's quite creative, but you have to pay attention to the strength of the cheat. You are a level 100 version. Does it mean increased damage and different skills? It is recommended that this thing should be consistent. Otherwise, if you write too fast and the cheat is too large, it will easily overturn.

This layout is too small. Even if you reach level 100, you still have three uniques. Their version is 60. If I am confused, even if all the holy cities are at full level, you will never clear the field with three? And your chicken brother is always available, okay? What is the concept of infinite two consciousnesses? In the version of your setting, when Brother Chicken is summoned, he can use skills. So, just placing a circle can kill them, right? You are still pretending to be a pig here, and you have a second professional sword soul? The layout is even smaller. Your entire three elemental skills are like fucking Star Wars. Even if you clear the ground, the Holy City will still be dark.

It can be said that the writing failed. The framework of the world view is not well laid out. There is no main line and no need to level up. I wrote a few conspiracies but I don't understand the reason. The introduction looks like a cool article but it turns out to be useless. There is no theme at all.

He vomited, and it took him three nights to sleep. Why are you still working as a law enforcement officer in a city??? Shouldn't we go out of town to expand new maps? Introducing a new plot line? The whole plot of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, pretending to be in a slum with an average level of more than ten levels??? What a great subject, written like this!!!

The 100 version of the level 65 Soul Eater holding the Falling Star Knife and wearing a suit of inheritance was beaten to death by a 60 version of the level 52 paladin who was dressed in garbage. How can you think of this?

Brother, you started at level 60. One night, you said you didn't want to go to the wild and hide there. I wonder if you don't know anyone and have no feelings for anyone, so why can't you leave? And wouldn't it be over if you didn't choose Devil May Cry? Devil May Cry is the only one you know how to play Ghost Sword? Moreover, that mentor had warned me before that changing jobs would affect me, so I changed jobs without knowing anything. Then the ghosts and gods answer questions one by one like dogs. You might as well come up with a system. It feels like the protagonist is like a retarded person. He chooses a dark profession, hides, and equips himself. I don't understand. It seems that if you want to hit someone, it's over, and if you have a bad temper, you'll quit.