Dimensional Game Starts with Bone King

Overall, it is quite satisfactory, and the writing level and rhythm are at a standard level. In terms of plot, the early adventures in the Bone King world were a bit disappointing. The dozens of chapters of the story in the dimensional world that followed probably dissuaded many readers who wanted to follow the Bone King fandom. I didn't return to the world of Bone King until the next 50 or 60 chapters, but the story line felt a bit intermittent. It was not until the plot was released that the focus returned to the world of Bone King. I don't know how long this part of the plot will last (Elantier Strategy Battle) Generally speaking, it is okay as a heaven-type novel, but as a Bone King fan, the concentration is still a bit low (for now). Most of the people who clicked in to read this book came because of the title of Bone King, but the excessive plot in the early stage can easily dissuade such readers. It is a little bit toxic (Albedo's description, the dimensional world is overly dependent on firearms), but the overall impact is not great. If you can stick to it, it can be considered a good work.

If you write like this, the gap is too big. You have already reached full combat power in the Bone King World. No matter how careful you are, there is no need to be like this.

The overlord chapter started to be very full, and after overlord finished the game, he immediately dived 🤔

This book is now the same as the original DNF, invincible at the beginning, but the result is afraid of this and that. In this way, the author, you can write that it is invincible compared to the reincarnation, but its performance in the dungeon is equivalent to the middle and upper-level combat power of each world, and it gradually becomes stronger in the dungeon. Otherwise, according to the author, your current writing method is no different from this book. You can learn from Mosquito's Paradise of Reincarnation.

I hope the author will not treat everyone as a fool. The protagonist can have plot advantages, but in the world of One Piece, if you inquire a little, you will know about the secret treasure in the sea-Devil Fruit, let alone other worlds. The four trial worlds have not been thoroughly studied after such a long time. I can only think that this dimensional world has a worldwide intelligence-reducing aura.

I looked at the label and saw someone pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. This was very successful. It was indeed a pig, eating a gecko.

After reading the previous eight chapters of Bone King, I gave up after reading the last few chapters of Crimson King. The first eight chapters paved the way for an awesome protagonist, but then he made some minor mistakes that he shouldn't have made, and wrote a bunch of original characters and stories that have nothing to do with the comic... The author's mistake was that he shouldn't have paved the way for the Bone King in the first eight chapters, setting expectations too high, and then directly exaggerating, which made people stop watching. It would be okay if the characters and stories were original from the beginning. After using Bone King to attract a lot of people who like Bone King and watch variety comics, it turns out that after the eight chapters of Bone King, the original character is revealed and there are several chapters in a row that are original and have story content that has nothing to do with anime and games. It is basically a result of how many come and go. I won't comment on it until I finish reading it. Let me tell you my review after reading the first ten or so chapters. There are no major negative points, but there are some minor negative points. The first eight chapters are full of expectations, and the last few chapters... Well, it's just like what I said above.

The pig's trotter has an IQ of 60, and the others have an IQ of 20.

The first eight chapters are about the Bone King, and then there are other worlds. After the Bone King becomes invincible, he immediately starts to suppress the protagonist's strength. It's not cool enough. If he is strong enough, why not just conquer the world by himself? He is afraid of being exposed, and he has to follow the team. It's a double standard.

It felt pretty good in the beginning, but starting from the creation of the NPC Donghuang, it felt weird~

It's so good to write King of Bones. Why do you write those inexplicable stories? Brother, I want to read King of Bones.

For a Bone King fan, it's not bad, but I feel like the author has thrown away all the previous settings of traveling through the worlds, and has forgotten that the protagonist can travel to other worlds.

I came here to read the Bone King fanfic, but you finished eight chapters for me? ? ?

When the combat power is maxed out, and then there are all kinds of meaningless and vulgar things, I still know the vulgarity of the wizard plot, which really makes me a little bit depressed

The plot is really confusing, completely irrelevant, and feels like a running story...

The protagonist's character is a bit weak, just like Norma before. If you can't leave any regrets, don't leave any regrets. As for her family and the like, it's not a big deal. Is it difficult to copy a puppet to live in her place? The best thing is that you can return to that world at any time. The key is that the protagonist can't go back to that world, so there is this regret. The protagonist can definitely go back after becoming stronger, and with the protagonist's current strength and upgrade speed, as long as it doesn't take a few years, he will be fully capable of meeting Norma, so I hope there will be no pitfalls later.

Bone King is about to close the server before time travel. Spending 100 million yuan to buy world-class props is not as much as you want.

Just write your own ideas. Many people have read too many Shuang articles and cannot turn around. An ordinary person suddenly has an extra 10 billion yuan in his bank card. What was the first reaction? Anyone with a normal mind would make more preparations. You don't even look at the main world that the protagonist travels through. In a world where everyone can travel through various worlds, you won't be scared. And even if you really travel through the world of Bone King, you can guarantee that the script will not change if there is another one of you in the script. After the script becomes the world, you can control it. To be honest, when you come to this kind of fanfic, what you want to see is a different development, some characters and events from the original plot, which is boring. You can think of how to develop it if you think about it.

So can we see milk tea again? There is so much to describe this character, don't be a passerby. I care so much that I dare not make any decision casually

You're not right. From the time you returned to the dimensional space, you felt a strong sense of tearing apart. This is too stupid. Let me not talk about the world view of this space. Let's just say that it is outrageous that a bunch of people playing with guns can win the title of god. It is outrageous that they all use guns. I really strongly recommend that the author read the old book "Infinite Arms", or that the author wrote this setting based on this book in the early stage. After all, the setting is the same, but what you write is very different from the world view you want to express.

And what about a certain hidden boss? If I go to discover that the world is not right, what does that have to do with you? What does it have to do with you as the protagonist? Women are originally like this, respecting firearms, and the beneficiaries of this culture. How did it happen? The protagonist seems to want to change the world and eliminate all these unhealthy tendencies. You have already said that this protagonist is not such a holy mother. Ah, anyway, looking at it makes me angry.

Originally, the wizard chapter was a good opportunity for the guardians to appear, but it ended up being written like this. The guardians were as if they were invisible. They were either reporting on work or having sex... The author should think about it for himself.

Why not create unique races and professions

I want to see the protagonist take the Bone King Group to adventure in all the worlds and then... I feel like the protagonist has not gone to other worlds since he re-entered the Bone King world in the middle of the game...

Traveling to the world of Bone King is the most desperate. If you are not a player, the survival rate is only 1/3 and you are easy to die. The survival rate of Resident Evil can be said to be none. The survival rate of One Piece is much higher. As long as you live within the jurisdiction of the navy, the knight mortality rate will be much lower.

What hook did you write? I wonder if the Bone King chapter was okay. Why did it become so boring after that? Is the protagonist mentally ill?

According to this setting, ordinary people from platinum level up to the platinum level rely on thermal weapons to fight. In other words, platinum and even diamonds only have mastered basic extraordinary abilities to fight, and even rely on a combination of thermal weapons to fight.

Will it develop into a battle for world hegemony and a battle between the masters of various worlds?

But to be honest, the writing in the first few chapters is okay, but to be honest, most people should read the first few chapters and then read the later chapters. Then there will probably be no new ones who will see the plot of the Bone King in the back. The gap between your front and back is so big that it doesn't look like it was written by one person.

Naruto, as long as you are not a ninja and work as a civilian in a ninja village, the survival rate is actually the highest.