My Deskmate Is Wang Ye

There is really no sense of immersion. It looks like it wants to follow the dual-protagonist mode where the protagonist and Wang Ye go hand in hand. However, the dozens of foreshadowings for the protagonist lead to a weak sense of presence. The Wang Ye line itself has little development, and the interaction with the protagonist feels completely unhelpful. In today's online writing environment, where the main character in more than a dozen films can be greatly improved, this book is too slow. The old man who gave it to me was not helpful at all. He was just trying to make a fool of himself during the whole process, and he also had an appetizing expression that said, "If you can't do it now, I can't say more." In short, either there is no old grandfather, a loser with a lot of bitterness and hatred, or there is a Shuangwen genre directly led by the old grandfather. The current model of neither good nor bad is impossible to be accepted by the public. It is recommended that the author can change quickly and the book will get better and better.

What can I say about my feelings about this book? There is no sense of immersion, and the writing is not bad. However, the plot is overall a bit messy. It has dug a lot of holes so far and has basically not been filled in. And after so many chapters, the protagonist basically still can't do anything. I feel really helpless when I see it.

I can only say that the ideas and writing are very good, but the preamble is too long, and I haven't officially entered the alien world for a long time. It is easy to abandon the book halfway or simply skip the preamble stage, making the subsequent reading unclear.

I hope the heroine is Lu Linglong, I like her 🙂

Can you learn Ni Sansheng? I found that there is no protagonist who can learn it. I am really not weak.

I've seen the latest one, let me know about it in the comments section for those who choose not to watch it. Just a small problem. The pace is too slow. It takes 70 chapters for the protagonist to have preliminary self-preservation ability. In current online novels, it is reasonable to have preliminary strength around 50 chapters. Faster ones can even be achieved in 20 chapters. There is also almost no psychological growth of the protagonist. After killing a few people, it will be different. Like, but the author almost went crazy when he used the protagonist. The old man pulled him into the scene to recover. The protagonist was still the same high school student. He had not changed at all. He had been attacked just now. In the blink of an eye, nothing happened. He was riding a bicycle home alone and was accosted by the female villain. There was no suspicion at all. It was quite strange. In the end, it was just too bland. I don't know how to put it, maybe it was the author's writing style, but it was just a bit boring. This book is okay, but I don't know how many words the author wants to write. Writing like this is like eating white rice. I can't finish the story in less than a few thousand chapters. I hope the author can control the rhythm and speed up appropriately. It has been in the early stages for so long and no one has read it. Your ten golden chapters are really worse than boiled water.

Why do I feel like it's a bit fucked up?

When I read Chapter 80, I felt like I had read nothing. The protagonist had almost no change, and the old man didn't see any effect. There was too much foreshadowing in Chapter 80, and it seemed like I couldn't keep people interested.

A very important book, and the fact that this book is placed on the table proves that you have read it and turned it over, otherwise you will realize that there is a thief in your home as soon as you don't see it. But you can't remember the content, which is a bit inconsistent.

What can I say? It's a pity that the male protagonist is not a time traveler. After all, if the protagonist of the fanfic is not a time traveler, it will basically not be able to arouse my sense of empathy. I can only say it is a pity.

You have to give what you have to give. Don't let readers run away.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 20. Goodbye brothers.

At the beginning, when I asked him to quit, he inexplicably wrote that Wang Ye stole the protagonist's book. How did he know that the protagonist had a book about aliens?

Why didn't you call the police immediately when you saw a tomb robber? If you were afraid of being discovered, you could stay away. Also, if there was no signal, you should also tell us.

The plot progress is too slow. It is better for newcomers to write books at a faster pace, otherwise most people will not be able to read it.

At the beginning, something suspected of being a golden finger was stolen by a suspected Wang Ye. It made me angry for no reason.

I feel like this one is more suitable