Records of the Birds of Prehistoric Times

How should I put it? In some places, it is not necessary to use rigid classical Chinese or archaic rhetoric. It is embarrassing to use inappropriate words for the situation Then there is a problem that many authors have, being disturbed by their own opinions, such as the Qilin tribe's harvest. I believe you are a Sirius. If you just say it is a Sirius, then I think it is a bit tough. You, a certain wolf, a certain wolf, are a bit of a loser. I feel that all races in the wild are a bit worthless. They are all creatures that are not beyond human recognition in real life It is recommended to do more research. For some mythological races, it is best to read "The Classic of Mountains and Seas - A Bite of the Ancient World" Also, the level of these mythical races is a bit low. Changing their identities to ordinary martial arts masters will not work at all. It is recommended to describe more of these races. Mysterious, it makes no sense that the protagonist can make all the flowers wither when he smiles. The appearance of the two ancestors of Phoenix just makes people feel very ancient and not cool at all In this regard, you can read good crime novels and replace those weird special effects with more gorgeous ones.

The words are gorgeous, but I really like the writing style, and the story is also good. I just hope the author can update it soon.

Three thousand hairs? It seems that Pangu is also a bald baby.

It looks a bit like that "snake"

Ziwei Di said next door, good guys, I wrote about factual issues, and the author was directly banned permanently. Good guys Why do you all like to write about the system now? Moreover, it is written in a text like Honghuang. No matter who writes it, Honghuang is always rich in various abilities. How can the system take root, and how can it escape? . . And what is the meaning of Ziwei's transformation? Can the author please explain it? . . This is a question I just posted next door. The author is awesome.

In Chapter 12, I was also speechless. It was obviously the protagonist's own innate immortal aura that had been trained by Yuan Feng, and he said that he would take it away if it failed to meet expectations in the future. If I were to cultivate higher in the future, it would be better to retaliate instead of kindness. . It was a bit too pushy. It was clearly stated that it was given to Lian Bao as a reward, but in the end it was said that it would be taken away in the future.

[Interactive Building], you can tell us any thoughts you have about characters, spiritual treasures, spiritual roots, strange beasts, or the plot 😠 🌹

The writing is great, but a little difficult to understand.

The author, do you really not consider being less literary? 😥 You should be sensational when you should be sensational, and be moved when you should be moved. Don't use it at other times. Personally, I think the two-word phrase is too gorgeous You can have this kind of description, no problem, but it is too pretentious to write it like this. It may be that I really don't have as strong a sense of involvement as you 😐 Another example is the first-person description of the half chapter where I saved Kamanying. Anyway, the author must have written a lot of poetry, but personally I feel that all lyrical words are too flashy for a novel. Rational analysis and personal opinion. I have only read 37 chapters. I would like to give some suggestions to the author and provide some reference for future generations. I hope the author can write better, so I will leave first.

It feels very similar to the Green Snake Cultivation book, but he is the God of Spring, from the Dragon Clan.

The fairy grass in the prehistoric novel

In fact, people who like it will like it very much, but people who don't like it will find it very lengthy. I feel that the writing is a bit too literary. It has become a bit different from the original online novel, as if writing prose. Very lyrical.

Tianmang Divine Lion

It's well written! It's just that the modifiers are too complicated! Many chapters have a paragraph at the beginning! It feels like good ingredients, and the dishes that look good are made with a little too much salt. It can be tolerated after one or two bites, but if it is too much, it will feel salty... Personal opinion! I don't like to squirt in a hurry!

I like this gorgeous wording and have already ordered it (｡ì _ í｡)

Don't give up, I support you. I haven't seen you update for a long time, so I think I'm a little depressed, but we are still supporting you, come on!