I Play Dota in the Hokage World

I couldn't read any more after thirty chapters! The protagonist really thinks that to live, he must ensure Senju Nawaki's life. Isn't that absurd? All he cares about is the Senju clan's junior sister. Who cares about you, a commoner, risking so much danger just to prove yourself a good dog, groveling to the Senju family?

The author probably hasn't read the original work. You killed Hanzo yourself, so why did you become Jiraiya's apprentice? You should know that the Sannin and more than a dozen Anbu were defeated by Hanzo at his peak. You only became Jiraiya's apprentice for a short time and you were able to kill Hanzo yourself, so why did you become his apprentice? Furthermore, you should read more materials.

The first volume could be called "Saving the Shinobi Nawaki". Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha 😄

Serious issues with item builds The Golden Touch skill cannot be developed. People die every day, but their ashes aren't collected. It's unreasonable to not use the Blood Essence Holy Sword with just one life. You might as well set it so that the equipment system isn't available in the early game, and you can only focus on skills.

Stop insulting Dota, okay? If your protagonist is so clueless about Bloodstone, Heart of Tarrasque, and Urn of Shadows, then don't think you're so smart.

The protagonist spent years just trying to master Windwalker; does that mean he only relies on Windwalker to conquer the world? Are the other hundred-plus heroes just sitting idly by? Is this book still labeled as an invincible protagonist story? I want to ask, where is the invincibility?

Although it's fanfiction, you should at least respect the original work. Others may not know, but for me, fanfiction is primarily about revisiting familiar plots and elements. Then, it's about filling in the gaps and addressing any remaining regrets. Only then does the author consider any fresh or interesting ideas.

It's so nauseatingly written. Basically, it's about the protagonist being betrayed and framed, the protagonist saving themselves, and then the protagonist forgiving. All the villains get multiple chances; failure has no consequences. The protagonist, including their side, always chooses to forgive. In the end, the protagonist is incredibly moved by their own actions. Everyone claims to be a lover of justice and peace.

It's unreasonable for the Senju clan to disband without any indication of their status. Why don't other clans disband? Ancient clans can disband easily. It's meaningless for the Senju to disband alone. In the movie, Konohamaru, wearing a scarf, tells Naruto that it's a high-end item from the Senju clan.

My goodness, Nawaki, who was searched for by a large group in the original work, is now an unwanted orphan here, with no one coming except Tsunade. Given the unusual movements in Sunagakure and Amegakure, even if someone is lying to their superiors, Orochimaru should know by now. The story will end a few chapters after finding the allies still in Amegakure. The writing gives you the feeling of the Journey to the West.