Gundam SEED: The Final Destination

It's on the new book list. You may be the first to write a seed to be on the new book list.

It's all Lux. I really want Lux to be the heroine...

I hope the author will make a side story or something to describe the daily dog ​​food between Noel and Lux. I believe that as long as you work hard, you can eat dog food.

To put it bluntly, this is a "fan novel" with a total of 800 chapters, and the plot of Shui Yuan's work is no less than 600 chapters.

At this point in the plot, the protagonist's position is actually very clear. He is on the side of Lux's idea of ​​peace. However, due to a genetic disease in his body, his mentality is slightly broken. He occasionally has some negative thoughts about "pulling the whole world with him", but in the end he chose the path of "redemption". Now that the plot has reached this point, the next step should be to unlock the "shackles" on the protagonist, so that the protagonist can let his dreams fly freely. The main difference in this process is whether others "redeemed" the protagonist, or whether he "redeemed" himself. The impact of these two results is very different. But I feel that there is a high probability that Lux will "save" the protagonist. She not only needs the sword of the protagonist, but also wants to invest her emotions, which naturally requires process and influence. Otherwise, the protagonist will most likely still be alone, he doesn't owe anyone any favors, and he doesn't have any important bonds worth fighting for. After all, he is the most selfless and selfish person...

Either the protagonist is a psychopath, or the author simply can't remember what he wrote ten chapters ago. From personal thoughts to attitudes towards the same thing, there has never been a unified attitude. Now I have a positive attitude towards someone or a certain force, but the next time I see them, I have a different attitude. Especially the attitude towards the Junius 7 incident. How many times has this happened? Sometimes he is concerned about sadness, and sometimes he is indifferent. First, he said that he was very sad to know that everyone in the orphanage had died, and then he said that he had only known her for a month and had no feelings for her. When the colleague said it, he forced a smile and said he didn't care, and then said that he had no feelings. When he was snatching the Gundam and following the Archangel, he saw the nun's body and rushed out to pick it up and said how he was. Then the Earth United Attack Plant said that he was an outsider and he was indifferent after Junius 7 exploded. It doesn't matter to me whether you abuse the master or not. I can accept some minor flaws. After all, it's rare to see Seed's fans nowadays. But can you stop making the protagonist's attitude so ups and downs? If you don't have enough writing skills and a bad memory, just write an outline honestly. If not, take notes on what the protagonist's mentality should be at each stage and look at it while writing. If you are really too lazy to do this, just don't write anything related to psychological changes. Let the protagonist have a firm mentality and attitude until the end. (I have been reading more than 200 chapters and this problem has persisted. After writing more than 200 chapters, I don't believe that no one mentioned this problem. In the end, I just didn't change it and wrote it down.)

It is indeed a rare fan, I will come back and read it when I think of it. The reason why people can't follow it is not the writing style. It's about the plot. As long as the named characters are hostile to the protagonist, no one will die. Even if the author couldn't bear it anymore, he arranged for the machine to be blown up and the person survived. It was extremely frustrating to watch. It's okay if the protagonist is not Long Aotian, but there is no historical deviation caused by the arrival of the time traveler. There are hands who want the plot to develop according to the original story no matter what, which is the most uncomfortable point. This is reflected in the protagonist's outrageous incompetence. The protagonist is not incompetent, but he is extremely incompetent because of the arrangements made by these hands. So gave up. Now that I'm back and reading this book, there happens to be a chapter about Lux's marriage. I subscribe to this chapter and it's the end. 🙂🙂🙂

There are very few people writing Gundam fanfics nowadays, and they are worth encouraging anyway. However, there are some serious problems in this book that seriously affect reading: the writing is immature, the characters' dialogue language is philistine, and the protagonist's actions lack logic. These two points lead to the protagonist's lack of charisma. There are too many reprints of the original novel, and there are too many meaningless inner activities. There are too many characters in the side story, resulting in the characters being messy and stereotyped. The most important thing is: What is the meaning of the protagonist's existence? It is recommended that the author refer to "UC Cannon Fodder Records", "Gundam EXA", "Gundam Chassis Fire Line", and "The Life of a Very Satisfactory Gundam Pilot and Temporary Worker of the Space-Time Administration". These are about 2 million words, and they have strong control of writing. You can learn from these authors.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a rubbish protagonist. The author probably wrote it based on his own mood every day. No wonder the protagonist is so neurotic. Someone whose mood changes drastically every day cannot be called a normal person.

So far, I personally find things in this article uncomfortable. 1. The protagonist's strength and reputation do not match. The protagonist has been passively defeated in the battle, and there are very few cases where complete victory is smooth sailing. The author extensively describes the importance of the protagonist and the terrifying strength of the protagonist in the daily chapters, but he is immediately defeated in the battle. I don't know if the author has discovered it. Personally speaking, the daily chapters are better written than the battle chapters. Some of them are even funny. At least they are very comfortable to read. 2. The enemy's immortality and enhancement. Not much to say about the immortality. I am always shot down but never die. The next time I come back, the people watching will be very depressed. Enhancement means that those enhanced people are getting stronger. If they just accumulate experience through war, it is nothing. Actually, because the protagonist evolves and passively improves the enemy enhanced people's strength through genes. Is this considered a win? Continue to fight the protagonist after passive enhancement? Very depressed. The author has already created a lot of original plots, and he can also create a few other powerful pilots. The enemies don't need to be immortal. After all, the butterfly effect of the protagonist is quite big. The author sets the male protagonist to be level 99. Is it difficult to fight enemies at level 80 or above? 3. Can't figure out the protagonist's ultimate goal. Alive? Peace? Or start a war? It feels like the protagonist is a little adrift. 4. Does the protagonist have any memory of the original plot? I don't know if I missed it. The original setting seems to be that people don't know the plot, but in the article, it seems that they know the direction of the world and often say some famous lines. So do you know?