Watching a Live Broadcast, I Was Actually Regarded as an Immortal Master?

I saw that many people said before that the problem with this book is water and wisdom, but it is not. The main problem is the setting. The first point is that the location at the beginning talks about a lot of settings, such as ten dead and no life, and a white tiger carrying a corpse. In the end, only one dies in more than thirty pictures, and it is still a seductress, so it seems very watery Second Let me be wise. At the beginning, I said the identities of the two douchebags are relatively high. One is the president or vice-president of the student union, and the other is the minister of the student union. It turns out that he is like a gangster. He refuses to listen to advice, moves things around, and is eager to express himself. If the author handles these things better later, this novel will be much better.

What's wrong with Sanjiang? Can such a book be published? This is not even as good as the cool articles from that kind of channel, the kind that some people can still read if they are smart enough.

These names are all copied from other people's books, right?

The plot is okay, but the character is very poisonous The character Li Lang is a poisonous point. I understand that a character is needed to promote the plot. But his behavior was unreasonable. Putting aside ghosts, there are so many antiquities and valuable historical heritage in an ancient village. His destructive approach is impossible to please the two hosts. Secondly, he is also the president of the student union, and his IQ is too low... When encountering strange things, the excuses he makes are also full of loopholes I don't know if I have expressed my thoughts clearly emmmm Come on, author, I hope there won't be such characters who deliberately act stupid to promote the plot in the future.

It was okay for the first few chapters, and then it just didn't. The more I looked, the angrier I became. Until I saw that there was no one (shi) in front of the charge. There is a chapter that pokes fun at me, and as I read it, the hostility is getting worse and worse. I just wanted to see how the author can be more mellow, and finally it was put on the shelves. It was about 6 o'clock in the morning. Also, I looked online and it seems that the author listed it on QQ Reading. I wonder if we can see our comments.

The poisonous points of this book are: it cannot be justified. First, it is said that the story was written in such a bad way that it is really embarrassing for Wei. Secondly, the rules set by the expedition team before setting off were followed by the two female anchors. As soon as they entered the village, they were led by the boss throughout the whole process. Thirdly, a story started well, and then started all kinds of foreshadowing and exaggeration. The adventure story was not finished before it was put on the shelves. When writing a novel, you can't just tell a story for the sake of telling a story, right? Can you sort out priorities? When we tell a story, we can't have a preface and a follow-up. The key to hitting Piapia in the face is to hit yourself. If you can't follow up, just be vague at the beginning. It has to be Piapia to be effective. If this is the story the author wants to write, treat it as if I didn't say it 😅

What, it only took five minutes from Chapter 1 to Chapter 33, and the content is completely covered? It's the same plot, the Virgin and the licking dog, extremely poisonous.

There is no place to look for Brother Yun. There is a white cloud spring on Tianping Mountain. The clouds are careless and the water is free.

How to say (ﾟoﾟ;, Holy Mother, nonsensical, hard-core, I have complained about one book in my life, and yours is the first one. Chapter 33 is on the shelves. It's better to go back to QQ to continue playing.

I think it's okay to have good writing skills. As for the Virgin Mary with pig's feet at the beginning, she was scolded several times and still had to speak up to help. I understand that after all, human life is at stake. Others are just like TV and movie routines. The more problems there are, the more things need to be done. He doesn't listen to anyone, he forces his wits down and pushes the plot forward. The official attitude is even weirder. From the article, we know that the official knows the ghost, but they just don't warn the four little masters who seek death. Generally speaking, it's a routine from TV and movies.

On a side note, this is the first time I have seen so many negative reviews. There are more than 800 negative reviews. Many well-written ones have been lost in the sea of ​​books. In a way, it is already very impressive. The above is just a simple complaint, talk about the content, there are still many flaws, many of them are in great conflict with the setting, whether it is the weird and lacking world view, or what Mr. Qin Guchuan Qin said, "Did they take action?" The latter feeling is that the setting is directly supplemented. To put it bluntly, the introduction and content do not match. If possible, change it slightly. Of course, this is just a personal suggestion. After all, a book can be written, it is an experience, and it is also my own story.

After reading the comments, I feel a bit contrary, 2 votes support it.

In fact, the writing is good, but your mouth is too rude, shut up when asked, and scold you in front of hundreds of thousands of people. You go your own way, and I almost want to scold you.

Can you write it? There are so many chapters and I haven't even finished writing a single thing. Do you know how wet you are?

Good words can never dissuade the damned people. Let these people die! "A good book is about death. Don't write about a hero saving a beauty. This is a bad story to attract attention."

The plot is so tedious to write. To be honest, if this book had only one or two hundred chapters, I would still be able to read it happily. Now, reading it every day is really tedious. It's been over 20 chapters. Not to mention that I've finished writing the first plot, and I haven't even seen the ghost yet. I'm still laying the groundwork, relying on a bunch of NT barrages and the SB behavior of a few NT teammates to drag out the plot. I'll give it a few more days to see if the author can improve it.

In college, the dormitory is called Pharaoh, Big Lao, Second Lao, Third Lao, and Fourth? Sigh, I'm really annoyed by this. The real situation is that not many boys' dormitories shout like this.

Good words don't tell you to die. I can't understand why this protagonist keeps saying... Maybe the protagonist I like is like "Believe it or not, get out of here, don't disturb my cultivation of immortality". So this book 😅 talks about roommates and a bunch of lsps, but the main characters are not the same...

The main reason is that the situation is a bit big and cannot be explained clearly so quickly. At the same time, I would also like to thank my friends who have been following it. Thank you, Wednesday Jiang next week~ Actually, as long as everyone can be more patient and read it, you will know that all the unreasonable things will become reasonable in the future, but there is no way to say it now, because it requires a certain number of words to explain. However, for the convenience of reading, the author has refined some unnecessary subplots. Readers who have read the latest chapters will not be affected. The ones that are slightly affected are those who have read it halfway through. Just find the content you are familiar with and read on. I apologize for sending pictures. 😏

Is this also Sanjiang? Recommended starting point

Chapter 80 is so disgusting that I can't stand it, it's poisonous, but I've ordered the subsequent chapters, can I cancel it? I regret not reading the book review first. I missed my horse and it seems I couldn't have been careless for a moment.

Author, do you know why you feel that you are not watery, but readers think you are watery? Personally, I feel that your narrative interrupts the reading rhythm. Normally it might be A1, A2, A3, B1, B2, B3. If you make A1, B1, B2, A2, A3, and mix them together without clear priorities (I'm talking about watching people's reactions), it will be very slow. One moment it was full of dangers, and the next second there was a long live broadcast, forming a kind of tear. Instead of using the atmosphere of the live broadcast to ease the tense emotions, or to heighten the sense of anticipation on the adventure side. I also feel that there are too many things in the live broadcast and are too repetitive, with repeated reversals of attitudes, the threshold is too high, and it is naturally indifferent. It is better to suppress it first and then promote it. Make it clear at the beginning what you might encounter inside. Then I was ridiculed because I didn't say anything like reporting bans. The expedition team constantly discovered a high degree of overlap with what the protagonist told them, and the side enhanced the image. At the critical moment, everyone spoke out due to requests or other reasons (such as making money). Instead of being scolded like now, you still stick to it. Everyone praises and scolds, and it is really a bit shameful to praise. While saying that he would not help, he then found an excuse to intervene again. This is also the reason why most readers refuse to write or abandon the book. It's too harsh to "damage" the protagonist. In addition, the expedition team tried to be dead for so long, and the scene tried to be described as vicious and abnormal, but it didn't leave a deep impression on me. The fight at the spiritual altar is also the same. It should be a small climax, but it is very weak and inexplicable. By the way, the characters of the expedition group are not pleasant. The above words of achievement

I gave up this book after reading the first part. Let me talk about evil gods. In ancient times, Xie Tong Xie means unrighteousness, but it is not evil. Evil plus evil is a derogatory term. Baidu can modify it, so don't use your Baidu stuff to teach me how to be a human being. I really feel sick.

One of the most rubbish books ever

I felt relieved when many people said it was poisonous. I read the previous dozens of chapters and found that except the first person to die had a normal IQ, the later he died, the lower his IQ. The sister who survived saw two male classmates trying to die and ran out to talk to the damn ghosts, so she planned to ignore it. However, another female classmate saw that the male classmate she liked was in danger and ran out anxiously. She ran out with her and her sister without caring about the safety of herself and her sister. This is as outrageous as a domestic horror movie. To be honest, this book still has its merits, and the writing is not bad. I suggest the author read the comment section more and make changes to the rationality of the plot. Of course, this book is already hopeless. If you forcefully modify it, no one will read it. Let's learn from the next book.

Shen Nong was poisoned, so he said, "How did you recommend this kind of garbage to me? Is it really a poison?" I want it to be cool or not, I want it to be brought in or not, what did I do wrong to make me watch this kind of garbage? It's really disgusting. Opening the door for disgusting people. It's so disgusting.

The author is great. I couldn't read other novels because the writing was too poor or the settings were too outrageous. But this one is amazing. For the first time, I felt that the protagonist was so self-deprecating, so licking, and so disgusting 😰😰😰

It's poisoned. There is no background of the main character in more than thirty chapters, and the background of the story is not clearly explained. Half of the story was not even finished before it was put on the shelves. The protagonist has been saying that this is a very dangerous place and you will die if you go in. When it comes to the beauty of the woman who is not dead and is broadcasting the whole time, there is no story to be tricked. A supporting character who is a witty person is so desperate for death. I have never encountered the trick head-on. I have been a bookworm for more than ten years and have seen a lot of poisonous books, but I have never seen a book with such bad writing and just over 30 chapters on the shelves. Excellent!

The theme of this book is good, but after reading 70 chapters, it is still in the process of setting up and guiding. Not to mention the writing style, the quality is even better than Sanjiang. After all, the quality of Sanjiang is getting worse and worse. It's just that I couldn't have imagined that there would be a thousand more votes.

I accept that people who have not practiced Taoism can use Taoism. After all, they have said that the person is a Wuyang girl. But you made me laugh during the live broadcast. Is it true that anyone who has not practiced Taoism can use Taoism? Who is the eunuch you are not supervising?