Xingyue: I Am Assassin!

Your protagonist's character is too kind, I hope you change it. After all, sometimes readers scold you for killing your wife, but they don't scold you for being cruel.

I just came in after reading this introduction, and ended up reading about a hundred chapters. The main character is Jin Fu, but he hasn't even used his ultimate move. He rarely uses Jin Fu's skills in every battle, only red A and Shiny. Isn't this a complete deception? 🙉

The decision is yours o(o･`з･´o)ﾉ!!!

Chef Ying can just quit. Not only will she lose the role, but she will also be ridiculed by the author in a weird way.

Giving her a Medea magic crystal and then giving her a beating and forgiving her easily after being betrayed is actually not bad, but later on, as long as she is a woman, she will fight and win, then let her go, get beaten again, then let her go, and continue to be beaten by the group, but she won't be killed, Enzyworth You will definitely have to go back and forth there several times I believe that if I keep going like this, there will definitely be fewer and fewer people. After all, those who wrote about the Holy Grail are all in your style. They pay attention to releasing them after they are beaten and then waiting for others to find someone to fight again. You have to go back and forth several times before collecting them or killing them.

Assassins are a very special class. Powerful assassins will not leave holy relics, and the ones they leave behind are basically not very strong. As a result, they can only summon some heroic spirits that do not match the assassin class to replenish their numbers, which makes them appear very weak.

After reading about 100 chapters, I couldn't figure out what the author wanted to express. I felt that the main plot was too weak, and I felt very uncomfortable just watching people show affection and eat dog food. The protagonist even assisted. . . . . Forget it, I can tolerate this alone, but are you a killer? I couldn't see my own skill treasures several times, they were all replaced by other people's. I came to see the protagonist, not to see the shiny gold and red a! I created an introduction and made it look like a wealthy person. After reading it, I realized that it was just trying to sell someone else's business.

I can't stand Chapter 18 anymore. It's obvious that Illya and the others are hunting heroic spirits, right? Why don't you kill them while they are sick? Even big bosses like Black Saber and Xuanzang failed. Does the protagonist think he can beat them without even level 20? Or do you think they won't come to you? Why don't I kill you? Silly and holy, there is no system, and the protagonist is just a piece of shit.

Catching Bugs: The original text at the beginning of Chapter 6 says that agility c means running fast at a very high speed in an instant. This is wrong. Agility is flexibility, the body's nerve reaction. What determines running speed is muscle strength. For example, if the reaction is atrophy of flexible muscles, you can't run. What does high flexibility have to do with straight-line acceleration? Agility adds aspects related to flexibility such as obstacle avoidance. I hope the author can change it and don't write it with the settings of a domestic third-rate online game. If it is Yuechu, I will make up for the settings.

Don't feed yourself to death like the last book.

Very strange! They say there is no heroine, but all they end up doing is having an affair with the transvestite

Why is the whole second template, everyone is looking at it for the meat-suited assassin, you just put a second template here, this is not pure title fraud🐴

Don't worry about these bums, this is your novel, not theirs. Believe it or not, if you change it to a protagonist who kills decisively, a group of people will jump out. Just write it according to your own ideas. Even if you fail at writing, you still wrote the story you wanted. If you fail because of changes, you will regret it even more. In one sentence, what you write is not RMB, so it is impossible for everyone to like it.

Do you know why the English name for assassin is Assassin?

The more I read "Chaos of Time and Space", the more boring I get. The man who tore Goetia apart was actually at a disadvantage several times before fighting Tamamo. The level of equipment has been improved in vain. The more I write, the worse it gets. In the eyes of the author, all heroic servants are scum, and monsters are the strongest, right?

Don't magicians all pursue the root? How do you start pursuing power?

If you don't have the ability to grow infinitely, just use a gas tank. I have been using the Grip of Immortality for such a long time. I only stacked it a few times and haven't used it on the seriously injured turtle. I can't use the soul-sucking blow if I can. If it's a normal one, the turtle should at least get the additional damage of half the maximum life of a punch, right?

After raising it for a while, it's finally over? ! But it's a pretty good ending. Overall, there are many people who feel comfortable reading without having to read the malicious negative reviews. Like me, after this book gets on the right track, there is basically no poison to be honest. It's a pity that this book didn't start very well. You should have noticed, the author, that some of the methods that the protagonist can use are clearly supposed to break through the sky. For example, the attack power and magic power that get stronger over time disappear at the end? In fact, the main character's muscle flow was not strengthened enough. Although it was indeed written in some exciting ways, it did not play a decisive role in some decisive scenes. On the contrary, Mengduo was passive and had a sense of presence. In the mid-term, he used a lot of class cards and was criticized. This is not the case. Wrong, Then I was complained about, and the class card disappeared in the end, uh, this is... Speaking of dog lickers, it is called getting along naturally. Gentlemen, seeing that the heroic spirits have followed some unwise masters, instigated rebellion and recruited them as thugs, don't you feel uncomfortable seeing that the protagonist has no income to attack? Getting along with other characters is more natural and has high emotional intelligence. You just call it licking. Gentlemen, do you have to fight to death and become so angry? Hey, you have such a big thing on your neck, why don't you think more about it?

Everyone likes to see the shape of the moon. You can go and take a look. (Full-time heroic spirit starting from Douluo) His writing is quite good. It's just not popular. I'm afraid he will be scrapped midway.

Ending Spreading Flowers, when will the author's next book be released?

Anyway, having said so much, congratulations are over, and I present you with 20,000 coins!

. Emmmm, I can't stand it after reading more than ten chapters. The magic transformation is a bit serious. It's not because Xingyuechu doesn't know what it means. Those who know about this kind of magic transformation will immediately persuade them to quit.

It's very messy, I keep grinding my attributes, and there is no obvious main line or plot character description!

It can be seen that the author wants to merge the fsnubw line and the magical girl Illya line, but there are too many magical changes and there is no reasonable explanation. My evaluation is the lol version of legend that rides on the popularity of fate.

This time, the author's ambition is really shattered

There were a lot of magical changes, mainly because I couldn't figure out the author's magical settings after looking at dozens of pictures, so I gave up.

I saw that this novel with more than 40 chapters is very bad, the timeline is rubbish, and it is very baffling. It is obviously a letter from the magical girl Illya, right? According to common sense, the wolf should live with Lilia, but the problem is that it doesn't happen. I don't remember Chapter 40. It is said that Yili is introduced here. The home of the fart dog is also Yi's home, okay? What a mess.

It's really outrageous. I met that old man from China and licked him like crazy and even became my apprentice.

So does this author have any new books?

All in all, the quality is there, the plot is handled well, there are many highlights, The portrayal of the characters is also pretty good, The performance of the protagonist is high and low, I am talking about the performance of hand-to-hand combat, and the refreshing feeling of recklessness, The ending is reasonable, It's just a pity. If the protagonist just made a wave of ridicule, and then Twelve challenged Hard Steel and showed his style, it would be much better. Of course, if you don't consider the resurrection skill, it has no effect on enemies of that level - to be honest, your bottle drop It can basically work for anything, and the system ability (roughly speaking) is not bad at all, right? In short, the rationality is (spoiler shielded) it is reasonable to come to the rescue, but mainly if it can slap the superior god, then it can be regarded as a championship killing step It's charming In short, the resurrection ability was not used much in the end. The protagonist's attack-side ability was a bit nondescript in the final stage. There was no immediate sense of violence, and in addition, he always used skills and was caught. Well, do you understand? Come on, personally speaking, compared to the author's previous books, the results are relatively good, but the writing has improved a lot. Keep up the good work, looking forward to the new book 😃 What subject matter will be revealed?