I Have a Sword That Can Slay Ten Thousand Immortals

Will traditional fantasy literature eventually become lonely?

The main character has too few scenes. Often we don't see the main character in a few chapters, and all the scenes are supporting characters, as if the main character is the narrator. I thought of appearing for a while, without any sense of presence, and always supporting the supporting characters! There is also a time-traveler who is over 30 years old in two lifetimes. He blushes whenever he sees a woman and doesn't know what's wrong! You don't have to ask how well the protagonist is written, but make sure that the IQ and EQ are within the normal range.

The protagonist's time travel is a complete failure. He might as well have been born and raised in the country from the beginning. In his two lives, he was still so childish and timid, and he blushed when he saw a woman.

This time traveler looks like a fool

It looks very weird. The protagonist doesn't look like someone who traveled through time. His knowledge and every move he makes looks like a beggar child who was born and raised here.

The writing is good, but there are too few protagonist roles. The protagonist is Li Yu'an, not Li Yun or Zi Qingshan. The protagonist's name only appears a few times in dozens of chapters. If it is a war story, forget it. After all, you rely on your subordinates to do things. In a fantasy novel, the protagonist has few roles, his realm has not yet risen, and the background is explained too hastily. Do you understand it? Released all at once, do you think this is a mystery article, giving clues? The main plot has not yet been clarified, but there are a lot of branch plots. It would be fine if the branch plots were explained clearly. It is half-story, without cause and effect, and it is the same Riddler. This doesn't look like the main text, the outline is almost the same.

Under the guise of a time-traveling protagonist, I write online articles about my previous life.

Which author came to open a small account again? His writing style is completely different from that of a newcomer. The writing is really beautiful. Please give me your large account 😏

After reading Chapter 24 in one go, there is only one point worth mentioning, let's set up the protagonist's time-travel setting. It's not necessary. Even if we want to set up a time-travel setting, let's wait until he awakens later. Is it just the protagonist? Time traveler?

This. . . The author might as well cancel the time-travel setting. The protagonist in the article does not behave like a person who has traveled through time for more than ten years. Instead, he is a native teenager.