Opening an Internet Cafe in the Naruto World

Otsutsuki Hagoromo's addiction to Internet cafes, is it Otsutsuki's sorrow or his moral decay🐶

It feels like the writing is getting better and better, and it reminds me of a certain successful fan fiction. The author found that the plot was becoming increasingly weak, so he immediately changed and focused on character description and characterization. . . I think the author can learn from it and write more plots related to the main characters; A few other suggestions, just my personal thoughts: The title and plot of this book are all related to DNF, so the crowd it attracts must be mostly between the post-80s and post-95s, so subsequent new games can be written around the preferences of this age group, and it is best not to have unpopular games. If you don't choose a genre well at one stage, the loss rate of readers will be huge; I don't know what your outline is like. Yes, but if I write, I will write DNF as the main game, and other games can be used as sub-games. Enter other games, and the benefits obtained in them will be reflected in the dungeon, which is equivalent to a copy of DNF. Otherwise, it will be one game at a time. If I keep writing, it is likely to collapse; Of course, this is just my idea. I rarely comment. It is rare to see a novel with a relatively suitable theme and writing style. I really want to make it better and better~ I have unknowingly made it so verbose, the author forgives me

There are two reasons why Naruto does not turn black. The first is that Naruto can sense the malice of others, so he pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. Over time, he really becomes a pig. The second type is Asura's chakra brainwashing. The reason is reflected in many events in the original work. Any blackened person can have your mind twisted by Naruto's will. No matter how ridiculous Naruto's words are, for example, Nagato even killed Jiraiya, and his will was twisted by Naruto with just a few words, such as Obito, Sasuke, and many, many more.

Aizen is not only strong in the mirror, the key is his mind.

I'm new to writing books, you can tell me anything you want.

I feel that it is better to have no heroine. The protagonist only needs to be a tool to create the game. There is no need to describe too much. The excitement of the content can be filled directly with what happened between the anime protagonist and the Internet cafe.

Then the rich man in the Land of Naruto has a laptop, and those doing research in Konoha also have desktop computers.

Is there just one dungeon game in an Internet cafe? Then don't call it an Internet cafe.

Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it, DNF is like a secret realm, there are no time travellers, some natives found out after entering that there are opportunities and dangers, they explore on their own and lead a different life

I don't play dungeons. I've read twenty chapters and haven't gotten to CS yet. I feel sleepy. I stopped reading and gave up.