Opening an Internet Cafe in the Naruto World

Is Otsutsuki Hagoromo's addiction to internet cafes a tragedy for the Otsutsuki clan or a sign of moral decay? 🐶

It feels like the writing is getting better and better, reminding me of a certain successful fan fiction. The author realized the plot was getting weak, so they immediately shifted their focus, concentrating on character description and development. I think the author could take a cue from that and write more storylines related to the main characters.

There are two reasons why Naruto doesn't turn evil. First, Naruto can sense the malice in others, so he pretends to be weak to deceive them, and over time, he truly becomes weak. Second, it's due to Ashura's chakra brainwashing. This is shown in many events in the original work; anyone who has turned evil can have their mind twisted by Naruto's will, no matter how ridiculous his words may seem.

Aizen's strength wasn't just in Kyoka Suigetsu; it was mainly in his intellect.

I'm a beginner writer, so feel free to share your thoughts.

I feel that a female lead-less anime is better. The main character only needs to be a tool for exiting the game; there's no need for too much character development. The exciting parts can be filled in by the events that happen between the anime protagonist and the internet cafe.

Then, the wealthy man in the Land of Waves in Naruto had a laptop, and the researchers in Konoha also had desktop computers.

Internet cafes only play one game, Dungeon Fighter Online? Then they shouldn't be called internet cafes.

This is just my personal opinion, please don't be offended if you disagree. DNF is like a secret realm, there are no transmigrators, some natives who go in and discover the opportunities and dangers, they explore on their own and forge their own unique paths.

I don't play Dungeon Fighter Online, and after reading twenty chapters I still haven't reached Counter-Strike. I'm getting sleepy, so I'm giving up.