Black Basket: Orange Devil

To be honest, it's a bit uncomfortable to watch. The main character's appearance is quite gorgeous, but it feels like he's stretched out when he's actually fighting. Xibo, who's also in the movie version of God's Chosen Body, can even pass five. Even Qingfeng's Z can't be suppressed, and he's still not trained at all. . His strength is stronger than Murasakibara, his speed and agility are better than Aomine's, his jumping is better than Kagami's, and he can challenge Z in a normal situation.

It feels like a common problem in all black basket novels. The protagonist's abilities are too simple, filling up the entire data panel, and then either becoming invincible or lowering the protagonist's ability in various ways, forcing it to open at 55. In fact, you don't need too many abilities. Just have one and develop around this ability. It will not make people feel that the protagonist is too invincible, and it will be easier to write the plot.

I hope you can support me a lot. This is my first time writing a novel. I hope you guys can point it out if there is anything I didn't write well and I will correct it. Thank you so much🙏

The author's original writing method is to mix the third person and the first person. I would like to call you "Dr. Trinity"

First person. . . . It's already a niche and you're still in the first person. Let's change it now that there aren't many chapters. . .

Vote once a day to add your heart to the characters and cheers to the author! There are still people watching Black Basketball!

1: The first year of the Generation of Miracles was led by Shuzo Nijimura 2: The first year of the Generation of Miracles to bloom was Aomine, a sophomore in junior high school 3: Blooming does not mean it is a ZONE, blooming just means redeeming potential, and ZONE except Aomine and Akaashi were only opened in high school, and Akashi and Aomine were also opened in the third year of junior high school 4: The third person of the author is mixed with the first person from time to time, which looks weird.

Why go to Chengling? Competing for position with Vulcan? I've already written a novel, so I can't go to another high school? The plot of the basketball novel cannot be let go.

The timing is not right. Nijimura Shuzo is one year older than the Age of Miracles, and the protagonist becomes invincible too quickly. He enters the zone as soon as he enters the first grade of the country. In the original work, Aomine's second grade blossoms and he does not enter the zone.

I finally found a good novel about Heizi's basketball, you must not be a eunuch

Is it updated once a day now? Too little, not enough to see

Ling Yujun, shouldn't it be Ling Jun? Could it be that the male protagonist's surname is Ling Yu?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Everyone wants to see something different, so I have no choice but to stop being a person.

How could a well-written book suddenly be completed?

New book recommendation: NBA: Starting from 2K importing DNA