Shrouding the Heavens: The Era of the Celestial Venerable

The Holy Fetus will be stronger than the Holy Chaos Body! Are you sure? ? ?

In the Emperor's Era, there was only Tianzun, but there was no ancient emperor. Some of the plots were too confusing to understand. In the Emperor's Era, Tuohun's ancestors didn't even know where they were. If you want to be in line with Zhetian, don't write random plots.

After reading a few chapters, it is very important to write down some details about the beginning of this era that is not described in the original text. Otherwise, we won't be able to retain people. In the Emperor's Era, Beidou is not called the Emperor's Burial Star. When the protagonist was talking to his elder sister, he said something like "ok." It really gives me a headache to watch.

Emperor Zun died of greed and brainlessness. Apart from Emperor Huangtian, he should be the first Red Dust Immortal. You must know that the breath of Red Dust Immortal can destroy the universe according to the original text. Emperor Zun should be able to forcibly refine the universe, but he decided to refine all the Supreme Ancient Emperors and Red Dust Immortal together. There is nothing important about these being there. Emperor Zun clearly knows that the Immortal Bell and Huangchen Tower can temporarily stabilize the two worlds, why don't you take them away?

How can I write a protagonist who is so out-of-the-box, who talks a lot, and has a personality like a kindergarten student, a bit like a gangster in a street playroom?

The protagonist's language is vulgar and looks like a reckless man

I don't understand the meaning of the author's writing of this. I can see from the author's other book The Age of Cruelty that if I don't change the plot of the original work, Emperor Zun will have to find a reason to write it to death no matter what. If I write it this way, the author should eunuch it as early as possible. Don't be disgusting. The ending of another book made me disgusted. If I don't change the original work, I will write it to death.

I feel like I don't understand, how can the human race, the demon race, and the ancient race be three races? Many novels are like this, inexplicably pitting humans against monsters. For example, in the creation story, other races can unite to survive, but when the human race appears, all races will inexplicably become hostile.

Can the author please stop making fun of himself?

Will a genius brother be targeted by the elders of the sect? Not even the leader can enter, and there will be no guards in the forbidden area.