The Han of Ji Shall Rise

A woman inviting her parents to her birthday celebration feels like a prostitute selling her body. Writing about governing the world is fine, but this is all about showing off, slapping faces, and chasing women. Chasing women wasn't fashionable in the Three Kingdoms period. No female lead is fine, as long as there are women. Women were everywhere during wartime, why force me to become a simp, showing off, writing poems to incite hatred?

I feel that the pacing of this book is a bit off right now. I understand that the author's current descriptions are meant to pave the way for the protagonist to become famous and build a network of relationships, since the protagonist can't be recruited for no reason.

Let me briefly explain the issue of Ma Su's defense of Jieting. The Records of the Three Kingdoms explicitly states that it was "against the majority, Su was appointed," indicating that there were many people who opposed him. If the protagonist also opposed him, the effect would probably be minimal.

I don't recommend newcomers write about Shu Han. Unifying the Central Plains was no less difficult than Yan conquering Qin. Furthermore, readers' perspectives have changed. Liu Bei and Zhuge Liang, in terms of both developing the people's livelihood and military affairs, couldn't compare to the vast territory of Wei.

If you want to plagiarize and show off, why not just copy from Tao Yuanming, Wang Xizhi, Cao Zhi, or Xie Lingyun? If that doesn't work, copy some Tang poetry. You could even copy Song lyrics from the Three Kingdoms period—why not just write song lyrics? You could even copy Jay Chou's work and I might praise it! What a waste of such good writing skills.

An ancient woman invited you to her birthday party?? This sounds like a prostitute...

If you're not going to support the Han Dynasty, what's the point of wearing the Three Kingdoms costume?

If you were to travel back to the Shu Han dynasty and it wasn't Liu Shan, you'd basically have no chance. Even someone as powerful as Zhuge Liang couldn't lead the Shu Han to victory, so why would you? Just because you've read a few more novels? If the leader isn't good, no matter how powerful you are, it's useless unless you become him and change things.

It's actually not bad, but don't ruin poetry. If you can't revise, don't write this kind of plot.

No, author, putting aside the quality of your wish-fulfillment fantasy novel, you're constantly adding personal reflections! What's the meaning of this? Your clumsy and inconsistent writing style is already annoying enough, and now you're adding a bunch of rambling, nonsensical reflections! Who cares? Do you need to thank CCTV every two chapters?