Ji Han Is on the Rise

When a woman invites her father to celebrate her birthday, she feels like a brothel girl who wants to betray her. If she writes about governing the world, she writes about governing the world. She pretends to be a slap in the face and chases women. It is not popular in the Three Kingdoms to chase women. If you don't have a heroine, it's fine if you have a woman. During the war years, women are everywhere, and I have to turn into a licking dog and pretend to be a poem to attract hatred.

I feel that the current pace of this book is a bit problematic. I understand that the author's current description is to pave the way for the protagonist to become famous and establish a network of relationships. After all, the protagonist cannot be recruited for no reason. But when constructing the plot, did the author consider that the protagonist came to Chengdu spontaneously and proactively, with the purpose of being appreciated by Zhuge Liang and recruited by the imperial court. In this case, the protagonist should take the initiative to do something to gain fame. This was normal for that era, and it was also a way for talents to recommend themselves under the inspection system. The plot described by the author is not like this. After the protagonist comes to Chengdu, things are bumping into the protagonist instead of the protagonist. It seems that the protagonist has no initiative and has nothing to do all day long. Then opportunities and relationships automatically bump into each other. Is it really such a coincidence? Such an unreasonable plot arrangement makes the story feel particularly mechanical, and at the same time makes people feel that the story is very dragging, because the story is developed for the sake of development and lacks the subjective initiative of the protagonist. Everything is obviously arranged by "God" and lacks Reasonable causal relationship, in this case, readers will feel that it is all a rigid arrangement anyway, so it is better to skip these rigid foreshadowings and directly enter the main plot, that is, enter the Prime Minister's Palace and start participating in national affairs. That way, at least they can see what the readers want to see faster.

Let's briefly talk about the issue of guarding the street pavilion. Three Kingdoms clearly stated that it was "going against the crowd", which shows that there are many people who oppose it. If the protagonist also opposes it, it probably won't have much effect. If you accompany Ma Su to guard, Wang Ping has already done a good job, and it is difficult to do better than Wang Ping. Look at how the author handles it here. In fact, I feel that defeat in the Battle of Jieting is difficult to avoid. Ma Su is very capable from all aspects. The failure to defend Jieting is mostly due to objective reasons. So it is recommended that the protagonist clean up the mess in the Battle of Jieting, such as capturing Qishan Gui early to maintain the current success, such as persuading You Chu to surrender and put more troops where they are more needed, etc. Try to save Ma Su's life, after all, he is the protagonist's friend.

In fact, it is not recommended for newcomers to write about the Shu-Han Dynasty. It is no less difficult to unify the Central Plains than the Yan Kingdom to destroy the Qin Dynasty. Moreover, readers' view of the problem has changed now. Liu Bei and Zhuge Liang cannot compare with the huge Wei Dynasty in terms of developing people's livelihood or military affairs. The fault tolerance rate is too low. In the end, they even copied Liu Bang's copper coin policy and no longer care about the life and death of the people. Liu Bei's background is also very problematic. His nominal ancestor is so talented that he doesn't know anything about it. The fact that Goat Gong is still alive and becomes his own boss also shows that the Shu Kingdom no longer cares about restoring the Han Dynasty. Liu Bei needs a large number of rewards to win over people before he can take over. Moreover, the conflicts between foreign generals like Liu Bei and local aristocratic forces are all a lot of flaws. Writers of trumpets who don't have a backing up usually can't deal with the shortcomings well. The most important thing for all trumpet authors is to attract as many readers as possible. Those authors who complain that they can't bear to go out and turn right are basically limited to V5 (I know one that has basically started the others). If you want to practice, it is recommended to go to the light novel Harry Potter and Naruto 🏴‍☠️These three can write results.

If you want to show off by copying, why not copy Tao Yuanming, Wang Xizhi, Cao Zhi, and Xie Lingyun in a down-to-earth manner? ? ? If that doesn't work, copy a Tang poem. If the Three Kingdoms were to reorganize the Song lyrics, how could you not reorganize the lyrics? I might even praise Jay Chou for his good job! What a pity for such good writing.

An ancient woman invited you to her birthday? ? This is a whore

If you don't help the Han Dynasty, you will wear the Three Kingdoms

The writing is actually pretty good, but don't waste the poetry. If you don't know how to change it, don't write this kind of plot.

If it weren't for Liu Chan, there would be no chance of traveling to Shuhan. How could you do it if Wuhou, who is so awesome, couldn't fly you? Just how many novels have you read? It's useless no matter how awesome you are if you're not the boss. Unless you become him and change, there's nothing you can do no matter how awesome you are, because he won't even read your suggestions. How can he have some fun if he doesn't hide and seek with beautiful women?

No, you, the author, don't say whether the writing is good or not. You just give your comments at every turn! What do you mean? Your clumsy and clumsy writing style is already annoying enough, but you still talk nonsense at every turn! Who cares? Do you need to write two chapters to thank cctv?

The writing style of this book is really bad. There are too many illogical sentences in the first chapter. Does the author have no awareness of his own writing skills? ? What a waste of my time.

The routines in this book are too old, and there are too many nonsense. It's just a waste of money. You can even quarrel with the innkeeper when looking for a house. There are also cases to be solved. You are jealous and pretend to be slapped in the face and copy the season writing. This routine was not popular ten years ago.

It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it, and even unpopular figures like Xia Houzun have learned about it. Then adding some semi-fictional female characters like Zhuge Guo can also give readers a more immersive feeling, so that readers will not have the same pale feeling when reading historical novels as reading history books. It can be expected to be a good work. The author is not like those writers who just slap their heads on writing historical articles. He has indeed spent a lot of time on research. But the pace is indeed a bit slow. To gain fame, you can actually use methods similar to copying. Although it is old-fashioned, it is easy to use and can enter the main line faster. If there is no main line and emotional line in a large part of the front, it will be easy to give up. Nowadays, there are really not many people who can calm down and study the materials and write historical articles, which is a thankless subject matter. I hope the author can persevere. As the previous reader said, the protagonist should be more proactive in finding a way out, or making a splash with his articles, or tinkering with small inventions that will only be available in later generations, instead of waiting at home. Although there are many political affairs recorded in history, after all, it is just a small case of a county person. If it is solved by luck, it may just be expropriated by the county, or it may be nothing at all. In addition, it describes that the protagonist actually does not have much money left. It may take nearly a hundred chapters to actually lead the military expedition to the north or south, or develop a romantic relationship. In general, the previous pace was a bit slow, and I didn't read it carefully. I hope the author will forgive me if there are mistakes as stated.

There is too much nonsense, it is about solving crimes and comparing poems. What I know is that it is about the Three Kingdoms. What I don't know is that I thought it was about the Tang and Song Dynasties ten years ago. The author should find a class.

The Three Kingdoms are all bent on rebellion, and I have never heard of the Three Kingdoms investigating the case.

，，，，，，       Another thing is hygiene, which starts with cutting hair. Ordinary people don't cut it, but soldiers must cut it. Think about how people don't wash their hair for several days now, and then think about the ancient people who couldn't wash their hair for several months. There was no shampoo yet. Lice and the like all started from the hair, which is good for the body

The first chapter was poisoned to me. The most important thing in writing historical novels is that the logic can be self-contained under the social system of the time. 1. You can learn ancient Chinese in two months without knowing the language (according to "Qie Yun", ancient Chinese and modern Chinese are completely different things). 2. A savage without even a household registration swaggered into the city. You are insulting my intelligence by not being sent to the government. 3. How to deal with the viruses carried by modern people? If you insist on killing all the viruses when traveling through time, it is not impossible.

I vomited when I read the introduction. Can Zhuge Liang read "The Master's Guide" to you? It's funny, Ji Han is still in the spotlight, so what if he is prosperous? Is it still Ji Han? The height is only so high, I just turned around and left.

Everyone comes here to become an official, not to become a detective 🙄

Can you doubt Liu Bei's background? In ancient times, big families basically lived together. It is clearly recorded that Grandpa Liu Bei had served as an official. The Liu Bei family was not the main lineage of the local Liu family, but at least they had been prominent. The local genealogy 100% has his name. Liu Bei was able to go to Lu Zhi to study, so he definitely didn't come from Yeluzi. In the past, every surname in our rural areas basically had a genealogy. It was very difficult for a celebrity to pretend to be a clan member in the Han Dynasty, because members of a clan basically lived together. If you wanted to fake it, you would need all the clan members of a local big family to help you fake your life experience, which was very difficult. If your family lives alone and has no relatives, it proves that you have no official position. No one will recognize you after a generation. I have written 1 million words to reach level 1. It is purely my own work.

Why are historical time-travel novels almost all about soul travel, and many protagonists still have systems or personal space? It is better to write that the protagonist can travel between modern and ancient times through time and space channels. After all, it is based on Einstein's theory of relativity. It is very interesting to write about the protagonist traveling between modern times and ancient times through time and space channels. This can show the direct collision between modern times and ancient times. There are already many stories about the protagonists rebelling in the early Qing Dynasty, including the Kangxi Dynasty and the Yongzheng Dynasty. It would be interesting to write a book in which the protagonist rebelled between Kublai Khan and Yuan Dynasty in the Yuan Dynasty or Zhu Yuanzhang and Hongwu Year in the Ming Dynasty.

Invite the big man to die, don't be happy. Kill all the landlords and aristocratic families. Even if the workers and peasants become powerful and turn into evil dragons, it is better than the aristocratic family in the late Han Dynasty to continue to be in power. They have ruined the Han Dynasty and still deserve to live in the new era. Kill most of the old privileged class and kill all their descendants. Don't let any of the sinful ones go.

Recommend one. The Rebirth of Shu Han in the Three Kingdoms

The more I write, the better I get, I can't stop