My Shadow Is a Monster Slayer

Oh, isn't this the author of sex criticism? When will the book be opened again?

Oh oh, the pornographic author has published a new book

After reading the beginning, I wanted to complain about why the main character loves to hide so much in books written now. While keeping a low profile for fear of being exposed, he was doing more suspicious things. He grew up in an orphanage. His physical examination showed no signs of malnutrition, and his academic performance was so good. How could he look like a spy? Besides, it doesn't matter if it's an ancient time, it's a modern high-tech world. The first time you run a mission, you encounter a dozen monsters and eat ten of them, so you say you killed five of them. We don't even say whether you will find more than a dozen monsters through traces when you deal with the scene later. Just say that you have easily eliminated five of them without a few days of training. How do you look like a spy? Also, the group of rats that disappeared at the beginning could not be found. The only suspicious person was the protagonist. All of the above suspicions can be cleared by proactively revealing the shadow's superpowers, but the protagonist just won't tell them. Don't talk about dual abilities, is a magician just one ability? That boss said you were a magician when he first met him? They've all said that the boss's abilities have limitations, but they don't explain them. If the target of good key training is inappropriate, it will lead to the onset of non-victim paranoia and just do what spies do.

You are simply taking things too far, and you are going too far. Internet article writers all want to write something new and jump out of their comfort zones. This is a good idea, but you have to act within your ability. I only insisted on reading more than 20 chapters of this book before I couldn't hold on. It has no highlights and cannot attract people to read. Moreover, the biggest criticism in the past is that too much space is spent on the dolls and character cards. I think this character is very likable, and then you don't give up, and then temporarily add a male supporting character card at the end, and then it doesn't look out of place. But this is a big problem. You are also a veteran queen. I'm a palace writer. Everyone comes here for the harem. You gave away one at the beginning. Maybe you wanted to write a group portrait, but the problem is, it doesn't look like a group portrait. The way this book can make money is to write about the harem and daily life in a weird and wasteland style, and then give a big goal or BOSS. Although it looks very cliché, everyone can read the book quickly and easily, and it is enough and in place. Someone must buy it.

All I can say is that the apocalyptic novel is seriously written as romance and entertainment. . . . . . The author should write anime fan fiction, I feel the potential is huge

Shao Dan, I really like you🥰. For you, I want to eat braised eggs!

So, in the next book, can you write about your best little fox with a big body and a good kidney?

After reading the book, I didn't understand a few things Why does the male protagonist hide his powers? Because he was afraid that he would be misunderstood as having dual powers, would he be arrested and sliced ​​into pieces? The question is, isn't Shadow just a single ability? Shadow eats, converts energy, strengthens the host, and has the ability to transform. Isn't it a mutated version of venom or the black light virus? What does the author say? What does the magician say? His powers are very comprehensive, so won't people misunderstand that he has many powers? To suppress the author's growth? On purpose? Or for water articles? Abilities that can clearly be explained as shadows are developed just like Devil Fruits. The first part was fine, but in the middle part there was an inexplicable campus atmosphere, which was outrageous. It was an apocalyptic novel, and it was too light novel. I didn't quite understand whether it was a post-apocalyptic survival or a Japanese light novel and another world novel?

This book was above par until the heroine appeared. What are the personalities of these two heroines? This apocalyptic style of painting is completely broken, the atmosphere is too strong

Author, let's write about foxes🦊!