Twin Narutos

I think I was also someone who was waiting for the update to watch Naruto. Now, I feel like vomiting when I read a fanfic, and I even feel like vomiting when I see the words Naruto and ninja, just like One Piece. A group of lunatics live in a world where lunacy is set, and lunatic plots occur. The fact is, when the conversations are long, the memories are overflowing, and the extras are everywhere, it's time to give up!

Practice your writing skills😥

Which of the jinchuriki in other villages didn't go on a rampage and kill a few people when they were young? What happened to the protagonist jumping a few times? Also, he was protected by Kakashi before jumping a little, and then he let go a little bit when he was under Jiraiya's supervision. Later, when Tsunade returned to the village, he let go completely. Don't be too optimistic about the group. Hidden, when a bug in the ground meets the weak and incompetent Hokage III, he needs to take the blame for existence. If it were for other ninja villages, they would have died seven or eight times ago. If Uchiha hadn't had an incompetent clan leader, weak Shisui, brainwashed Itachi, and crazy Obito, how could he have been exterminated, and Danzo was just a troublemaker.

Every time I read this kind of novel and read the book review, I feel tired. The original work has a lot of loopholes. I can read it no matter how the fan fiction is set. Just reading the book review, haha~ there are a lot of cloud shadow ninjas fighting, it's too awesome

How should I put it, when dealing with ancient Chinese culture in Naruto, I always feel like it's a bit out of place.

How old are you? You're giving advice to Kakashi and Itachi, and you're writing a novel for Jiraiya to help you publish. You're overly flattering yourself.

He was poisoned to death, and the four- or five-year-old male protagonist was so talkative that he would pull out a kunai for everyone he saw. If you don't have the strength, you still hold it in your mouth like that, you are really vicious.

The author has a problem. The Nine Tails is clearly called Nine Lamas, not Trumpets.

When I saw that you could even type Kyuubi's name incorrectly, I knew how unprofessional you were.

A big flaw in this article is that the protagonist's last name is Namikaze and Uzumaki 😰 The circumstances at that time made it impossible for the protagonist to be named Namikaze. Since the Third Generation's principle was to give Naruto the last name Uzumaki, it was impossible for the protagonist to be named Namikaze. I always feel that the author has never watched Naruto 😒

Let's change the names. It's best to call one Menma and the other Naruto 😅😅😅

The name makes me feel tired, really. It's okay to change the protagonist's name, but does he have to be called the same and change his surname? It's amazing that twins have the same name and two surnames. It's the first time I've seen it in a real-life novel 🤔

Just look at the introduction and you will be immediately poisoned. There is someone who was reborn into the Uzumaki family and hugged the third generation. If I don't use you to death, you will be considered a waste.

The author changed the main character's name. The last name is too weird. It's really not as good as Uzumaki Menma and Uzumaki Naruto, or Namine Menma and Uzumaki Naruto. It's too weird that both of them are named Naruto.

It was probably written by a reader, just a self-help little white article! !

Naruto is like an older brother. He is good or bad. He memorizes texts and so on. Waterma gets goosebumps. If you write about Naruto, you should go and find out more about it.

Shouldn't the twins be called Uzumaki Menma? What the hell is Naruto Namikaze?

Itachi Uchiha's children Peace, family joy The Fourth Generation and Three Sons Mirai Namikaze (Author, you are really not afraid of crashing with Mirai Sarutobi, are you?) Jiraiya and Orochimaru's children Misuki Tsunade's children Kato Hashirama (Do you hate your grandfather? Want to hear your grandfather call you mom? Or do you think the first Hokage is not famous anymore, so he did it like this to increase his presence? Do you believe that when Master Madara heard this name, he immediately cut down Konoha with his sword? ) Kakashi wants to name his child Hatake wants to name him (this is not a name anymore, when did you inherit the naming style of the fourth generation? The author of the original Hokage will cry, ordinary people can't choose this stupid name)

The novel contains serious spoilers. The author is a cover-up type and thinks things too simply. I don't know when I've offended someone.

And what the heck is it that you squeeze Naruto⁉You still don't like Kakashi, how much do you want to change the original work?

It seems that this book, for the first time, I think The Riddler is pretty good (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)

Who is the heroine? Is it a harem?

You can get a lot of criticism over there for free, but here, no one has read or commented, hahaha, I thought there would be a contrast.

When I saw the ending, Xiang Ling did not appear. There was only a mention in the Chunin Exam that Sasuke went to save someone, and then disappeared. In the end, the BOSS Black Zetsu was not solved. It was right not to write a Boruto biography, but you didn't write Black Zetsu too much, right? There is also the mentally ill Toneri. Although he is in the theatrical version, he doesn't even have a role, right? Even after Hinata gave birth to her baby, she still didn't come out and jump around.