He Only Became an Immortal at the Age of Eighteen, Is There Any Hope for Help?

It was quite interesting in the front, but I couldn't stand it anymore when I got to Kunlun. What a shame about this subject matter. .

Just see where the jade pendants can be merged. You don't need to look at it later. Suddenly it becomes confusing and you can't understand it.

There are some flaws, and the jade pendant can be used for group chat! How can we chat across distances when people inside don't care? ? ? Then they all said that they did not cultivate immortality.

Author, you'd better build up your reputation first. Forget about the last book Eunuch. If this book still does the same, author, your reputation will be completely ruined.

The first part was okay, but after meeting Xunzi, I felt that the protagonist was a bit too middle-aged.

In fact, there is no need to lick Qin Shihuang so hard. He is not particularly remarkable. The unification of the seven kingdoms is not his personal credit, it is the credit of the three generations of Qin. The system of prefectures and counties is not his alone. It is the idea of ​​​​all the ministers of Qin. Just because he is the leader, you cannot think that all the credit belongs to him. To be honest, Qin Shihuang was not very good as an emperor. He came as a loser. Don't be misled by some illusions when looking at historical issues. Some people tout him as an emperor through the ages. These are overly mythical figures. It is incredible to look at the past from the perspective of future generations. According to historical records such as historical records, Qin was a very harsh and bitter era. It may have been the slander of the Han, but one fact cannot be changed, that is, Qin collapsed in just a few decades. At least Qin was not a good era, otherwise even the old Qin people would not have watched Qin die.

How is this book? Is Venomous still a good one or a fool? The bad guy is fine, but forget about the second grade. It's too embarrassing.

You are a modern person, are you that stupid? You should know the truth by more than 20 chapters. Don't be less logical for the sake of plot.

By the way, do people in the Qin Dynasty know about the heavens, the realms, the star fields, and the universe?

The protagonist is acting like a fool and has given up.

From the introduction, one of the protagonists is extraordinary and the others are not, so that's why I read it. What the hell is it? The people in the group are better than the protagonist in casual play. . . . . . 10 Points for introduction, 1 point for writing

It's a bit outrageous, shouldn't I be confused the moment I see the jade pendant? At least ask more about the past events in the group. After all, he is an old group member. It would be outrageous to just grab the treasure and kill someone!

A good song is played badly, the author is awesome

The protagonist is different from normal people. He is no longer mentally retarded. He is like a psychopath. It poisoned me to death.

Personally, I feel like the front is fine but the back is broken.

Obviously, it was fine to focus on cultivating immortality in the past. It was light-hearted and humorous. I thought it would be a humorous and hilarious story about cultivating immortality. Who knew that Xunzi would start to show off after he came out? I even know how his plot will develop next. Alas! Not interesting! Same and boring

It's only since I went to Kunlun that I can't understand it anymore

It's simply outrageous. Decades before the protagonist came, all the people in the group were fake. Once the protagonist succeeded in practicing, there were actually real people in the group, and there were quite a lot of them.

How can there be any immortality? It was just a dream of a seventeen-year-old boy while he was meditating. At dawn, the boy woke up and figured it out, no longer seeking immortality 🤓

After going to Kunlun. Simply. Can't stand it

More than a hundred chapters in, the protagonist expresses disapproval of the behavior of the "Black Emperor" Jedi Tiantong in creating the mortal world. He said that the development of the 21st century is also magical, and said that it would be wonderful if extraordinary abilities were completely universal. It talks a lot of "reasons" and I personally find it annoying. Is this meant to convince us readers? Human nature is selfish. In a world where one person can be an enemy of the country, what do you mean by democracy? Can't we just say that the protagonist wants to live forever?

To be honest, the practice system of this book is very confusing. It looks particularly awkward. Said it was real leather. In fact, most of it is the protagonist's conjecture. It has nothing to do with brooches in the first place. You still have to lean over there.

Those who praise the Qin Dynasty every day are the same as those who criticize the Republic of China every day. Don't use your brain to think about why the Qin Dynasty failed so quickly, and why when the Qin Dynasty perished, so few Qin people stood up to save the Qin Dynasty (the Yuan Dynasty and the Republic of China had a lot of old people and young people, but the Qin Dynasty didn't), just use your brain.

The style has been distorted since the beginning of Hunting the Jade Pendant Owner, there is no need to look further

First, the protagonist was forcibly reduced to intelligence by the author Second, there was a lot of nonsense, and things that can be explained in one sentence were a lot Third, there were too many meaningless plots, such as Xunzi Confucius' temple showing the saints, a bunch of people with jade pendants exploded, the protagonist forced Lai Lai to change his nickname in a long article, and I didn't think about the last sentence, so how much space did you spend to cheat on the word count? Fourth, the main purpose is unclear, and the protagonist has been reduced to a novice's self-advocacy article. Don't dig into each chapter in a long way. In the end, you don't want to think about it anymore, and you will come back to the next chapter.

Eunuch... Even though I haven't watched it since I started traveling to another world.

Come to think of it, the brothers have also noticed... This book took a lot of hard work, so naturally I will not give up on this book. It is impossible to be a eunuch (unless my grades are so bad that I can't afford to eat) Otherwise, I will definitely continue writing this book!

Just treat it as a joke and just read a few chapters to have fun. The setting is too loose. Where did the Qin Dynasty come from heaven, and where did the moral heaven come from.

After reading more than 30 chapters, the main reason is that the character of the protagonist does not convey the feeling of cultivating immortality at all. He is more chaotic and vulgar than us ordinary people. He makes up his mind and makes up all kinds of fantasies. The author probably wrote wherever he thought, without any plan. Of course, the concept of this book is attractive, but the writing needs to be strengthened. If you stick with it and see if there are any new ideas, you can continue reading.

I say that the First Emperor burned books and harassed Confucians. Who objects?