
Transmigrated to Tokyo: Activating the Onmyoji System from the Start
穿越东京,开局激活阴阳师系统
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 673k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Original ACG Fantasy
- Updated
- 3y ago
- English
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313Chapters
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Having just read chapter 13, I really can't bring myself to like the female lead. I truly don't understand why the author made her a bully. I doubt many readers can accept this characterization, since school bullying is genuinely abhorrent.
There are just too many toxic elements in this story. Let's not even talk about the female lead. The protagonist is kidnapped at the beginning and almost drowned. Then, for 2 million yen, she has to serve the family that wants to kill her. It's ridiculous. And the protagonist is a superhuman, while those who want to kill her are ordinary people. Even if she doesn't retaliate, just keeping her distance wouldn't be so cruel.
After watching for a while, I feel there are various flaws in the beginning. Exorcising a yakuza boss's daughter for only 2 million yen? Helping a third-party organization catch a large-scale evil spirit murder case for only 3 million yen? Exorcising an ordinary person for only 200,000 yen?
The opening is discouraging; he's another one who treats yen like yuan. 2 Million yen per case—he earns less than Kogoro Mouri. He might as well become a detective; at least he's not in mortal danger. If you're unsure about pricing, you can look at Coca-Cola; they're professionals. In Japan, a bottle of Coke costs about 100 yen.
The protagonist's so-called calm persona feels somewhat disjointed and nonsensical. He claims to be calm, but it seems like he brought the crisis upon himself (a kind of half-reckless behavior).
Is the protagonist a complete waste? He knew who the Aquarius man was, and he even provoked him in front of him, but couldn't act due to a lack of evidence. Meanwhile, the man went on a killing spree on the subway, and the protagonist was utterly useless. Please remember me, the Shennong who died from poisoning, all you who come after. Goodbye.
I'm really curious, the article doesn't reveal who the female lead is at all, right? Why are so many people in this thread jumping to conclusions? The description of Mona seems to be trying to write her in the direction of Menreiki. I don't think the delinquent girl character is that bad. It would be absurd if the daughter was not affected by her father being a yakuza boss.
The opening is crucial. One major flaw is that the driver never expected the seemingly helpless "little devil" Mona to be manipulated so easily by the protagonist. [You're all her father's subordinates; the protagonist is a master entrusted with this task, free from being controlled, so of course he can afford to treat Mona better.]
This S-rank talent and system are ridiculously weak. Putting aside the talent, the system can't be opened under the Nightmare Curse of the Aquarius Man? What the hell? A mere Aquarius Man can block the system?
I'm not going to read any further after Chapter 8. By the way, has the author considered revising it? This is too discouraging!! A mere two million yen is only about 100,000 RMB. Not only does he have to exorcise evil spirits for someone, but he also has to manage the later stages of the story, and the original owner of this body even gets beaten up. Is it really that fun to have a delinquent girl by your side?