Transmigrated to Tokyo: Activating the Onmyoji System from the Start

I just read Chapter 13 and I really don't like the heroine. I really don't understand why the author set the heroine to be a bully. I feel that not many readers can accept this setting. After all, school bullying and other things are really disgusting.

There are really too many points to block the poison, let's not talk about the heroine. In the beginning, the protagonist is kidnapped and almost drowned. Then the protagonist has to serve the family who wants to kill the protagonist for 2 million yen. I am really speechless. The protagonist is a transcendent, and the person who wants to kill the protagonist is an ordinary person. If you don't say it, you won't take revenge. If you stay away, it won't be so poisonous.

After watching it for a long time, I felt that there were all kinds of poisonous points in the early stage. Exorcising evil spirits for the daughter of a gang boss cost only 2 million yen? It only costs 3 million yen to help a third agency catch a large-scale evil murder case? Helping ordinary people exorcise evil spirits only costs 200,000 yen? In reality, a fake master costs tens of thousands of RMB. Would it be better to start with a few tens or even millions of RMB if you are a little famous? There are various restrictions on the protagonist's actions. First of all, a third-level evil object can block the protagonist's system and S-level Sky Fox bloodline. What is said later that if it affects normal people, it will be imprisoned by a third agency. Fighting against evil objects is a compulsory fight, so there are so many rules? If these rules really exist, I'm afraid most of the extraordinary people won't overthrow your third organization first.

At first I tried to persuade him to quit, but it was another person who used Japanese yen as RMB. For a case of 2 million yen, he earned less than Kogoro Mori. For this small amount of money, I might as well change my career to become a detective, since my life is not in danger. If you don't know how to set prices, check out the Coca-Cola Company, they are professional. A bottle of Coke costs about 100 yen in Japan. 200W is 2w bottle, domestically it costs 3 yuan per bottle, which translates into purchasing power of 6w. You spend 60,000 to hire a master to exorcise demons. This is so funny. And the so-called x channel is so depreciated that there is no spare real estate? Even if a person is afraid of death, the entire apartment, even if it is rented, for a small amount of money, he is willing to let his daughter live in a shabby house. Which one has he promised to love the most? That's it? Obviously broke his own setting. The plot arrangement is also too deliberate. I just offended the bottle man, and then the bottle man came immediately. The key point was that the man talked too much before he was taken away, which was very abrupt. The villain should be gradually approaching, giving a sense of storm coming, and not jumping into the face directly. The plot has no tension. In short, the details were not well controlled and the main plot was not designed well. Numb.

The so-called calm persona of this protagonist is a bit fragmented, and there is a sense of uncertainty. It is the kind of feeling that he claims to be calm, but it seems that he brought it on himself when he fell into crisis (the kind of semi-reckless but not reckless).

Is the protagonist a loser? Since he knows who the bottle man is and he still provokes you in front of you, but he can't take action without evidence, he ends up killing people on the subway, and the protagonist is of no use there. Please remember me, the latecomer, as a Shennong who died of poison. Goodbye.

I'm very curious, the article didn't reveal who the heroine is at all, right? Why do so many people in the building jump to conclusions? The description of Mana seems to be written in the direction of spirituality. I don't think the character of the little girl is very poisonous. The father is the boss of the underworld. It is outrageous that the daughter is not affected. Besides, her nature is not bad. She is more of a naughty child than a bully. The economic system is just looking for faults. No one would actually care about the so-called exchange rate after reading a novel, right? No way! No way! No way! ! My requirement for the economic system is not to make miscalculations This book is overall very good. I personally like monsters very much, with all kinds of strange settings. For me, the only bad point is that there are too few Onmyoji points, but Nioh 2 has more settings and images, such as monkey ghosts, Guho birds, etc. Another bad thing is that the author has packed in too many and complicated elements. Novels that favor two dimensions tend to rely on original works. There are too many works that many people may not understand at all. You didn't even create a setting collection to explain it. To put it simply: the author has invisibly set the threshold for readers too high. For example, for me, I first came to Onmyoji. When I saw the chapter where the monkey demon was summoned, if I had not played Nioh 2 and knew the image and setting of the monkey demon, I would have missed this book. I believe that many people saw Guhuoniao holding wine in his arms and have probably forgotten about Guhuoniao.

The beginning is very critical, poisonous point 1. Mr. Driver did not expect that the helpless Mana, known as the little devil, would be played by the protagonist [You are all her father's subordinates, the protagonist is the entrusted master, of course he can pay more Mana if he is not controlled by others. . Poison point 2. As a Yakuza child, why would you follow the male protagonist to live in a shabby apartment? You should think that the male protagonist lives in Mo Na's house. The place is big and human resources can be easily used. It can be used at will and can better deal with various situations.

This S-level talent and system are too exaggerated. Not to mention the talent, the system cannot be opened under Bottle Man's Nightmare Curse? What the hell, just a bottle man can block the system?

I don't want to read Chapter 8 anymore. Has the author considered changing it? You are too dissatisfied! ! A mere two million yen is only about 100,000 yuan. Not only do you exorcise someone's evil spirits, but you also have to take care of the aftermath, and you were also beaten up. Isn't it fun to have a little girl by your side?