Douluo Dalu: Sending Xiao Wu to Spirit Hall as a Saintess from the Start

The writing is okay, but how did you finish the book?

Author, are you really going to cut it off?????

The transformation story looks okay, I hope I can finish it Come on

Author, don't be a eunuch, it's hard to find such an interesting novel with Wang Qiuer as the protagonist 😆

I wonder if it's a hundred? 🙂

There is very little text about transformation, I didn't want to talk about it, but I really can't understand the plot 1 The sea is boundless, the number of words in this book can be reduced to at least half so that it won't make people feel like it's watery, often half of it is written and I don't know where it has drifted away 2 It doesn't matter what the priority is, author, you need to figure out the focus of what you want to write, do you want to write about a chat group or about the protagonist changing the fate of the soul beast? 3 If the protagonist wants to share the luck of the three brothers, he should really be a good boy. Don't you know the word "take it for your own use"? What are you doing secretly? Is helping others a shameful thing? I'm still worried about how to send plug-ins. Can you read the part edited by Ye Lingling?

Let the author write about Lily, it's very promising.

Except for the title of the book, which is not very good, the rest is pretty good.

Damn it, I haven't been here for a while and I'm actually dying of it

It's really good, but it's too expensive