Hogwarts: Dark Arts Awakens

It can be regarded as a rare HP fan art in recent times. The scenes and character interactions are delicately depicted. It can work hard to keep the accounts flowing. The investment effort can be felt. However, the production capacity may be limited because of this. What's interesting is that the protagonists of most online works are similar to their authors in terms of values ​​or personality. The protagonist of this book is a little indifferent and realistic, but the author (judging from the way he talks about and deals with Dumbledore in this chapter) is quite compassionate. The only worrying aspect of this book is probably the problem that all HP fans have. The risk of eunuchs/unfinished web novels has always been high, and the risk of eunuchs/unfinished HP fanfiction is even higher. Speed-faster and gentler masterpieces usually suffer from long-term storage of books after collection, and it is common for them to die.

It should be said that this is the author's self-pleasure story. The early stage is too procrastinating. Basically the first volume is all about the author's self-interest writing the background. There are so many things about a time-travelling baby, and it is basically a self-pleasure story in the brain. It is too toxic and is not recommended to be entered...

If it weren't for the fact that there were no articles about the mobile game Goldfinger, I would have stopped reading it. What the heck is a cursed child? You said it yourself and no one would read it. Rowling eats books. The titles of the first few chapters are also persuasive. Do you want to write for yourself or to make money? If you just want to write for fun, then treat it like I didn't say that.

Author, can you please update too slowly?

The author writes well! Promise me not to write a book next time 🙏

It's been a long time since I wrote a comment. From the writing point of view, there is nothing wrong with this book. The logic and language are relatively smooth. At the beginning, the protagonist talks too much to himself. There is no problem in explaining the origin of the protagonist. However, if this book has little to do with the drama Cursed Child, or if we say that we are not going to write too much about the plot of that drama, all the speculations the protagonist makes about the world view and plot at the beginning are nonsense. They can be explained clearly in two chapters or interspersed. The pace is too slow. I couldn't bear it when I saw that the protagonist was eleven years old and wanted to explore some old house with his friends. The main storyline of Harry Potter is basically in Hogwarts. The plot of this book before entering school is too long-winded. The exploration of some old house might as well be placed in the first grade. During the summer vacation, it is right to go to school early and start the main plot (unless you don't plan to go to school) There is no problem with other basic writing techniques, and it can be regarded as above average. If the author can exercise the rhythm and plot conception through this book, the future can be expected

Has the author thought about how to balance the game and reality? I remember that the damage of fireworks in the game seemed to be higher than that of Avatar without stacks.

What kind of mess is this? I can't understand it.

See what this is? A newly opened book with only 4 chapters. We can keep him on the bookshelf. Hope you don't die

The protagonist keeps talking to himself, there is no plot at all, he keeps adding settings, skipping through Chapter 13, I really can't stand it anymore, it feels like the protagonist has taken 13 steps, and every step is a chapter.

After reading the twenty chapters, each chapter is filled with the main character's thoughts, worrying about this and that. From time to time, a new work will be brought in, and he will talk about it over and over again. I'm just a pure movie fan. I've never heard of the official fandoms mentioned by the author. This article is so confusing that I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye.

It's a waste of good subject matter and creativity. The author's writing is not bad, but the rhythm is too bad. It is estimated that only one tenth of the content is the plot, and the rest is long paragraphs of background introduction, psychological description and the author's complaints. I have already swiped the screen as fast as possible, but I found that I am still not as good as the author.

Almost tied. The writing is pretty good, but the pacing feels really wrong. The author really likes to talk about settings, and the impression I get is: If I know the original work/original work, I think what you are talking about is too cumbersome; and if I don't know the original work, I can't get a complete concept from the setting that the author digs into bits and pieces, and it still looks foggy. I have watched HP and played Magic Awakening, but I don't understand the protagonist's life experience, so I felt the above two feelings at the same time in a fan work. And because the setting is written in a large space, the occurrence process of an event is always interrupted. Although there is no place for empathy in the original writing - but if the event is written at the peak of emotion, wouldn't it be: brewing the emotion → suddenly narrating to supplement the setting of the character who appears → brewing the emotion again → suddenly narrating to supplement the setting of the opposing character →... Now it's just: the beginning of the event → talk about the setting of the character → what he started to do → a very complete explanation of why he did what he did → a little more about his psychological activities → continue to write about the development of the event → a little more about the settings involved in this event → maybe other people's psychological activities... So, this way of writing can probably explain why the author's plot can be so delayed. That is to say... Fans really don't need to talk about so many settings. Even if you want to talk about it, there is no need to have some original character or thing appear in the same frame as the protagonist and just analyze most of him. The details are appropriate, dear!

Can anyone give me an accurate estimate of when the plot will start? After reading more than a dozen chapters, I saw a person with an abnormal mind travel through time and worry about this and that. He wanted to change but nothing changed. Self-narcissism and self-hypnosis every day, like a lunatic who ran away from the hospital. Yes, it gives the impression that the author is not here to write a book, but to record his own yy.

After reading ten chapters, here's a summary First of all, if you haven't seen the stage play of Cursed Child, it will seem very difficult, with clouds, mountains and fog! And if you haven't played the game Magic Awakening, you probably won't get a sense of immersion. The setting of the game is really a highlight, I feel very excited! In terms of plot... There is no plot. The ten chapters are about 30,000 words long. There is basically no plot and no main line. Can you believe it? A few friends are pushing a stroller around the world. This is the background. The author is enjoying himself throughout the whole process, with various lengthy analyses, lengthy complaints, and lengthy explanations of what the protagonist should do, what not to do, and why he made such a choice (in fact, the protagonist did nothing). You can feel that the author is writing with care, but we don't know whether the author knows that we can't understand it. Based on a stage play Cursed Child that not many people have seen, the main character is a baby, and the analysis is 30,000 words long... Finally, I finally analyzed my identity at the end of Chapter 10, and it is clear that I can write a few sentences in less than one chapter. Except that the game setting is a highlight, the remaining thirty thousand words are gained... I probably understand that the author is complaining about the poor stage play of the Cursed Child, and the complaints are well-founded, and I am convinced... So, why don't you post it in a post or forum? More people will watch it and discuss with you...

I vomited, read Chapter 12, and wrote a lot of nonsense in Chapter 12. It was completely the author's own self-pleasure, a lot of nonsense.

Too much talk, no real content, too much water to grasp the key points, too obscene and unrealistic, wearing the skin of the game Magic Awakening but failing to understand the attraction of Magic Awakening. Summary - a little white text with some statistics, there are many poisonous points and puddles, even if you are skinny and skinny, you can read it.

The writing is so messed up, no wonder Cursed Child is not well-known. "I haven't read it anyway." It's similar to what one chapter comment said. The protagonist is the same as Yi Xiaochuan. The protagonist has been refuting it during the bb time and wants to maintain history. This is a fan. Even those who are similar to the protagonist do not expressly protect history like this book. It's annoying to watch. I don't know what happens next. Anyway, the first 10 chapters are all about setting up and thinking about whether I will disappear. This is my first time reading a fan novel by a fan. If this offends me, I will not write a novel myself, I am just a reader.

I persisted until chapter 10, but I couldn't accept this style. I was single-player the whole time, talking to myself, and my one-year-old child was running around the country. Let me introduce the first volume to latecomers. Voldemort's daughter came back to the present from the future, gave birth to the protagonist, and then abandoned her. Then the protagonist is afraid that time will cause him to disappear due to refutation, and he makes all kinds of speculations and makes trouble. If you can't accept it after reading a few chapters, I suggest you jump directly to the second volume.

The little girl's family was so disgustingly written, and the protagonist had lived alone for so long that he somehow found a dad to take care of him, and then started a life of restraint. He could have solved the problem without any delay, but in the end the protagonist had to get into trouble, but this should be what the author wanted. The result of hydrology, for the sake of hydrology, he tried every means to delay even a trivial matter as long as possible. From the time when the Imperius Curse controlled Pettigrew to collect information, I could tell that it was starting to get messed up. At the beginning of the chapter, he was asked to collect information, and Luo Liba was chatty for a long time. At the end of the chapter, it was discovered that Pettigrew had just started to act. There was a bunch of useless stuff in the middle.

I still don't understand how the male protagonist is sure that he is the child of the fortune-telling bird. The ten chapters are shrouded in mist, and the results are all based on the protagonist's subjective assumptions and psychological descriptions. Finally, I found out that the setting also has an official fan, which is so cool.

I still can't forget the scene of my Daniel and my teammate's Daniel breastfeeding each other😭

This is extremely poisonous. I'm just kidding. I've never seen a novel in which the first ten chapters are devoted to setting. Oh no, it's not writing. It's asking the protagonist to guess the setting, and then the readers read it in a mess. Things that can be explained in one chapter, I wrote ten chapters, and I was afraid that the timeline would change after I traveled through time. With you alone, the timeline is already messed up.

It turned out to be a fake corpse. The author's writing is good. What a pity for the eunuch.

The narration keeps explaining, the narration explains, the narration explains... There is almost no dialogue, I really can't watch it anymore

It's a pity that the time is wrong, this book is better written than many HP fans. Unfortunately the timing was wrong. If it were now, I would definitely pursue it.

Thanks

Although there is too much explanation of the content of the original work, it can still be seen that it was written with care. The author must have lost his mentality later on, and the story was completely unfinished. The third volume is incomplete without looking at the table of contents.

The beginning is really... The first five chapters are okay, quite satisfactory. It gets more and more 💩 from now on. Who can read this beginning? I really couldn't watch Chapter 8 anymore, and I wasn't used to skipping it, so I just gave up.

! ? ! ? ! When I first read it, it was updated 11 hours ago. Now I go back and read it? ? ?