
Ninja World: Payne Peeked into My Diary
忍界:佩恩偷看了我日记
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 257k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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121Chapters
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Oh my god, I just found a copy of Cao Cao's secret diary. Now the atmosphere in Qidian is getting weirder and weirder.
Read the introduction. The point of view is special. It is not that difficult to let the traitorous ninja return home and take power. Otherwise, it is not shrinking to the rain ninja. It depends on your performance.
Through the Dark Bible, my diary was seen by the health teacher.
Wu Zetian, Zhu Yuanzhang, Qin Shihuang. Li Shimin. Bibi Dong. Now it's Payne again. I want to see it now. Who can read this diary?
Doesn't a diary record what happened? This is a memo, right?😥😥
From live-streaming novels to chat groups to being considered a boss by others but only you don't know Later, everything you do is the opposite of what the protagonist wants to do to the current diary writing (all systems)
When you follow the original battle, you should adjust it according to the plot. The plot has changed and you still copy it mechanically 😒
I heard my voice before and now I'm peeking at my diary?
Let's go, isn't this just a retelling of the original Pain's Battle of Konoha ? In addition to advancing the time of this battle, your protagonist also has an extra Payne chasing Danzo. You can at least push the progress of the plot faster. There are also those few chapters of meaningless retelling of the original plot without any changes. The word count is low and updates are slow.
Haven't read it yet. Travelers don't write their diaries in Chinese?
It's really too watery. I wrote 7 or 8 chapters when I was playing Kai, and several more chapters when I was playing the game. A little too watery.
If 70% of the content is omitted, the novel can continue smoothly. If it were not a studio article, then the author is really a wizard, spending energy and effort to describe some meaningless content.
From the time I wrote about going to Konoha, the plot has been a mess and the timeline has been a mess.
Damn it, Payne is the protagonist
My diary: December 23rd I woke up early today, it's still dark Breakfast didn't suit my taste Lunch didn't suit my taste 16:15
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I've only read three chapters, and I don't understand why people in Naruto can recognize the characters written by the protagonist, and why a time traveler writing a diary that he thinks only he knows would call Nagato a god instead of calling him by his first name. When I think of this, I have no desire to continue reading.
The plot is too boring and the protagonist has little role and presence.
I feel like there are too many meaningless plots. Why is the ink like in anime? One battle can be written for so long. I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye.
The protagonist was just gone He didn't even show his face when it was put on the shelves
"A person who keeps a diary." "Who writes a diary?" "Yes." "Do you keep a diary." "I don't write." "Do you keep a diary?" "Who can write down what is in the heart in a diary?" "What is written can't be called what is in the heart?" "Despicable!"
{"NickName":"Hair Time","UserId":327189949}Super II can indeed have the power to destroy the galaxy. If you don't believe it, please read the chapter of the Xilu chapter versus Bo. With a combat power of 2k, you can easily explode stars. This is also mentioned in the original book.
The more I read, the more confused I became. I felt that there were too many meaningless descriptions of the supporting characters