Global Instances: From the Start, I Have Two SSS Templates

I feel a little sorry for the author. It's hard to write a stand-alone game, right? After reading about forty chapters, I have a few suggestions, well-meaning suggestions from old bookworms. You can delete it if you don't like it. 1. The author does not have enough grasp of the refreshing feeling of data flow. If the game is too high, it will give a feeling of emptiness like playing a stand-alone game with modifiers turned on, especially when the protagonist's game has no effect. What this kind of data cool article wants is that I can do what you can't do, and you can't understand what I can do. What's even worse is that when the protagonist wakes up, he immediately feels like he's been stripped naked by someone else. Add in a few completely indifferent supporting characters, and it becomes even less exciting and interesting. 2. Setting issues. In order to highlight how awesome the protagonist is, the talent level is set too outrageously. Basically, talent determines everything. If I have high talent, I won't play with you who have low talent. This kind of universal value seriously violates the basic three views of modern people, and also violates the background of the book (a disaster background that requires full cooperation). Several conflicts between talent levels made it difficult to feel immersed in the game. 3. The character of the protagonist is essentially a loser. There is no reason to cheat, and the double top talents come out of nowhere, but it doesn't matter, Shuangwen is cool, I can accept it. But the fight in the arena in more than thirty chapters was inexplicable. Don't you have a B number? If he didn't die, could he beat the S-class? Doesn't this seriously violate your settings? As we all know, when it comes to playing games and playing dungeons, a good T is your father. Especially in a world view where people really die, this kind of flesh and blood body should be respected by nature, right? But so far I haven't seen anything. I've only seen DPS and Nai's contempt for T, as well as T's own inferiority complex. This is completely unreasonable, very unreasonable. 4. Dragging the rhythm. I don't understand where the author learned this outdated old technique and deliberately dragging the rhythm. You see, when you play the game, any valuable item you get in the early stage will be used immediately, right? Because for a poor game character, even a white outfit is a picture from 0 to 1. What about the protagonist? I got a treasure chest but didn't open it, and then another, and then another, and by the time I saw it, I already had four in my hand. I just want to know, is your protagonist already in the stage of becoming a god? It doesn't matter if the treasure chest is opened or not, there is no need for it anyway. Or maybe the treasure chest can produce babies? This old-fashioned method is very discouraging. If I had been following your new book issue, I wouldn't have posted this. I would have just clicked on it. I looked at the titles of the subsequent chapters, and it was really unpleasant. The author has worked very hard, with more than 700,000 words in a single game, and he is still writing. I will support you by subscribing to Chapter 10, but I really can't read it. Come on, just practice writing, don't pursue speed, think more while writing.

Are these two sisters the only ones who will be permanent teammates in the future? At present, it seems that these two sisters are not strong enough. The gap is too big. There is no difference between playing alone with two girls.

You can lose the team battle, but the wet nurse must die. . The mortality rate of meat shields is definitely not as high as that of milk

It's outrageous. Monsters attacking the city are just for fun. The ratio of wild monsters to humans is 100,000:3???

Those two sisters are so vicious, are they the vases that are holding them back? Does the protagonist have to be a nanny?

Good looking

It feels okay, but every time I encounter a high-level enemy, I feel that "No Injury" has no effect at all. There is no non-injury, and there is no counterattack with real damage.

Chapter 36: Wild monsters attack the city and start to enjoy themselves

The first real copy was badly written.

Why is there no villain to slap you in the face?