Abyss Game: The Superhuman Lord

If you don't realize Superman's ability, you give me this boxing practice. I'm here to see Superman, not martial arts. Moreover, the author's manipulation feels too heavy. Since it is a game, isn't it normal for the protagonist to find system bugs? Just add various settings to prevent the protagonist from getting sunlight. If it is farming, then you should expand the farming scale and cabin.

I thought this book was an invincible text, but I didn't know that it gave a system at the beginning, and then it was cut down to the Superman template, and then the Superman template was cut down until it couldn't develop without sunlight. It feels like even the protagonist's IQ has been weakened.

I thought it was an invincible article, but it turned out to be a new book, just like those that give you super talents at the beginning. If you want to see superhuman invincibility, I suggest you don't be fooled by his name.

After reading Chapter 50 or 60, I'm ready to withdraw! This is just my personal opinion, I hope the author doesn't think I'm a scumbag! 🙏 First of all, the stall is too big, the combat power system is confusing, the demon god (or even above) appears in the early stage, and the presence is constantly refreshed. How can I put it, the protagonist does not look like the protagonist... And various settings are laid out. As a reader, it is difficult for me to remember and I feel that the number of characters is too low... The protagonist has already turned into several legends before he changed his job! It's not impossible to write like this. I've seen it written like this in other books, but I think it's difficult for the author to control it! Secondly, the protagonist is obviously a bastard. Wouldn't it be nice to write a cool novel, but he has to write a mundane story about mortal struggle... Could it be that the author writes whatever thoughts he has in his mind? Want to stew New Year dishes in an iron pot? 🤔

It feels a bit like picking up sesame seeds and throwing away watermelons. Everyone is watching Superman, um, you have a golden finger, but the author seems to be deliberately going against the readers, writing a lot of unintelligible things, which means that it can be concise and less written. The readers want to see Superman become stronger, so he wrote very little. Equal to nothing. Putting the cart before the horse. What are the things you do when you practice martial arts? They all make the body stronger after practicing, and there are very few benefits. You also write a lot. I just picked up the sesame seeds and ate them hard, throwing the watermelon far away. The author needs to develop his imagination and stop going astray.

Generally speaking, Superman is a term for invincibility. However, almost every Superman is suppressed by him. Why do you write Superman? Otherwise, you just know everything about Superman and just write some random stuff on your own. How difficult is it to write Superman? Because invincibility It is already difficult to write Superman using only brute force. Why? The plot can't go on, the bad guys punch one after another. What should the editor write? Not to mention Superman who uses his brain. It's not that Superman doesn't use his brain, but it's unnecessary. His brain can keep up with the Speed ​​Force all the way down to The Flash.

If you don't like it, force yourself to suppress your strength. You can enjoy 1000+ sunshine at the beginning without adding attributes. You have to stay at home for a few days, which is called controlling your body. Can your 20 points of strength beat a 300-point strength pig?

When writing a Superman template, don't start from scratch and practice slowly. You can make the enemy strong, but don't make Superman weak.

What you wrote is not Superman. You have to touch the porcelain Superman. Does it make sense?

In fact, the name of this book is "Crossing the Abyss, Superman's Body Begins to Practice Martial Arts" Other players have no meaning at all, the protagonist can just travel alone. The superhuman body is of no use, and he only has higher martial arts qualifications.