Abyss Game: The Superhuman Lord

Instead of exploring Superman's abilities, you're showing me boxing. I came here to see Superman, not martial arts. Besides, the author's manipulation feels too heavy-handed. Since it's a game, isn't it normal for the protagonist to find system bugs? Instead, you're adding all sorts of settings to prevent the protagonist from getting any sun. If you're going to say it's farming, then why don't you expand the planting area and build a hut?

I thought this book was going to be an invincible story, but it turns out the protagonist was given a system at the beginning, and then it was nerfed down to just a Superman template. Then the Superman template was further nerfed so much that he couldn't develop without sunlight. It feels like even the protagonist's intelligence was weakened.

I thought it was going to be an invincible story, but it's just a reskinned version, like those stories that give you amazing starting talents. If you're looking for a superhuman invincibility, don't be fooled by the title.

I'm reading through chapters 50 or 60, and I'm thinking of quitting! This is just my personal opinion, I hope the author doesn't think I'm a hater! 🙏 First of all, the scope is too broad, the power system is chaotic, and demon gods (or even higher) appear early on, constantly making their presence felt. To be honest, it makes the protagonist seem less like a protagonist...

It feels like picking up the sesame seeds while losing the watermelon. Everyone's here for Superman's cheat-like abilities, but the author seems to be deliberately working against the readers, writing a huge amount of nonsensical stuff. They could have been more concise and to a lesser extent. The part about Superman getting stronger that readers want to see is barely mentioned.

Generally speaking, Superman is a term implying invincibility, yet almost every Superman is suppressed by him. So what's the point of writing about Superman? Either you only have a superficial understanding of Superman and are just making things up. Superman is inherently difficult to write about because he's invincible. Simply relying on brute force makes Superman difficult to write. Why?

I don't like it. They forcefully suppress your strength, giving you 1000+ sunshine at the start without any attribute bonuses, and then insisting you stay home for days under the guise of "mastering your body." Can your 20 points of strength really beat a pig with 300 points of strength?

Don't start from scratch and slowly work your way up when creating a Superman template. You can make the enemy very strong, but don't make Superman very weak.

What you're writing isn't Superman at all; you're just trying to piggyback on Superman's fame. What's the point?

Actually, the title of this book is Crossing the Abyss, a Superhuman Body Begins Martial Arts Training The other players are completely irrelevant; the protagonist should just travel through time alone. Having a superhuman body is pretty useless; it just means you're a little more talented at martial arts.