I Want to Be Number One in the World

From the beginning, I was so young that I couldn't stand it anymore.

Don't write about being invincible. It's better to win and lose. We are all ordinary people. Not every game by Melo goes as he wishes, right?

Anyone with a normal mind would join the national football team, and it would be very beneficial to the male protagonist both in public and private matters. Perform brilliantly in national team games and become famous throughout the country. The whole of China knows you. This will greatly increase the commercial value of the male protagonist. Only playing club games, who watches except football fans? I don't know what the person who left the message saying that he won't join the national team is thinking about because he doesn't like money? I keep saying that football cannot be played by one person, and Melo cannot save the national football team. Who asked the male protagonist to save the country? It's just to go to the national football team to perform. Wouldn't the trashy teammates better show the excellence of the male protagonist? Joining the national football team is for the male protagonist's own benefit. What does the success of the national football team have to do with the male protagonist? You usually work 996, why don't you resign and make no money if you feel a little wronged? You are very tough online, but in real life I don't see you firing the boss.

Are these three chapters of campus life useful? It's just a passing incident and has nothing to do with the main plot.

I like this book very much, but it's a pity that the protagonist joins the national football team. Football is not something that can be done by one person, otherwise Melo would have become an immortal and a Buddha, even a master like Cruyff. A tiger with ten sheep is definitely no match for eleven wolves. I think the best start is for the protagonist to naturalize in a country like the Netherlands or Portugal (it is recommended that the Dutch football level is high, and the important thing is that there is no Hercules Cup), and then the league, the Champions League, the European Cup, the world Cup, Golden Ball Player (World Footballer), during the period, I used my connections to discover several young international players to train in the five major leagues, and then returned to China as superstars to join the national team. I brought the players trained in the five major leagues to win the Asian Cup and the World Cup in one fell swoop (the tenth winner engraved in the Hercules Cup). I used honor to drive domestic football fever (primary school students put down their mobile phones and started playing football). The country rectified the Football Association and the league. If you want to write three consecutive championships or four consecutive championships later, wouldn't it work?

It's not that I want to be disrespectful I don't care if you're a bit sloppy in the previous chapters. Maybe you want the protagonist to transition to this stage smoothly, and I can accept that. But the setting is too unreasonable. A 16-year-old ran within 11 seconds without any running training or posture correction. Did you know that you can win a gold medal in the National Games with just a little training? Secondly, I trained in China until I was 16 before going abroad, and then went abroad for less than a month to score crazy goals in training matches. Is it because the Chinese youth training is too strong or the British Premier League youth training is too bad? And the place where you received your youth training was a domestic club like Wuhan Optics Valley that didn't care about youth training. Is it reasonable? Do you feel immersed? Finally, I want to ask you how the protagonist can play Premier League games at the stage when he has just entered the Premier League youth training. Regardless of whether he is a substitute or not, can he meet the requirements of the Premier League labor certificate or youth training product? Is he qualified to fight? We really think that those of us who read the novel don't understand football and are just fooling around, right? If you are not serious about writing a book like this, goodbye!

The writing is rough and needs improvement. First, you wrote about football in 2012, but you are not reborn in the past. According to real history, if the protagonist is really 🐮13, it should be released in 2012, at least to be famous. However, the protagonist has no reputation, which proves that the author is blind and just obscene. Second, there are no cheats like cheats, but he can run 10.8 Seconds at the age of 16. The author has no sports knowledge at all. Before Su Bingtian, no sprinter of all ages in China could run within 10 seconds or within 11 seconds. They were all the top sprinters in the country. The protagonist is 16 years old and has no special sprint training. What is the concept of casually running 10.8 Seconds easily? It can be said that he is the fastest cub in his current age group. It's impossible not to be discovered by others, but the National Track and Field Center supports you like a treasure. Third, the confrontation between the protagonists is so casual that it can compete with adult players in the Premier League without falling behind. It is too fake. The advantage in strength and muscle confrontation between whites and blacks is too great, and it is difficult for Chinese people to compete with them due to their innate nature. Even if the yellow race is the strongest against South Korea, the most powerful player among them, Son Heung-min, is fast and has average physical confrontation. The combination of Sun Xingmin's speed and technology is his advantage. To sum up, if the author writes a sports article, it can satisfy his interest in writing novels. If you want to make money from this, you should pay more attention and improve the details.

Damn it, you're a football guy and you can't write about football well. It's only 77 chapters, and there are a bunch of female protagonists in the role, and you don't even have any teammates? Stallion? Then you write about the city!

Since the author is writing about the national football team, don't brag about those bad feet, otherwise you will feel disgusted. Also, as soon as you join the national football team, you can immediately lead the national football team to achieve results. You have to have logic to lose. You can't move pig's feet in 2014. There is hope in 2018, but there is no chance in 2022! Only the Chinese Football Association can pull the plan into internal friction.

Why do you have to go to a wealthy family? I really don't understand how many authors write like this. At the age of 17 or 18, I went to the Spanish Second Division, the English Championship, and the German Second Division. I spent two or three years training to lead a team to the next level, win the top league, reach the semi-finals of the Champions League, and even win the Champions League. Then transfer to a wealthy club. Isn't this more challenging and more topical?