Douluo: the Only Immortal Cultivator

The protagonist is a bit silly. After all, he is an old monster who has lived for more than three hundred years, and he is still a monk who grew up in blood feuds and revenge fights. This mind. . . Logically speaking, a normal person who grows up like this will not develop such a naive mind. Unless it's a lunatic like the Joker. Therefore, the protagonist is either a fool or a pervert who has gone crazy. No matter how you set up the characters, no matter how fantasy the book is, you must at least follow the most basic logic. It cannot be said that my book is a fantasy about cultivating immortals, so it can be set in any way. You can't use your settings to challenge readers' worldview and perceptions that have been formed over decades. To give you an example: a horse is a horse, and then when you write a book, you insist on saying that it is a donkey, a second creation, so the horse is a donkey. It can't be like this So, while you set the protagonist to be a 300-year-old monster seeking revenge, you also write such a funny character. My cognition couldn't accept it, so I slipped away.

It's really hard to play solo, and I don't know how I'm doing at writing. Wherever the writing is bad, there is where the writing is okay. If you readers have any comments, please give them some advice! Good or bad, the author is extremely grateful! Bow!

Bibi Dong in her teenage years. The comic version is more interesting ❤️.

Seeing that Bibi Dong was not born with full soul power, I didn't want to read any more.

I've read more than 20 of them, and it's really awkward. The protagonist has lived for so long and is not experienced at all. The plot looks completely different. The author wants to write about everything but doesn't write anything well. It's very unconventional. If he doesn't write about Douluo, he will just start a new book. If he wants to write about fans, he should follow the background of the original work. Don't write a hodgepodge like a system novel with a little bit of everything mixed in 😥

What do you readers think of Bibi Dong's future? What kind of life should Bibi Dong live after getting rid of tragedy. 1. Under the protection of the protagonist, Bibi Dong is free and unrestrained, and always maintains the heart of a girl. 2. With the help of the protagonist, Bibi Dong defied heaven and killed gods, swept across the continent, shocked the world, and ruled the world with the empress. Readers, do you have any other ideas? Please give me lots of advice! Leave lots of comments! Thank you very much to the author! Bow!

Seeing the tragedy that changed Bibi Dong, I thought of a question. Is the Bibi Dong we like the Rakshasa god Bibi Dong, or the silly and sweet Bibi Dong who fell in love with the master? If it is the silly and sweet Bibi Dong, then no problem. If it is the tragic Bibi Dong, will you still like it after changing? What a sin.

Come on, keep an eye on you

I feel that the plot is too bland, and the character of the protagonist could be a bit higher. Some of the inner activities are unnecessary and look like drama instead.

I haven't read the subject matter, but I'm quite optimistic about it.

The author will also open one for Qiankou Reading.

Funny, who has lived for more than three hundred years, I really belong to you.

Why don't you write a fan story and kill Tang San to add to the fun?

This is imitating Shilipo Sword God, some plots are the same!

I haven't read it yet, but your introduction is a bit childish, uh... I'll give it a read, I hope it's a book I can spend money to read.

Why did the author's bacteria stop updating? Quanqin didn't want it anymore?

The title is Douluo, it looks like nothing, it gives me a headache, at least there must be a Douluo plot in it, the introduction has Qian Renxue, but where does Qian Renxue come from if he is not a blackened Bibi Dong who is not a saint in Wuhun Hall?

That ghost, deleted my comment?

I'll add the bookshelf first and let me take a look.

The plot progress is too slow