A Certain Pokemon Flying-Type Champion

This world is so pathetic, they actually look down on Flying-type Pokémon! Don't they know that the Kanto Elite Four and the Johto Champion in the main world are all Flying-type mains?! The anime protagonist is even called a Flying-type master, with every generation having a Flying-type Pokémon except for Pikachu and the starter Pokémon! 😃 They don't know how noble flying is. Don't you see that a certain legendary Pokémon almost got dethroned just because it couldn't fly? 😃😃😃

Forgive my bluntness, but the author doesn't have the writing skills and control to pull off such a tragic character. Wouldn't it have been better to just write a typical protagonist? The kind of villain who's unpopular from the start is better than this. The likable characters are always the good guys, even a forced whitewash would be better than this. I even thought Gu Li was the female lead at first...

Online novels are different from light novels. In Japan, it's acceptable to have a female supporting character who's a "loser," but on Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform), this kind of "giving away" behavior would be criticized. They usually either don't write about it or use it as a plot device. Your single-female-lead story, with its "loser" character and ambiguous relationships, is a major flaw.

This high school is outrageous; there's not a single normal person among them. It's like stepping back 20 years to the days of the loser school.

For flying-type birds, the best reference is the Dodo.

My drawing skills are too bad, so I'll just leave it at that o(╥╥)o

I've read up to chapter four. The earlier parts were a bit childish, but if you've watched TV and played games and don't even know what a flashbang is, that's just plain stupid.

First of all, let me say that readers are willing to read this book because we want to see the protagonist become a Flying-type Elite Four member—like Ash or Dodo—not because we want to see a Bird-type Elite Four member. Therefore, if the author doesn't introduce some powerful non-bird Flying-type Pokémon, we will be disappointed. 🤫

Your opening design is pretty stupid. A Flying-type Master who can't even use Hurricane or Air Stream? It's ridiculous that Hurricane can't even disperse poison, let alone allow poison to get close. And Flying-types also have Flying-type energy. My god, forcing the weakest character at the start is just insane.

What kind of absurd script is this?! Being wronged is automatically escalated to hostility towards humanity, all under the guise of loving Pokémon—isn't this just Team Plasma? The key is, it feels almost like brainwashing. I initially thought she had a script and was actually a Super Kalos character. This woman absolutely cannot be whitewashed; she practically wants the protagonist to say, "How is what you're doing now any different from what the person who wronged you did back then?"