Start with Tiger Jiao

Write down a few skill names of the protagonists, it's up to you to use them or not. Melee combat: Hard Vortex Water Blade, Corpse Water Saw, Spiral Turbine (Shield), Qian Xiang Water Tiger Kill Far attack: Thousand Water Strike, Mud and Rock Waterfall, Water Dragon Bite Explosion, Water Explosive Bomb, Hot Water Explosive Bomb, Rock Flow Explosive Bomb

I just realized that this tiger dragon has no name

Come on, a good strength player does not practice heavy weapons but instead practices a sword.

Tiger Jiao

There is basically no poison in the story about evil spirits. The protagonist has a smooth journey, but when he shows his strength, he is very smooth and does not feel awkward and pretentious like that kind of novice novel. Although there is no special plot of wits, the villain's IQ is still online, and there is no embarrassing plot like "I see you are unhappy and I will kill you immediately". The protagonist's battle process can be summed up in one sentence: I got up, and I was dead in a matter of seconds. What is there to say? Let me talk about a few points that I personally like very much: 1. The protagonist is affectionate and righteous. In order to repay his sworn brother, he did not hesitate to take risks many times. Of course, the same goes for his elder brother. Compared with the selfishness of the mainstream writing methods which are "There are no brothers, only younger brothers" and "Kick the brothers aside and forget them as soon as they are developed", I really like to see such a simple brotherly relationship! 2. There is no love line for the time being, and I personally hope there will be no love lines in the future. Yes (if there is one in the future, I hope it will be a single female protagonist, and the other race should not be human. I am most afraid of this kind of plot where shemales have different paths) ... Because many authors cannot grasp the portrayal of emotions, writing the male protagonist as a lecherous thief, and the female protagonist as a slut, countless _(´ཀ`" ∠)__ This is a big poisonous point, especially for novels about monsters and monsters Currently, the protagonist has an adopted daughter, a cat demon. Personally, I feel that portraying the image of a "kind old father" can make the protagonist's image more three-dimensional, especially in contrast to the protagonist's ferocious appearance. It has a contrasting and cute feeling ∠( ᐛ "∠)_ You can also enrich the emotional content of the novel by the way 3. I don't know how to describe it specifically, but I feel that it is quite immersive. For example, the reason why I wrote this book review is that the protagonist likes to have a golden thigh. I am sincerely happy for him.

Protagonist

The tiger dragon in the current Journey to the West Conquering the Demons chapter is too ugly.

The author, please don't forget that Shang believes in black birds, and don't engage in snakes and dragons.

How can I put it, the writing is very interesting, but there is something wrong with the outline and structure of the novel. A good novel must tell a story well. A grand world view is based on telling a story well, otherwise it will be meaningless. The author's idea is relatively novel, but it is too complicated, too many and too complicated. As far as I can see , has been stitched into Zhu Xian, Legend of Sword and Fairy 3, Journey to the West, and The Romance of the Gods. Sometimes adding too many things will weaken your main narrative. The things you want to add must be able to strengthen your storyline and promote your story. But now it seems to give me a feeling of "I think this thing is interesting, I can write it in." Another problem is that if you add all these things, but do not have so much space and writing power to write, or do not have enough adjustment ability to balance the weight between them, it will become something superficial, not deep enough, and unable to leave a lasting impression on the readers. It makes a deep impression, but it still seems very complicated. Instead of adding points, it will deduct points. This is also an aspect that tests the author's own control ability. It may be better to sort out the priorities and detail. This aspect is also a point that distinguishes the new vests of great masters from the true novice writers. Although, the writing is still very good, and I have been reading it. If readers feel that what I said is wrong, it doesn't matter if you scold me.

I tried my best to use my imagination. The color scheme is based on gold and the impression of water. To be honest, it may make the overall picture feel a bit feminine. I feel that the protagonist is not strong enough to have a strong face and tall figure, but I am afraid of painting him like a middle-aged uncle. It is difficult 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 Editor: Slightly adjusted the neck and shoulders, which should better reflect the protagonist's figure.

I hope that the protagonist will not be the kind with a handsome face and a righteous face in the future. I am going to vomit.

As the title suggests, collect well-known mythical beasts, ferocious beasts, and monsters from various Classics of Mountains and Seas and traditional myths. It would be best if you have pictures. In addition, collect great magical powers such as the laws of heaven and earth, especially water-attribute magical powers, spells and exercises (as the magical powers that are inherited and awakened in the blood of the protagonist as he grows up). Various magic weapons that are well-known or feel awesome are also required. As long as it is from the myths and legends of our ancestors, I want it here. Crowdfunding to write a book, brothers, please!

Okay, kill if you have to, and be a monster properly

Tiger Jiao

It is okay to adopt an adopted daughter, but it is recommended not to describe too much in words Normal dialogue relationship is enough After all, this is an article about alien beasts and not about master and apprentice cuteness and cuteness. I think it is not necessary. I just want to see the protagonist is not a human being and does not have so many emotional disputes.

When writing about mortals, readers demand decisive killings; when writing about alien beasts, readers demand a moral bottom line; when writing about the righteous path, corpses litter the fields; when writing about the demonic path, everyone has a virgin, Forget the first one, after all, society is dangerous and troubled times occur frequently, and the following ones are really hard to describe~!

Tiger Jiao

Tiger Jiao

First of all, let me confirm, it is well written. It is about food, but the fighting is a bit weird. I hope the author has more time to watch more immortal heroes to recharge and write about the courage of wild gods and demons. I personally suggest that the protagonist transforms into a weapon that is not handsome and so on. I hope it is a halberd, stick and axe, and not a sword. I am tired of using the sword. In addition, The Most Honored One, the Eternal God of Xianxia, ​​but Cuttlefish Girl no longer writes about Xianxia 😫

Author, please don't write the plot of Fairy Sword, it makes my balls hurt just looking at it.

Guys, do you have any recommendations for online alien beast evolution games with IQ? Don't recommend the ones that don't transform into animals and help save humans after turning into beasts.

I re-drawed the main character's transformed form. I was a little tired of painting the armor so I stopped coloring it. In the last picture, I looked too thin wearing a robe. I hope it would be better if I put on armor.

Holy Lord Panshan

In Journey to the West, martial arts are martial arts, mana is mana, magical powers are magical powers, and magic weapons are magic weapons. They cannot be confused together. For example, Laojun Zhen Yuanzi is generally regarded as having high magic power, strong magical powers, and average martial arts (but in Journey to the West, Laojun and Sanqing are a bit confused) So Laojun was thrown, Zhen Yuanzi could capture Sun Wukong but could not do anything to him (this is generally the default), after all The original book really has no way to deal with him. Don't think too complicated about Journey to the West. It's normal for everyone to have their own strengths in Journey to the West. Needless to say about magic weapons. I feel that the magic weapons in Journey to the West work regardless of the realm. In terms of magical powers, the magical powers learned by monkeys are very strong, but they are not used very much on the journey to the West. The magical powers that appear on the road generally make monkeys suffer. Needless to say about martial arts, monkeys in Journey to the West The martial arts skills of Zi are basically ranked first. Only Yang Jian can fight, but it is also difficult to beat. Monkeys have the indestructible body of King Kong. Journey to the West is quite difficult to write. After all, there are too many people who did not appear in the original work, and it is not easy to set the combat power. In the original work, Sun Wukong's combat power is still among the top ten characters. Journey to the West is not an online novel, but is somewhat similar to semi-martial arts, gods and ghosts. Monsters all have certain weaknesses and flaws, and magical powers and magic weapons are extremely powerful. They are not omnipotent like those in online novels. For example, Lao Jun was knocked upside down in the original work, and Sun Wukong was repeatedly disadvantaged by some magical powers or magic weapons. For example, when Jiuling Yuan Sheng appeared on the scene, Sun Wukong was directly caught by the Great Yin. If he was prepared later, there was nothing he could do to Sun Wukong

I really can't hold on anymore. Author, can't you write more? It's too little and boring to read. Not long after you started writing, I started to catch up on updates. I don't remember how many months it has been. I should have been accompanying this book until now. To be honest, I don't want to give up on my real feelings. You have been writing for so long and I don't seem to have seen any updates. Sometimes you can add two more chapters.

Congratulations to the author for putting this book on the shelves. I hope you can continue to persevere and don't let readers like us lose money! Come on

Have you ever considered continuing to write a book?

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You. . Never expected

I just realized that I had read part of this book, and saw that the protagonist pitied the little girl and gave the little girl the body of a beast, which exposed himself and also caused misery to others. He himself was no longer human. The three views of rootless water were dissolved in the river formed by the hormones of the tiger's body and the five senses. How could he still have such a level of kindness? This is like emerging from the mud without being stained, and is not affected by body hormones and indifferent environment at all.