The First Strategist of the Late Han Dynasty

Compared with the details: such as age, name and other small flaws, I think the detailed description of marches, prisoners, weapons, etc. That are different from today's is the unique style of this article. According to sales, it is a selling point and should be carried forward. Otherwise, if you blindly cater to others and lose your own strengths, you will eventually be lost in the sea of ​​books. I have been reading books for many years, and all the books written by great gods have their own styles. Of course, age and opinions need to be coordinated, and it would be better to use the name as a font size. A little perspective.

Author, do you know history? The Eastern Han Dynasty still has a three-character name, and I am speechless. Li Mengxi's name is so stupid, I am also speechless. There is also culture 😅, can anyone write historical novels now?

I suggest reopening a book. Really, there are too many unreasonable things. . The essence of the Yellow Turban Uprising is that the people of the lower class cannot survive due to land annexation. At the same time, the economic situation is bad and the food shortage is a struggle for survival from the bottom up based on the fact that! After a large group of rebellious people were eliminated, the food shortage began to ease. Some warlords began to reflect and actively recruited some Yellow Turbans to work in the fields or become professional soldiers. Of course, those who burned, killed, looted and used Wei for food would also be liquidated. Therefore, the strategy of using money and food to appease the Yellow Turbans at the beginning is simply not advisable! In history, the Yellow Turbans have rebelled, surrendered, and rebelled many times. In the final analysis, a fundamental solution must be provided with a stick and a carrot so that everyone has something to do and food to eat. Then there is the issue of climbing the technology tree. The author should note that any technological invention requires a certain cost of research and development and trial and error, and even if some appear, they may not have an immediate effect, or even have counterproductive effects. For example, the alcohol purification and distillation method, from grain to low-alcohol alcohol to high-alcohol alcohol to medical alcohol, each step requires a large amount of raw materials, but the source is still enough food! The food is all gone, how can you recruit troops? ! ! You can recruit the Yellow Turbans if you want, but you can't send them away with money? You have to keep the yellow scarves who can be used, and the elite ones will be brainwashed and expanded into your army. Those who are not good at joining the army will work as soldiers and farmers. With the land and people, you will have the capital to compete for hegemony! If you want to advance in science and technology, you can do it. At least you have to wait for a few victories to guide Liu Bei and gain a reasonable base area. Only then will you have the spare time and survival basis to advance in science and technology. So you really might as well learn strategic and tactical formations, formulate various development policies and plans, and of course learn martial arts at the same time. Only when Liu Bei has the opportunity to garrison Pingyuan, Liaodong Lelang, Xuzhou, Xiaopei, Xinye, Jiangxia and other places in history and become stable, can you start to develop the climbing technology tree. Moreover, the technology tree cannot be climbed casually. The reasonable plan is to develop according to local characteristics. For example, if you are close to the sea, you can improve salt production, if you have iron, you can improve mining technology, if you have coal, you can improve iron smelting, if you have coal, iron, and saltpeter, you can use gunpowder to make cannons. Needless to say, the diet is popularized with tofu and soy products, cavalry saddle stirrups are made, infantry can use crossbows or English longbows in advance... Hey, I really don't know what you are doing with a hammer here and there at the beginning, and you are still the best strategist? You said that if you arrange for the protagonist to memorize the Three Strategies, Six Tao, Guiguzi, and Sun Tzu's Art of War, and then pretend to be 13, it will be better than the current plot, right?

🤭 If Liu Bei continues, then Hengao's sentence will be awesome, the White Horse Alliance is composed of Han and no king.

It is the right way to support Liu Bei and lead his own troops to rebel and become emperor.

I was a little scared when I saw Chapter 4. Author, tell me honestly, is this the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, the Chronicle of the Three Kingdoms, the Three Kingdoms of Gaowu, or the Three Kingdoms of Xianxia?

From the current point of view, this book is a very good one. Although the author is writing a book for the first time (should it be?), He has a good grasp of the rhythm and exciting points. It is fine to maintain the level, but it is difficult to adjust according to different opinions. The author should maintain his original intention and not change the outline just because of the opinions of one or two people.

What is the protagonist thinking? A kid with a yellow mouth shouted at Liu Bei that the big man must die. I think it was unreasonable if Liu Bei didn't angrily shout evil words to deceive the crowd and kill him.

The two games Han-Hungary Total War and Tiger and Leopard Riding are used as the armament background of this novel, because these two games have relatively complete picture materials and are easy to find.

Next time, you will write about a 6-year-old mastermind. Is he crazy? You can't be older. People who read historical novels will be afraid of older protagonists. On the contrary, they will not be able to accept younger protagonists. There will be a sense of absurdity that is divorced from reality, and there is no sense of taking on the role

The main character's age is a flaw. He wants to be knowledgeable but also wants to learn how to talk. How can there be such an exaggeration?

To be honest, the three-character name of the protagonist, the fact that he became a military advisor at the age of eight, etc., Are not considered poisonous points.

After reading a few chapters, I always feel that something is missing, yes, it's IQ. This book lacks intelligence, the protagonist is lacking, and the author may also be weak.

Chapter 256: Li Ling is too much to say that he is not worthy of a famous general. Li Ling failed in many ways. First, his family was tainted and the emperor did not trust him. Therefore, Li Ling only went out with 5,000 infantry and was surrounded by more than 80,000 cavalry. He fought for 8 days and nights and killed more than 10,000 enemies. However, the reinforcements had already been ordered by the emperor to return home, and they had run out of ammunition and food. , The inside information was betrayed by the traitor Guan Gan. In order to allow these remaining elite soldiers to return and surrender, marrying a Xiongnu princess was an insult to the civil servants of the Han Dynasty. Gongsun Ao sent troops to no avail. The captives heard the wrong information and mistakenly mistook Li Xu for Li Ling. As a result, Li Ling's entire family was killed and his escape route was cut off by the Han Dynasty. Did Li Ling enjoy the life of the Huns? No, he lived in pain for the rest of his life, otherwise he would not have written a piece of music like Farewell that has been passed down for thousands of years when sending Su Wu off.

It didn't take more than a dozen chapters to start to get interesting. In more than 20 chapters, an eight-year-old is discussing the world with Liu Guan and Zhang. He is too strong.

I haven't read it yet, so I glanced at the table of contents. There are more than 900 chapters. The protagonist has just turned 13 and started learning martial arts. It seems that Yellow Turban has just ended. At this rate, it will not be a problem to write ten thousand chapters of this book. I hope the author sticks to it

I read the daily guide and read more than 60 chapters. I also looked at the table of contents. The author's writing is actually quite good, but it is too detailed. It took about 500 chapters to complete the Yellow Turban. You must know that the Yellow Turban is the beginning of the Three Kingdoms. The plot of the Yellow Turban alone takes about 500 chapters. How many chapters does the author plan to use to write the plot of farming and hegemony that follows? Generally speaking, the plot is dragging, and many things that can be mentioned in one sentence are written in great detail. Of course, these are all personal senses, and I don't like to spray lightly.

The real emperor has been replaced by Zhuge Liang. Liu Xie has been replaced by Zhuge Liang since Liu Bei visited the thatched cottage three times. Why does Zhuge Liang have the vision of Long Zhong? In the war years without any communication equipment, can anyone really see the situation in the world clearly by relying only on books and a few trips during the war? Because he is the emperor. Why is Zhuge Liang called Wolong? Because he is the emperor. Why did Liu Bei say to Zhuge Liang before he died, "You can take his place"? It was because he was the emperor. Why were Liu Xie and Zhuge Liang born and died in exactly the same year? Because he is the emperor. The Clothes and Belt Edict was successful. Liu Bei was able to leave as soon as possible after receiving the edict because the emperor had already left. Cao Cao also discovered that the emperor was missing, and killed Dong Cheng and other close officials. In this way, everyone who had seen the emperor was dead, and no matter who he appointed as emperor, he was already dead without evidence. Although the emperor was rescued at this time, if he announced his identity rashly, he might end up becoming the second Yuan Shu. He needs a chance, which is exactly the meaning of "Wolong".

I personally like the rhythm of this book very much, just like when I was a child, I was experimenting little by little in an experimental class, adding a little bit of this to see the effect, adding a little bit of that to see if there is any change, the progress bit by bit, the accumulation of small details one after another is really comfortable. I like it very much. There are many fast-paced books, but such detailed books are really rare. Except for the content recorded by the protagonist in the book, I think the other rhythms are quite good.

How should I put it? I felt that the author's writing was meticulous, as if he was witnessing the growth of the protagonist, but I felt that it was too watery. When I opened the table of contents and saw eight chapters of sharpening the gun in battle, the gun was almost worn out, and I suddenly lost my patience. Maybe it's because I'm too impetuous at night and can't calm down.

Personally, I think Liu Bei started his career with the support of powerful people. His benevolence and righteousness are towards the family, and it is impossible to attack powerful people. Besides, Zhang Fei's family is also a landlord. The protagonist's thinking is too advanced. At most, only a ruthless person like Cao Cao would do this.

The general of the second division said that Li Ling was not worthy of being a general. The general of the second division was right🤣

After reading Chapter 170, I felt that the content was not very good and nothing major happened.

It's really written with a lot of ink. The number of words in the early stage is very low, and there are so many flaws that I can't read it at all.