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Evaluation of the first 700 chapters, jumping repeatedly between surprise and disappointment
The following is a review of the first 700 chapters of the book. If you are not too nervous, you should be able to read the rest: Overall review of the first 700 chapters:There are bright spots, but overall it is mediocre. Advantages: 1. The scene description is more detailed, and the logic of the characters' behavior is basically self-consistent. 2. Although the part involving military equipment is relatively new (I checked the information, but I have no in-depth understanding), and the space war and related descriptions are somewhat civilian (a common problem in most science fiction novels), the overall performance is better than 80% of the science fiction novels I have read so far. Disadvantages: 1. The protagonist's arc is missing: the protagonist's growth is too flat, lacking growth highlights, and the protagonist's actions have no purpose and no stage goals. For example: Taking Dou Po as an example, Xiao Yan's initial goal was to win the three-year contract. Then the Soul Palace appeared to capture Yao Lao, and the goal became to rescue his mentor. In the end, he learned about the conspiracy of the Soul Palace and became the leader of the Soul Clan. Collecting strange fires is used throughout the text. People do things for a purpose. The author may want to create a story about a rich second generation who has nothing to do but gradually awakens and reaches the top, but what he wrote really makes people disagree. The protagonist's subjective initiative is too low, and he is just drifting with the crowd. You can do it like this for the first 400 chapters, but you can't get to chapter 700 and the protagonist still has no purpose (falling in love does not count). 2. The villain is too stereotyped: The author has repeatedly stated in the comment area that he wants to write a growth-oriented villain, but the growth of the villain should be felt by readers, rather than the author explaining or even spoiling it to the people who ask questions in his comment area again and again. Either spend more time describing the villain's past and mental journey, or change each stage. The creation of Xiao Jie as a villain was a huge failure at least in the early stages. I've read a lot of both female and male videos (I don't read many female videos at the beginning). In female videos, there are many villains who fail to court and therefore become hateful. Many high-quality novels usually describe the past and growth of the villain through colorful pen and ink, allowing readers to love and hate at the same time. This is a popular routine for creating long-term villains. As for male videos, they tend to change villains in stages. 3. The description of the emotional line is too childish, and too much ink is wasted, resulting in a scratchy writing and a serious sense of fragmentation. The relationship between the protagonist and the heroine begins inexplicably, (physical contact (soft, holding hands) La, etc.), Smell (the fragrance of the body), blushing (looking at each other, etc.)... This is a very low-level description of emotional initiation.) It is the best way to create sparks between the male and female protagonists by shaping the personality charm of the male and female protagonists. This is also a good way to enrich the arc of the protagonist. And the inexplicable female supporting character, who is talking about Lin. It would be great to delete her and use more pen and ink to describe the heroine's past and growth. 4. The author's common sense of modern warfare comes from science fiction war movies + animation (EVA, Macross, Gundam, etc.) + Internet military equipment parameters. It is recommended that the author find a friend who understands military affairs to re-understand how modern warfare is fought. The author's description of space war is, to put it mildly, a space version of the war rules on Earth with upgraded parameters. Let me give you an example. In the article, warships with sub-light speed or super-light speed sailing capabilities actually fired their guns at each other within visual distance. You have to know that this is done in the anime for a big scene and to highlight the cruelty of mecha combat. However, judging from the concepts of beyond-visual-range strike and unmanned warfare that modern warfare emphasizes, in the phase of space war, the launch of kinetic energy weapons by both sides should be at least millions of kilometers away, and the attacker will not send a large number of manpower to the scene when the situation is unclear. 5. Many of the author's descriptions of space wars are contrary to common sense. For example, a nuclear bomb explodes in a place with a thin medium like space, and there is a shock wave. It is too civilian. You can write about electromagnetic pulse better than shock wave. The iteration of kinetic weapons and energy weapons is too childish. The upgrading of civilization depends on the mastery of physical rules, such as the four basic forces. 6. The author said that he wanted to write a space opera, but space opera is a science fiction type full of fantasy and adventure. It combines the grand cosmic background with heroic adventure to form a unique narrative style. Such works not only explore the future of technology, but also reflect human nature and social issues through interstellar wars, political struggles, and emotional entanglements. Therefore, space opera is not only a form of entertainment, but also often triggers thoughts about the future and destiny of mankind. But after reading 700 chapters, I felt that the author was writing a space Qiong Yao drama disguised as science fiction. The above are all comments. I hope the author will polish the text in the new book. If I can persist in reading the whole book, I will continue to write a final comment.
The book is almost finished. Let me talk about the advantages of this book. The plot is excellent. The protagonist gradually becomes a big boss through hard work. It can resonate with most ordinary people. Readers of Duolong Aotian's novels will be enlightened. This genre is commonly known as Mortal Flow. The world framework is revealed little by little with the protagonist, which can maintain a sense of mystery and prevent the steps from being too big and uncontrollable. The plot is also reasonable, and the emotions between the characters are also rich. It is somewhat similar to the starting point of the masterpiece "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality".
Some personal opinions. First of all, I hope the author can read it.
I have read Chapter 492 intermittently. Let me share my personal views {"NickName":"Hypocritical Royal Court","UserId":321538063} First of all, wasn't it too blunt to forcibly block the protagonist's emotional line? After reading the author's reply at the time, he didn't explain anything clearly. This is a poisonous point. It can be ignored that this book is not a romance novel, but I couldn't help it after about 490 chapters, which is why I gave up. They are all on the run (maybe they just added a cheat to the protagonist and thought it was just a normal small crisis). The team of 100 people and the newly made allies were afraid of death because the villain (perhaps not considered a villain in the author's opinion, but a greedy and greedy "pig teammate"?) Was afraid of death and forced a firefight that resulted in the death of people, but he didn't care about it at the time. Afterwards, the captain who led the team just watched indifferently, but his teammates actually took responsibility for them. The protagonist also admitted that they were teammates? Ps: This is my first time writing a book review, and it's so long. In fact, this book gave me a very good feeling, but for the sake of my own outline, I personally destroyed the characters created in my book
81 today, no chapter 81 allowed?
Isn't it updated today? I'm blindly guessing that Mo Baoke's 3rd generation mecha can't be saved😁
It feels like the first time I read an online game novel 8 years ago. The writing is indeed good. I am waiting for the world view to come out. I will try my best to support it if it doesn't break.
An opportunity has arisen to solve the problem of negative pollution, which is to swallow the will of the negative universe and become the real negative god instead of using the power of the negative star to become a false god. The boss of the Yongmian clan and Qiantaki are just false gods. In my opinion, the previous negative gods are just puppets of the will of the negative star. Puppet and carrier, Su Mo can only solve the Negative pollution by becoming a true Negative God, controlling the Negative Universe and then correcting the defects of the Negative God Star. If Su Mo swallows the Negative Will, his own strength will definitely not be enough. The welfare of the Eternal Sleep Clan, the power of the Titans, and the power of the God King are all key.
Have you ever considered relying on counterfeit owners to control humans? If that doesn't work, you might as well get infected. Get the Negative God Fragments first, go directly to Ceres to find the Imperial base, go on a killing spree like Hagok, and then return to the next stage. You can directly kill the five generations of aliens with the support of Xiaoqi. Isn't this material already here?
There are biological mechas, no biological Star Destroyers, and no biological fortresses. How can we do this? Monsters are all treasures. The 6th generation mechanical mecha God Destroyer, which seems to have nothing to do with monsters, is also developed using the top 6 monster materials. 🙃
My thoughts after reading this book and my personal opinion on the individual combat power of this book. I came across this book by chance recently. I haven't read a mecha novel in a long time. It's surprisingly good. Of course, it cannot be said that there are no problems at all. At least the problem of combat power collapse that has gradually started since the game came out is not too serious now, but for the sophisticated party, it still affects the reading experience to some extent. Let's talk about the previous one, that is, the combat power classification in the game stage. The gap between one generation, two generations, three generations and four generations is very obvious. There is basically nothing to say. The division of combat power is relatively reasonable. Mainly since the game came out, starting from the fourth generation of machines, the combat power has gradually become outrageous. If I remember correctly, the four levels of monsters include ordinary, elite, general, and lord. The fifth generation has an extra hero class, and the sixth generation has an extra emperor class. First of all, what I want to say is that the division of combat power has gradually become blurred since the fourth generation. I remember when we first fought against the Zerg planet, people other than the protagonist were fighting elites one-on-one, which was already at the top level. Then there were about ten mechas with the highest elite level and the lowest ordinary level (still uneven), involving an ordinary fifth-generation monster. How should I say, in the middle, it spanned generals, lords, and pseudo-fifth generations. I don't know if it counts, so I won't add it for now. In other words, they have crossed two small levels and one large level to fight monsters. Add a living ship and a standard colony ship. If we have to say that their combat power is equal, then it can barely be considered as evenly matched. There is a problem, but not a big one. The real problem with the collapse of combat power comes from the beginning of the fifth-generation aircraft. I remember correctly that the fifth-generation aircraft has an additional hero level on the level of the fourth-generation monsters. The first time I felt that the combat power problem was the first encounter between the protagonist and that imperial prince. After analysis, the performance of the mecha was poor, the protagonist did not win, and the technical protagonist was stronger. Taking this point in time as the center, let's establish a numerical division of combat power. If the combat power of the first-generation aircraft is expressed as 1, the second-generation aircraft is 5, and the third-generation aircraft is 10, it can be roughly calculated in this way based on the expressiveness. The gap between the third and fourth generations is huge. It can basically be calculated as ten times. Then the combat power of the fourth-generation standard aircraft is set to 100. (The standard value is just a reference. It can fluctuate by 10 to 20, which is used to divide garbage and high-quality products.) At this time, driver skill bonuses are introduced. It is how much a master can perform beyond his level when giving full play to his body's performance. For example, the fourth-generation ordinary aircraft has a combat power of 100, and the protagonist can make the aircraft display stronger combat power. An example is the performance that the protagonist performed after he had been lying dead for five years. An ordinary mecha beat a general or lord-level mecha and completely won. Let's briefly divide this increase level. According to the expressiveness, there is no big jump in strength between the four generations of monsters of different levels, so the combat power value will not jump too much. For example, the standard fourth generation is 100, the elite is 120, the general is 140, the lord is 160, and the pseudo fifth generation is 200. Judging from the protagonist's steady play, he was able to use a 100 mech with a combat power of 180 to 190. Since he couldn't defeat the pseudo fifth generation from behind, this combat power was considered normal. At this point, the combat power values of the fourth generation are basically clear. Rookie pilots can exert 30 combat power out of 100, and those who can exert 100% of their physical strength are already elites. The masters are beyond the level, and the top bosses have doubled their power (note, old man, I am talking about you). The fourth generation has this foundation, and let's look at the fifth generation. Judging from the fact that ordinary fifth-generation monsters can become pseudo-fifth-generation monsters after death, the dead fifth-generation monsters are definitely not as good as normal fifth-generation monsters. The mecha transformation should only make up for part of it, allowing him to fully exert the fifth-generation combat power. It may be possible, but it may require too many resources and the gain will not be worth the loss. However, the gap between the pseudo fifth generation and the ordinary fifth generation is destined not to be too big. The value of the ordinary fifth generation is temporarily set to 210. The gap is not big, but what about the elite fifth generation? 230, General, 250, lord 270. Finally, there is the hero level, because there is a clear gap between it and the lord. It has 10 more points, which counts as 300. The protagonist's fourth-generation machine can perform at a super level, but the fifth-generation machine did not see how strong he is, and the bonus is not easy to calculate (not counting optical brain assistance). At this time, let's look back at the battle between the fifth-generation machine. The mecha that the protagonist got from the old man has repeatedly shown that it is not a good product, but it can be used by the old man. If the head is released, it cannot be the worst garbage, so it is tentatively classified as elite or general level, with a high probability of elite value of 230. As for the prince's mecha, which is known to be from ruins, the worst is lord level, and there is a high probability that hero level is 300 combat power. But based on the actual combat level, the maintenance author here has lowered it to Lord Peak, which is a value of 270. Otherwise, I really can't explain to you how a 230 value can withstand the crushing of a 300-value mecha, because you wrote at the time that there was a technical gap between the two, but not that big. Even if there was a gap in light and brain, the Creator at that time only provided assistance, which was obviously not enough to make up for the numerical difference. If you force the circle, it will be the protagonist's technical bonus of 20, the body of 230, the optical brain assist of 10, and the final combat power of 260. The enemy mecha numbered 270, and the pilot barely used the mecha's full strength, with no bonus. In the end it was slightly better. How should I put this result? Anyway, whether this mecha is the pinnacle of lords or a heroic mecha, I won't say it. It's all over. If you originally wrote a hero machine, the protagonist would die on the spot. This is the first place where the combat power collapsed, and if I forgot about it in the middle, let me tell you the second place that I can confirm. After the garbage that was killed by the androids died, the protagonist's mecha lost contact with the main army. The heroine drove a mecha with a value of 230 to kill fifth-generation monsters randomly. Well, the heroine's mecha level in the early stage was not as good as the top domestic ones, but she caught up with the fourth-generation mecha, and then she didn't touch the mecha very much in five years. She controls an elite-level fifth-generation machine to kill randomly. I vaguely remember whether you wrote that she killed a general or some fifth-generation monster. Well, if you look at it that way, she is already the second master in the alliance besides the protagonist. I won't go into details here. Everyone knows it, and it's clear whether her combat power is high or not. Then came the Stargate Guard Battle, and a sixth-generation machine attacked. Judging from the subsequent attack by the duo and the entanglement with the emperor's mecha, the deputy chief was obviously at the same level, the emperor level. The third major battle power collapse is coming. Let's look back at it. During the Stargate War, the protagonist had a pseudo-sixth-generation machine and a group of fifth-generation machines. I just can't bear to look at it. That commander's pseudo-sixth-generation mecha, although I don't know how far the author sets the gap between the pseudo-sixth-generation and the sixth-generation mecha, but based on actual combat performance, the original pseudo-sixth-generation mecha can perform at a stronger level than the fifth-generation top mecha, which is tentatively rated at 330. So the real sixth generation is tentatively set at 350, the elite level is 370, and the general level is 380 (don't wonder why the bonus is 10 points less, I have tried my best to set it for you). The lord level is 390, the hero level is 400, and the emperor level is 420. (I'm tired, you can see for yourself) Then, even if a rookie pilot is unable to use the mecha to its full potential, a mecha with a final value of 400 cannot be stopped by a group of troops with weak strength and poor mechas. The combat power of the deputy chief here was too low, and the situation continued until the new city was established. Several royal knights stopped him, but their strength was not shown for the time being. The real collapse of combat power begins with the Royal Knight Assessment. Three people from that empire used 230 mechas to explode into 300 value mechas, and the princess even counterattacked the 330 pseudo-sixth generation. Don't tell me about the triple explosion here. Your collapse is even more serious. Then there is the heroic bio-mecha of the duo, which is set to have two master-level pilots. Can a 400 hero mech exert 400 combat power or explode with a pilot bonus of 420? Two of these levels are fighting a group that has nothing in the sixth generation. Counting the help of battleships, I can barely make it up for you. Then the protagonist's royal knight, an emperor-level mecha, got entangled with the deputy chief who was pulling his hips. Well, his level has recovered here? Could it be that Mr. Kizaru has always been a liar before? Finally, the protagonist broke out and used a 300-level fifth-generation peak machine to defeat a 420-level opponent. Here we can calculate the bonuses for the protagonist, 300 for the mecha, 80 for the full power of the optical brain, and 15 for the pilot bonus. (I can't bear to calculate whether the opponent has the sixth generation of optical brain blessing.) The final value is 395, and then factoring in the bonus of 15 for the mecha's consciousness body, the final value is 410. This can round out the incomprehensible part of the fight, but is this really normal? Think about it for a while, the real result is that the protagonist is not as good as it is, which is normal~_~. And in the end, the two 420 mechas join forces. The combat power is definitely not additive. The final attacks are partially overlapping and partially offset. I regard the last hit as an attack value of 500. So what exactly does the protagonist use to make up for the gap between his 410 attack and 500? Does it rely on the last three levels of negative energy to explode? But no matter where you look at it, it's impossible for him to have a bonus of 90. This is still a good thing. If you really want to look at it in terms of performance, the protagonist's final mecha does not even have a value of 410. For a mecha value of 300, I will give you a technical negative energy bonus of 30 (forced hacking), a mecha awareness bonus of 10, and a light brain burst of 40 (it is just a light brain without a mecha after all. It is really inappropriate to add too high. , And the opponent also has a light brain in the setting, so I just ignored it), and the final value was only 380, not to mention the bonus of 20 for the opponent's 400 mecha (this bonus value is really not worth the weight of the former chief of the Twelve Royal Knights). Even so, it is normal for the protagonist to be killed instantly, and there is no room for maneuver. I really wonder if you have just skipped the level restrictions of ordinary, elite, general, lord, hero, and emperor that you have always thought about. Just like in the hot-blooded comics, the protagonist's strength is high and low, and the opponent is also high and low. Everything depends on the author's will, and everything depends on the protagonist's aura. I posted this mainly because I wanted the author to set the power of the mecha, pilot skills or negative energy bonus. Everyone has different levels, and different mechas will ultimately exert different strengths, but there is a clear gap in the end. It is not that he is super skilled when he is used, and he basically pulls his hips when he is not used, and he is a picky person. I don't know if the author has the patience to read this. My writing hand is numb, and so is my body🤣🤣🤣
After reading Chapter 520, the emotional drama really persuaded me to quit. As some book friends said, the author wrote the plot so that the male protagonist would not take the initiative or refuse (the scumbag routine). Then it is forced to write that the male protagonist is an innocent young man. The male protagonist and the female protagonist have gone through so many things, why can't they communicate privately? They insist on writing hundreds of chapters about a misunderstanding, and it will only be resolved in the finale. These chapters are very poisonous. Let's seal it and detoxify it before reading.
Tomorrow Chapter 2: Eat, drink and have fun Introducing the local customs, the next three chapters of the competition opening ceremony environment, personnel, mechas, rules, reward introduction, another day 🥱, the day after tomorrow the officer competition, all aspects of action in secret, another day😑😑
Sister Ting works hard, look at others! ! !
Finish spreading flowers
This is the last chapter of "The Halo Mission". Thank you very much for your continued companionship. See you in the next book!
Xuejieyyds
What Sister Ting is best at is that there are several women who like the male protagonist at the beginning, and the female protagonist and the male protagonist like each other without revealing it. Later, she will kill the other women and even like to torture them 🤫
After reading more than 400 chapters, I can't stand Hide and Seek any longer. I'm offering you all the subscriptions. Don't delete my posts. Maybe my mentality is different. Now I just want to have fun when I read novels. The reality is already frustrating enough. (After typing this paragraph, I feel that my thoughts are clear)
I've read half of it, and I feel generally good. But I need to skip reading. Which mothers-in-law should I skip? The author is only suitable for writing about battles. Which families are really difficult to write about? Don't touch them.
World view: City-state rule after the war, another world comes into reality through the game. Protagonist: A genius boy, good at both civil and military skills, no golden finger yet, decisive in killing but with social phobia, which is in contrast, relatively introverted and simple. Supporting characters: The limited number of words created two characters, Lan Xi and Sun Xiang, with distinctive characteristics, full images, and their own story lines. They should appear again in the future. Advantages: The opening chapter is set in the old city, and combined with the memories of my grandfather, the image of the protagonist is created in more detail. It should be similar to Qianye in "Eternal Night King". It is rare to see such a fast-paced novel that spends a lot of time describing the protagonist in the early stage. Good review. The characters have distinct personalities, and the human descriptions and gags are relatively reasonable. The only shortcoming is the two small climaxes in the early stage. The process of single-handedly challenging foreign mercenaries and second-level mutant beasts is not exciting enough. Currently the extraordinary system has not been exposed The article has been emphasizing that the core of the game is collective, so it may be a battle for hegemony among legions in the future. The protagonist is introverted in the early stage, but retains room for growth, so it should be similar to Yong Ye, starting from the top soldiers, becoming the king of soldiers, then accumulating connections, establishing power, and finally breaking the earth to become the king. This book has great potential. I hope that after adding the extraordinary system, the battles can be described more excitingly, but the word count must not be too low
Everything else is fine, except that the erratic relationship between the male and female protagonists in the back is like an urban love soap opera. I don't understand why you want to write such a thing? Do all girls like this style?
If you like describing female supporting characters, then create a harem. If you don't want to create a harem, just concentrate on describing the heroine. Don't worry about your bloody sadomasochism.
Please stop engaging in bloody sadomasochism in male videos, okay? Although I know it is a female author, you have posted it to a male channel, so please take more care of the male readers. Obviously the other plots are quite good, but this emotional drama of deliberate sabotage and various misunderstandings is really confusing.
This emotional scene is a little bit uncomfortable. I actually suffered the same pain as a female channel in a male channel.
I have finished reading Apocalypse. I have read 300 chapters of Star Ring. I feel that I have made a lot of progress. There is no big problem after reading Apocalypse in one go. As for Star Ring, it is almost the same as what was said in the book review section. The combat descriptions feel to be at the level of a great master. However, the emotional descriptions including some characterizations are a bit difficult to describe. There are a few characters in it that are a bit inferior, especially those of the opposite sex who are not female protagonists. Like zz, Apocalypse is generally good. There is no character that makes me feel uncomfortable so far 😁
When Su Mo was promoted to God King, he became a God because of excessive display. His pendulum energy then contaminated the entire universe, and all creatures contaminated by the pendulum energy would become rotten. Eventually, all the pendulum energy in the universe gathered together to form a huge planet, known in history as the Pendulum Star. This is the story of the god of mess. (I almost don't know the Chinese characters anymore)
The first day without Tingting, I miss her
Sacred Wangting The prehistoric legendary-class Star Destroyer. The Sacred Wangting is 300 kilometers long. The whole armor is dark gold. It is made of special materials and the armored hull is engraved with black sun and world cycle patterns. The entire ship is equipped, Main gun: God-killing light Secondary gun 1: Dark Matter Cannon Secondary gun 2: Glory of Catastrophe Secondary gun 3: Light of Judgment Secondary gun 4: Cone of Judgment Secondary gun 5: Angel's Descend Secondary battery 6: Catastrophe's Descend Secondary battery 7: E-TTCG carrier-based cationic star-breaking cannon Secondary battery 8: Gamma Thunder Set Ship-borne secondary battery Secondary battery 9: CW-36 explosive cluster super light cannon Secondary battery 10: Anion laser cannon Secondary battery 11: Celestial cannon Secondary battery 12: Antimatter main battery Secondary battery 13: Dimension main battery Secondary battery 14: Meteorite gun — 20000w Main Power: Heart of Creation Secondary Power 1: Heart of Death Secondary Power 2: Dark Matter Core Secondary Power 3: Heart of Disaster Secondary Power 4: Heart of Judgment Secondary Power 5: Sacred Heart Secondary Power 6: Heart of Dimension Secondary Power 7: Antimatter Heart Auxiliary power 8~10: Heart of Ark Auxiliary mecha, VI generation pure mechanical mecha: Black Light: 2 units Pseudo VI generation pure mechanical mecha. Dark Shadow Apostle: 20 units Pseudo VI generation pure mechanical mecha. God's Apostle: 10 units V generation pure mechanical mecha. Dark Eagle. Modified: 1000 units V generation pure mechanical mecha. Divine Guardian . Modification: 1,000 units V generation pure mechanical mecha Dark Eagle: 10,000 units V generation pure mechanical mecha Divine Guard: 5,000 units IV generation pure mechanical mecha. Demonic Corpse Legion : 20w station IV generation pure mechanical mecha. Magic energy army: 20w station Shield: natural disaster shield, dark matter rebirth shield, dimensional shield CHPE-00, light energy shield, A T stance Attack mode: normal mode, full firepower, sniper mode, corner mode, stealth mode, god-killing mode Included talent functions: space jump strike, dark stealth, time and space corridor, God's cage, stance destruction Prehistoric ancient legendary star destroyer. The Holy Court, originated in the early mythological era, was given to the Black Light Empire by the God of Creation, Archimiga. , The most powerful legendary Star Destroyer in the Black Light Empire. Its owner was the emperor of the Black Light Empire. He fought countless battles in his life and never lost. Later, he followed the God of Creation, Archimiga. Shenhui, to fight against the Negative Universe. On the Negative Star, During the battle, he killed the false seventh-level Son of the Negative God with one fell swoop, sank several Type VI fortresses, and hundreds of V-shaped fortresses, laying the foundation for the destruction of the Protoss' civilization. He was undoubtedly the strongest among the legendary Star Destroyers. (This is something I discussed with the White and Blue Angel)
Operation Officer Easter Egg Chapter! Chapter 1: Store Manager's Rescue Chapter!
"Hello, Mr. Crocker, Royal Knight, I am Colonel Eva Elsidra, Senior Liaison Officer of Ring City. I have an urgent mission from the Lord of Ikaroya. I order you to go immediately with the Deadly Rose Guards..." "Hello, Colonel Yafus, Captain of the Kenya Guards. I am Colonel Eva Elsidra, Senior Liaison Officer of Ring City. I am informing you of an urgent mission and order you to go immediately with Kenya's 1st, 2nd and 5th Guards..." "Hello, Major General Rafsmos, I am Colonel Eva Elsidra, the senior liaison officer of Halo City. I am informing you of an urgent mission and ordering you to take all the legions to go immediately..." ... Even in the City of Halo, affected by negative energy fluctuations, there are still many cheap neighborhoods where the sound of gunshots can be heard from time to time. Internal guards and mecha squads wearing high-end colonial armor are walking around the streets. Suddenly, a mandatory prompt popped up on everyone's wristband: "What is happening now is the Star Ring City-wide broadcast, announcing an urgent mission..." "Sir Ikaroya, urgent report from the Canlir Royal Frigate Group!" "I know, get down." Ikaroya's sharp eyes shocked the communications officer and walked out of the office tremblingly. ...... "Ola!" The desperate shouts of teammates echoed in the communication channel, and the logo of another future apostle dimmed on the formation display in the mecha. "Lord Geli, our situation is not optimistic. Let's let the escort take you away first!" "No, this batch of supplies is vital to my sister! I have already contacted the Star Ring City, and reinforcements will arrive soon. Firmly Hold on!" "Lord Goli, you better leave. Even if you leave, we can still stay here and wait for the reinforcements to arrive, and we will defend the Orca to the death!" "I understand your intentions, and I will not leave. Although we are in the midst of aliens and..." "The first-level command ship protection plan is being implemented! Emergency shield boosting! The spherical defense array is deployed!" As the artificial intelligence·Laituo mechanical prompts sounded and a series of instructions were issued, Suddenly, the shield of Goli's command ship was raised to 500% in an emergency. Such a majestic energy extraction even caused a large number of subsystems inside the ship, including the integrated lighting system, to temporarily go offline. Even the bridge only had the red light of the emergency lighting on. The frigates around the Four Seasons immediately released the battleship's anti-collision protection system and formation limiting system after receiving the instructions from Raituo. They continued to wrap up the Four Seasons layer by layer like an atomic nucleus entangled by an electron cloud, and then raised the shield to the maximum. While the outermost frigate group was recovering the previously released interceptor mechas and continuing to form a spherical defense array, an explosion that could light up a galaxy shone around the fleet. In order to destroy the command ship, the Qijuzi and the alien joint fleet, inspired by negative energy, hid anti-matter missiles in a large number of precious alien high-speed shuttle ships, and then fused the shuttle ships with Qijuzi. In this way, these thousands of anti-matter missiles have become a self-destruction fleet with seven levels of protection, including AT stance, biological stance, shield stance, AT coat, Qijuzi coating, shuttle armor, and missile armor. "Peripheral interception rate 13%, impact warning! Impact warning! Impact warning! 5! 4! 3! 2! 1!" The violent explosions caused the tightly spherically arranged fleet to collide continuously. The collisions and explosions were intertwined, and the bridge of the Four Seasons was temporarily disabled. Fortunately, the artificial intelligence Laser Tuo stabilized the situation. "Yellow warning! Override of the incapacitated frigate group has been completed!" "Yellow warning! Automatic damage control has been released!" "Main warning! The remote communication array has failed!" "Main warning! The shield system is offline!" "Main warning! The steering engine has failed!" "Main warning! The hyperdrive has failed!" "Main warning! ! Insufficient energy in the life support system!" "Main warning! Insufficient energy in the automatic gravity system!" "Yellow warning! Stabilizer energy transmission line is damaged!" ... Goli's face was very ugly. Most of the Four Seasons on the three-dimensional display turned red and yellow. Fires and implosions broke out from time to time inside the ship, and countless energy lines were damaged. The frigate group of the Four Seasons was even more miserable. The dozens of outermost frigates had been annihilated by the explosion of anti-matter missiles, and even the dregs were left. Many of the ships in the middle had even their hull keels twisted into the appearance that the gangsters imagined. Only the few frigates closest to the Four Seasons survived by chance, but they were also seriously injured and had no time to take care of themselves. "Where is the Orca? Leituo, report the situation of the Orca!" "The Orca lost communication. Affected by the anti-matter missile, severe communication interference occurred in the nearby starry sky. The ship's long-range communication array has failed, and the fleet communication module has been damaged. The short-range communication module cannot contact the Orca and is transmitting the communication relay. The automatic damage control is switching the new optical observation system from the backup warehouse to the deck surface. Confirmation of the Orca's information has been set as the highest priority plan." "Lord Goli, Star Ring. How long will it take for the reinforcements from the City and the City of Stars to arrive! The interceptor fleet scattered on the front has been torn apart too much. An anti-material bombing like this may pass through the front line again and reach our rear command fleet at any time." "I understand, but. We cannot shrink our defenses, otherwise the target of the bombing will no longer be us, but the dense frontline defense fleet. In this way, we will not be able to support the arrival of reinforcements. If we persist, reinforcements will arrive soon. Check the star map to see if there are other available fleets or mecha detachments around. , Recruit all those who can be contacted, and send some of the frigates that can be extracted to the Orca, and we will all go there. It doesn't matter even if the Four Seasons sinks, but the contents of the Orca must not be lost." "Under the order! On the way..." Lei Tuo's cold mechanical voice sounded from the bridge "Warning, some commands are invalid, the ship's steering system has completely failed, and field repairs cannot be completed. It cannot go to the Orca, and the Riyan engineering ship has been called back for large-scale repairs." "How many more mechas do we have?" "There are 130 IV-generation machines and 15 V-generation machines within the available range" "Then let the escort mechas go to the outside of the ship to act as the engines of the Four Seasons, set off, and continue to the Orca!" ... On the outskirts of the Pandora galaxy, a 17km-long strange-shaped ship floated slowly. Mr. Cadot Pardes, the store manager of the Stranger Friends chain store, was leisurely talking about the "replica" business with several wealthy people in the reception room. "Manager Pardes, it is really a great honor to cooperate with you. Your aesthetic is also very, very unique." "Thank you for your compliment, my friend. Your "replica" will be produced in two months. Then you can go directly to my store in the Federation. Just contact us to pick up the goods, and you are welcome to come back to my Carrot at any time!" As several guests left on the shuttle ship, Pardes walked to the shuttle elevator to the bridge with a heavy face. Just when everyone's bracelets received an urgent mission, he also secretly received an additional text message. The text message came from Ikaros, the Lord of the City of Stars. The content was very simple: "Goli is in danger, hurry up and rescue her. When it is done, I will have dinner with you." Even a seasoned businessman like Pardes who is involved in the business circle will inevitably be moved when he sees such a message. Therefore, the send-off just now seemed hasty, and even the steps towards the bridge were so hasty. Ikaroa, Ikaroa, Ikaroa have dinner! If I rescued Goli, the money I paid for a dinner with Ikaroya would be enough to earn me profits for several years! Carote, jump into the super-light state and head to the Four Seasons at full speed to save Goli! ...... "The optical observation is ready and the coordinates of the Orca have been located!" "The reaction of the power furnace of the Orca has not been observed, and it is speculated that the Orca sank in a battle!" After receiving the speculation from Lei Tuo, Ge Li secretly thought something bad. If this thing is destroyed or lost, it will really harm her sister. But there was nothing she could do. The Four Seasons had been severely damaged, and she had no spare spare command ship that could serve as a better replacement. Ge Li knew that she was in a desperate situation, and the rest was just a struggle, but her identity did not allow her to despair. If she fell, what would happen to the people below who were still fighting bloody battles? Thinking of this, Geli closed her eyes gently and prayed that the rescue from Star Ring City would arrive quickly. "Yellow warning! Frontline reconnaissance ship warning! Anti-matter missile warning! Estimated explosion location: Orca!" "No!" As Goli screamed, a strange-looking ship suddenly broke away from super-light speed and appeared in front of the Orca. The azure shield lit up dazzlingly, steadily blocking the impact of anti-matter missiles. "My red wine! Damn, this sip of twenty thousand star coins! My shirt!! Ahhh! Enough for me to buy a light crystal ship! Kerote, are you crazy! What's going on!" "Store manager, after 29 hours and 53 minutes of continuous super-light flight, this ship was intercepted by a space stability destruction device and was forced to jump out of super-light speed. It has passed The Living Department has prepared new shirts and red wine for you." "I'm so angry, are you so unstable even if you are stopped?" "Manager, you can't blame me! The reason for the instability is that we suspected of hitting some kind of anti-matter device. In order to implement your idea of saving money and protecting the environment, the shield was only raised by 0.1%. , The stabilizer is only running at 0.1% Power, which has been increased ten times!" "Holy shit, why are you so stupid than me? Who did you learn from? My ship is not damaged, is it expensive to repair? Level 1 combat readiness! It's important to save your life! Carrot, level 1 combat readiness!" … Everyone in the Four Seasons, including Ge Li, was speechless for a moment when they saw the green dot on the radar response. "Get in touch with the ship on the opposite side immediately!"
I've finished reading the new book, so I came to read this book. It does feel a bit awkward to see more than 370 chapters. Mainly because of the awkwardness of the emotional line. If it were a single female protagonist, Lin's appearance would be very sudden, which indirectly led to Xue's self-destruction. I don't know how to deal with it later
You can start reading it directly from Chapter 400, it will not affect you at all. The protagonist has two beauties, but they are not making any progress. The protagonist seems to be very rich, but starting from 400 is basically cleared. The first 400 chapters are all about playing games, and all gains are cleared.