Konoha's Otsutsuki from the Earth

Either write an upgrade article, or make Invincible fun all the way to the end, and write an article in which Invincible is forcibly weakened at the beginning, which first promotes and then suppresses, making readers feel sick.

To be honest, it didn't describe Otsutsuki's power and the advantages of being a time traveler at all. . In the beginning, Pig's Foot cannot use most of Otsutsuki's skills. The explanation given is that it takes time to slowly integrate, which can be understood. Later in the orphanage, in the original work, Senju Hashirama came here because of the immortal body, and the Otsutsuki clan is above the immortal body. It can be said that they come up with whatever they want. Pig's Foot cannot develop moves and think it is because of the lack of seals? How did you become a time traveler? What did Naruto think? Why do ninjas in the ninja world need to form seals but Otsutsuki does not? It is because of incompatibility. Ninjas in the ninja world need to form seals to better control chakra and release ninjutsu. As one of the sources of chakra, does Otsutsuki need to form seals? In the original work, Kaguya and others all had smooth hair. Which one had a seal? Going to the caged bird at the back, the pig's feet resist the caged bird, which is understandable, but the pig's feet make me feel like it is afraid of the caged bird, which confuses me. In the fifth and sixth pictures, Pig's Knuckle was beaten and then ran away. Later, Kumogakure came. Hinata treated Pig's Knuckle like this, but Pig's Knuckle still chose to help Hinata. The pig's feet themselves have no favors with the Hyuga clan. If you want to save Hizashi and Hinata, just say it clearly, why do you use the interests of Hinata and Konoha as the reason. . . I'm really speechless There's a lot more that I won't say, it's a little better later, but this book makes me feel like a loser has traveled through time, with a lot of confusing behaviors, which makes me feel like I'm going back to a few years ago

To use an analogy: the beginning of Monkey King, the unfolding of Circus Monkey. 🐒

Do you know what it means to sell dog meat with a sheep's head? This is it. At the beginning of writing an invincible article, give me a noob here.

The protagonist, who possesses the same spatial abilities as Kaguya and Princess Kaguya, as well as other reincarnation eye abilities, and whose chakra is basically infinite, cannot be said to be invincible in the ninja world at that time, but he is also a top powerhouse. As a result, he stayed in Konoha as an orphan of the Hyuga branch and went to a ninja school. Even if the protagonist wants salted fish, the author wants to write more everyday. But based on the protagonist's living standard in the orphanage, he has to worry about running out of money to eat Ichiraku Ramen, he has to worry about not having enough tuition to go to a ninja school, and he is chased and intercepted by a group of Hyuga ninjas every day. How does the protagonist survive such an unstable life? It's okay for the protagonist to be incompetent, but he has the top level of strength in the ninja world, but he doesn't pursue a better life. Does the protagonist have masochistic tendencies? To be honest, even if the protagonist is adopted by a Konoha civilian family and lives a very stable life in Konoha as a civilian child, so I want to be more salty and start the plot of the protagonist in Konoha, it will be much better than the plot arranged by you, the author.

After the chunin exam, Sasuke left Konoha in order to become stronger, but the protagonist is still playing ninja games even though he is so strong 🤫

It's another high-end, low-end, copying the plot according to the original book, having the foundation of the strongest nine magatama reincarnation eyes, and playing ninja games with weaklings. Eternal life is lonely. No matter how beautiful you are, you won't be an aunt in a few decades. You can understand this by watching Anko and Terumi Mei in Boruto. Go and liberate Kaguya, boy. There are too many fans, and I just want to watch Otsutsuki's opening for fun, and I can't stand it for the sake of the plot.

Isn't the protagonist the Soul Emperor going to Yunlan Sect to become an outer disciple, and the Tathagata Buddha going to Shaolin Temple to be a novice monk? Do you have a picture in your mind?😄

Many readers seem to have misunderstood the protagonist's strength, so I will open a comment here to explain. First of all, the protagonist Qi Fei traveled directly to the world of Naruto and became Otsutsuki because of eating the chakra fruit. He has no memory or inheritance of Otsutsuki and appears completely out of thin air. At first Qi Fei couldn't even understand the words. Except for the reincarnation eye and Otsutsuki's own abilities, he was just a blank sheet of paper. I think it's weirdest for an ordinary earthling to spit fire and water as soon as he arrives in the world of Naruto. At most, it is because of the Chakra Fruit or Otsutsuki that he has relatively strong control over Chakra. My friends gave examples of Kaguya, Six Paths Sage, Momo Shiki, etc., None of them are old silver coins, each of them has inheritance and years of tempering. In Boruto's biography, Kaguya's sneak attack was able to defeat Naruto and Sasuke in one move, forcing Naruto to lose his life in the end, also because of the accumulation of thousands of years of stubbornness. So Qi Fei needs a process of learning and becoming stronger, learning physical skills, learning ninjutsu, learning the knowledge of the ninja world, etc. Only by accumulation can he make progress. Then gradually advance the plot as you become stronger. But even with a blank sheet of paper, it is more than enough for Qi Fei to instantly kill the average jounin, as shown in the early game against Kumogakure. Just try not to use the ability of the Samsara Eye to hide your identity. Maybe he hid it too deeply and deceived everyone (laughing), but sometimes he still uses it secretly. I don't know if anyone notices it. This book is indeed an invincible book. It is impossible for the protagonist to be deficient. At most, it is relatively dull because of the author; but the relaxed atmosphere is also what I want to present, after all, life is so tiring... In the end, everyone has their favorite genre, and the author is not a great god. It is unrealistic to expect everyone to like his own book. But I still hope that people who may like it will not persuade me to quit because of this reason. Finally, I would like to thank my readers who are willing to support me!

The protagonist, who has the highest starting point and the most cost, starts with Otsutsuki with horns and is so useless

A three-year-old child said in public that I don't want to be a caged bird unless someone can defeat me. . . . It's really awesome. If the protagonist finds an opportunity to talk to the clan leader alone and says that he is from the Moon clan, it would be better than writing it like this now.

A plot novel... It doesn't matter whether there is a protagonist or not. Each chapter also contains a bunch of confessions. It's even more of a novice than a novice.

After eating the fruit, you can directly rush out chakra without any skills. You can use the torrent of energy to kill most people in the ninja world. Moreover, Otsutsuki can travel through space without eating the fruit. Your time traveler also learns f4. If you use a bomb, you can produce a 3, right?

Does it feel like Otsutsuki's wisdom? The protagonist is invincible but still looks like a fool. He is afraid of wolves before and tigers behind, which makes him feel frustrated. Embarrass the time traveler

After reading forty or fifty chapters, I thought, this is a proper nanny story, either taking care of this or taking care of that!

I really don't understand. With Otsutsuki's bloodline and strength, he went to Konoha to be a dog. What kind of combat experience does he have? What can he learn from the eldest brother from genin to jounin? It's just seal ninjutsu. These ninjutsu are basically useless in high-end combat. You still have to face the caged bird, Konoha Danzo and Hokage's old dog. You might as well find a place to hide. The three-knee jutsu, a genin thing, is also the substitute jutsu. It's amazing, but it must have disadvantages. Otherwise, it would have been an advanced ninjutsu. Just copy Naruto's path. With combat experience, how can the ninja world be so chaotic?

It's really a big deal. If you give him a chance, he won't be able to use it! So what is the use of hanging wire to travel? Character determines destiny, an ant is an ant

The body of a god is not even as good as the mind of a mortal.

The protagonist, Momo Shiki, Ura Shiki, Jin Shiki, and Otsutsuki called Ryuushiki are called the Five Otsutsuki Idiots.

I thought that TV's original Urashiki was enough to disgrace Otsutsuki. It wasn't until I read this book that I realized that there was an Otsutsuki who was a hundred times weaker than Urashiki. Protagonist, please commit suicide. Even if you don't commit suicide, another Otsutsuki will kill you, this embarrassing guy.

After watching it, I can't stand it anymore. There is a problem with the initial design. Otsutsuki has eaten the fruit. He is such a bad guy. . . . It's understandable to learn ninjutsu, and it's understandable to have a wretched development, but where did your innate ability go? Can't you swallow the memory Sharingan and copy it? Is it possible to learn clairvoyance even if you don't have to roll your eyes? Where did Qiudaoyu go? Eaten by Bloodstained Snare? What about the training of super-speed regeneration and physical training? It doesn't have what it should have, the invincible style is not invincible, the obscene style is not strict enough, behind the scenes is almost in front of the stage, casual writing is not casual, I have tried the drug, I don't know why it is so popular. The masters who could watch continued, but the villain's poison resistance was not high, so he retreated.

After reading about twenty chapters, the writing is okay, but the setting and plot are too dull. The protagonist eats the magic fruit and becomes Otsutsuki. . Growing up in Hyuga Fushiko, when he was three years old, he had to catch a bird in a cage, and the Hyuga clan couldn't catch it, so he ran away. . And you said that the environment in which you grew up in Hyuga's separate family, what can it teach you? He acted like an encyclopedia, and even taught Tenten how to become a ninja like Tsunade. He introduced the mutually multiplying detonating talisman to her and it felt like you were more familiar with it than the second generation himself. However, not many people knew about the mutually multiplying detonating talisman. .

A rare Naruto fanfic that is non-conspiracy theory and prefers the original flavor 👍

Did the Ten-Tails have super strength at the beginning, and then have fun hanging out with the weak? Will rich people play with poor losers?

It cost me 30 oceans to read this book, which is actually quite good. Although there are no big ups and downs, the overall framework has not changed much! But the logic is rigorous. Many fans, when the plot changes, forcefully use the so-called time and space correction power to pull the plot back. Some fans, because they don't know how to design the battle, only have an infinite mode, without any rationality in the plot, or they just copy the original battle inexplicably and end it inexplicably! I am also a programmer and have written a book. I know that writing a book is different from reading a book. Many of the battles are original and the battle scenes are very reasonable!

The first 20 chapters are pretty good, but the rest are full of anecdotes. If you haven't read the original Naruto novel, you can read it.

Actually, it's not bad. I'll get another one.

A Shinra Tensei can defeat 90% of Konoha's ninjas, and Konoha will be finished with an Earth Explosion Star. Ten-tailed beast jade and so on. That's it. I stayed in Konoha for 11 years and learned Japanese, Nojiko's soft boxing, and the Three Body Technique. No more, that's it. I have to endure the supercilious eyes of the clan🙄. If you accept it, you don't need the protagonist to live and die every second. You have to be at least worthy of your physical condition. The Nine Magatama Reincarnation Eye is for you to use as a decoration.

It's too bland and a bit of a waste of such a good subject matter. So are there any recommendations for this kind of book? The protagonist is Otsutsuki. He doesn't lick people and is a villain or a mastermind behind the scenes. Moreover, Otsutsuki has a magical system. It is mentioned later in the manga that divine arts are more advanced than ninjutsu. So, is there any protagonist who uses Otsutsuki's jutsu (such as the one used by Momo Shiki) instead of the natives of the skin-changing ninja world? The Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Senjutsu and Senjutsu of the skin-changing natives can be used even if they are not Otsutsuki.

To write about Otsutsuki, I should wait until Boruto is finished and the setting is complete. If I write now, the ceiling is too low. The protagonist is Otsutsuki and there is no plot to write in the ninja world. Reading everyone's comments and writing about Otsutsuki is a thankless task. No wonder no one in the fandom writes about Otsutsuki.