Only the Iron Fist Can Control the Mountains and Rivers

Waste article, young man, you have the appearance of a saint, hahahahaha

Your routine of giving the protagonist an enemy at the beginning is a bit cliche.

It's very well written. Stop writing and find a factory to make the screws!

. Death from poison, extremely poisonous. At the beginning, it was said that it was a civilized world, but in the second chapter, it was written that a small gang could come to the house of a disabled person and rob the whole family for 100,000 yuan. . Are you telling me that this is a world with laws? ? Very poisonous

I can't stand it at all, it's extremely poisonous 😰

I understand helping the protagonist find an enemy at the beginning, but I don't understand the subsequent operations. They have systems and are afraid of shit. Even a gang can't defeat it.

Trash, the protagonist is a trash

Thank you for trying the poison. Now my head hurts when I see the useless material. It is a fantasy starting to use the useless material. It is the kind of low-level writing that goes around killing people and fighting with good resources. . . .

The system points are not perfect enough, the view is very blurry, the realm setting is blurry and confusing, and the world background is not detailed enough. These are relatively fatal injuries, but that's okay, it's better than if we couldn't write novels. Take your time

The contents of Chapters 56 and 57 are repeated.