I Became the True Ancestor of the Blood Clan in Another World

Author, please listen to me. Your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, but it impresses readers with plain and true feelings. The sentences are fluent, and the psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful in one go. It gives people a sense of aftertaste. From a literary point of view, the subject matter is very novel. The angle is clearly visible. The language is plain yet elegant. Simple yet meaningful. This article is a model article. The literary skills that show extraordinary in the ordinary can be said to be precious every word. Every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is beyond our reach. From an artistic point of view. This article could be improved. But his meaning is far greater than success itself. There is also the use of punctuation marks. Just right. After reading your article word for word, my heart cannot calm down for a long time. How could there be such insightful articles in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You gave me a deep understanding of the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world". After reading the article, I did not dare to reply easily. I was worried that my vulgar language would tarnish this rare article in the world, but I still replied because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful article, it would be a regret in my life, no matter how wonderful the article was with gorgeous words, so I just want to say, your novel is so touching! How about......... One more chapter?

If you write a novel with a lot of typos, I won't tell you. You can just change it. You will not change it even if you tell me. Then the protagonist knows the ending of Esdeath and wants to save it, but Esdeath tells the protagonist that she is determined to die and will not be saved by the protagonist. Then our protagonist refuses to listen and insists on it. After that, she goes to talk to the "enemy" commander. Knowing that she wants to die and save the protagonist, the result is like this in the eyes of the protagonist. He died under the skin, and here comes the most disgusting thing. The protagonist saved Esdeath again, but in the end, he changed his soul and you might as well not have saved him. This is not purely disgusting. Written by Zhu Tianwen, it seems that the protagonist has an extraordinary origin. The result is that I have read a hundred photos of the world of beheading girls and haven't finished it, and the writing is like a running account. If the world of beheading girls hadn't attracted me, I would have given up long ago 😰😰

You said that your profile should be written with more cheerful content. But you also made the protagonist too natural, without any emotional foreshadowing. You said that a normal person who just traveled through time and knew that he was entering an anime he knew would not think about being happy or fulfilling his wish? You have no experience, just thinking about how to obtain strong power and study the power system? Or, if you become a vampire, you will have the brainwashing function directly. Can you do some foreshadowing of the plot and character?

Can you wear "Black Bullet"? Beg

I don't understand what the protagonist does when he travels back in time. The plot is almost the same as the original work. Night Raid will die with or without the protagonist. What's the point of the protagonist coming? The minister likes to mention the tool man?

Brothers, it is extremely poisonous. The main character behaves like a virgin. If you belong to me, I won't kill you. I will wait for you to become stronger. The plot will start to be ridiculous when Tazmi becomes a dragon. I suggest you just moisturize the brothers.

How dare the heroine post a male video?

Remilia

Lilith

I couldn't stand it anymore after the Crimson Eyes chapter.

Reading this book is like not reading it. Nothing can be saved, they are all dead, is it useless? It's like a fucking piece of shit.

In all senses, today's plot is just for the purpose of poisoning, forcibly creating a new character, and even letting important characters die without any foreshadowing, and depending on the situation, they cannot be resurrected. In other words, according to the plot, 80% of the protagonist cheats, and then regrets forever. He wanted to make tears, but the result was written as poison. People with high poison resistance should be able to resist it, but I guess the plot behind...

Some personal opinions on the creation of the protagonist. First of all, the description of the protagonist's appearance at the beginning can be said to be very attractive, at least to me. Then the description of the protagonist's character can be said to be difficult to describe in one sentence, and even his appearance cannot bring back my favorability towards the protagonist. The subordinates who had been with him for a while were obviously capable of saving but showed no emotion and indifference, allowing them to die directly... Then, the lives of the five subordinates who had just been transformed not long ago were more important than those two people... The most important point is that for the first person I met in this world, the person I had been with day and night for several years, Esdeath, I knew clearly that she was going to die, but I was not prepared at all. I was still a modern time traveler, so I was so emotionally weak?

During the fight with Night Raid in Chapter 50 or so, the protagonist's clothes on his chest and abdomen were gone, and he was completely naked from the front. Did the author deliberately write this to poison him?

Turning into a vampire is just like turning into a lolita, right? Apart from not being able to live very long, he doesn't have any abilities at all. He's also a true ancestor, and his name is pretty nice. Just write about a white-haired loli who doesn't grow up and is a vampire😁😁😁😁😁

Wuhu~Chapter 1 Lilith, second picture Lilia (not original)

1. Ordinary author's writing: I put the battery into the flashlight. 2. The normal author's writing method: I stuffed two AA batteries into the somewhat worn flashlight. 3. The author of Water God writes: Now, I have an old-fashioned flashlight in my hand. Holding it, I felt uneasy in my heart. I looked at it and found that, like other old-fashioned flashlights, it has a cover on the hip that can be opened by rotating. When I opened the lid, as I expected, I was speechless when I saw that it was empty inside. My brows furrowed tightly, and the feeling of wanting to commit suicide by throwing myself into a lake hit me from all directions. Because I was faced with a difficult decision, should I go downstairs to buy two batteries, or find two batteries at home? Where in life is there no trouble? Although it is daytime and I haven't had breakfast yet, as an old-fashioned flashlight, it does not have two AA batteries in it, which is very, very unreasonable. Has anyone heard of such a thing.

No love, just speechless. The main character is a useless person. It is a three-no product with no goal, no position, and no three views.

The plot of Red Eyes made me feel sick to my stomach. What the hell was it about? Nothing changes the plot of Hunting Night Raid. This kind of fanfic is basically about making up for regrets and trying to change something. What about you? Looks like the clouds are calm and the wind is gentle, right? To say you have seen red pupils is an insult to humanity, fuck

After reading some books, I was curious about how much love the author lacked. I got it but let it go. When I lost it, I would rather find a substitute than find a way to resurrect. I am very curious about the author's thoughts when he wrote this novel in reality.

From the moment Esdeath disappeared, I don't want to see it→_→

After reading more than 50 chapters, I don't know what to say. It's not as poisonous as Sofa Decisive. The plot is not that interesting or satisfying at all.

I have been chasing her for a year without realizing it, and I don't know what to say. Happy birthday to Lilith!

I shouldn't just read other people's recommendations. For someone like me who still has a sense of justice in my heart, this book is simply poisonous to death. When I read it, I felt for a moment that there is nothing good about modern times. Yes, yes, I am very glass-hearted, especially Because Zhanchi was the first one I entered into, but in the end I never got any healing from it or the second one. I didn't even make up for my regrets. I shouldn't have come. Also, I'm sorry, I wanted to report this book before I left. It broke my glass heart. Goodbye.

Let's start a new book, Let's start a new book, Saint Esdeath Palace of the Celestial Dragon

I am recommending a word game novel called "The Adventure of This Word Game is Really Mysterious". The world view is that of a full moon night. It is relaxed, joyful and interesting. It combines a variety of fantasy elements. The link is below. Friends who are book-hungry can check it out.

It's okay. It was okay before Esdeath was put on the shelves, but it was just average after that.