A Person Becomes a Sword Master in the Ninja World

This weird plot is just too watery...

Does the author know how to maintain health? If you don't understand, you can learn from him↓

Various items in Naruto Computers, pistols, big cities and even Chinese cuisine, high school students, etc.

The average jounin in the ninja world is supersonic 🙂. Is the author serious? Why have I never seen a sonic boom cloud? I guess I only saw the sonic boom cloud when Kai opened the eight doors and kicked Ye Kai. What's more, in a world like the ninja world, where everyone is fragile, if there were sonic punches, wouldn't they be one punch at a time? Is it similar to the early stage of Saint Seiya? 😥 It's too exaggerated (I personally think that a Jonin can hit the sky at a maximum of 80m/s). Uchiha Itachi can only run six seals per second at most. According to me, he can run 80 meters in one second, and his ninjutsu can't hit him at all. Not to mention your speed of sound. White Fang's 20 times the speed of sound 😰. Even faster than the J-20 👍

Facts have proved that grabbing the ninja world is equal to waste

I read a few of them, and I feel like they contain a lot of the author's personal stuff.

Interesting plot, good luck to the author

There are a lot of brainwashings and personal stuff from the author, but it would look better without these.

Can we not add the word "peak" to the realm? A swordsman is a swordsman, and a great swordsman is a swordsman. What is the peak of a swordsman? The peak of a great swordsman is too low! Also, does the protagonist really use a sword? Do you really like to persuade others with your mouth? Zoro and Hawkeye don't convince people with their mouths!

Supersonic? ? ? Seriously? This is a paradox, okay? If someone really reaches supersonic speed, then his body must be comparable to special synthetic steel, otherwise his own skeleton will not be able to withstand that speed. The effects of forces are mutual, and your body will definitely withstand corresponding pressure and resistance when it rushes out. How do you think the body of a ninja looks like special synthetic steel? You can explain it by saying that teleportation is a ninjutsu, but per capita supersonic speed? Author, do you know anything about the speed of sound? ? ? The speed of sound is 340m/s, which means it takes 3 seconds to travel one kilometer. More than 20 kilometers in one minute, 1,200 kilometers in one hour, which means that you can cross the entire China in more than an hour, and you can run around the earth in less than 32 hours... When Jiraiya and the others were rushing during the Ninja Village War, they were traveling in weeks. Are they fighting across planets? According to this way of writing, Konoha Village is almost 300 times as big as China? Otherwise, how can you come back?

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There's no sense of immersion, and it's a bit confusing.

What the hell is it written about? I can't read clearly, my writing is unclear, and it's too crooked.

If she is so awesome, how did Kaguya rise at that time?

Poisoned to death within ten chapters, this is no longer a matter of secondary creation, Hokage High School Student? What didn't you see in the school uniform? Learning knowledge does not necessarily have to be in high school... And to rationalize Naruto's shortcomings, everyone knows that Naruto's technology is crooked, and only Boruto is a bit talented. The author's attempt to raise the level of knowledge in the early stages of Naruto is as impossible as trying to create nuclear power generation in the Stone Age. Popular knowledge cannot be based on hardware technology, and any rationalization is unreasonable.

It's good to read the introduction, but I hope to live in the world of unlimited monthly reading, because I worked hard for a year and couldn't even save 10,000. I no longer deserve to live in this world.

It's a different angle, quite interesting.

The fight scenes were so poorly written. . . And I feel like the author is a little bit proud of himself

White Snake Immortal, that old woman?

The first time I met the heroine was the White Snake Immortal.

An online novel with mostly dialogue. I suggest you upgrade this dialogue.

The first chapter said that the system can redeem everything in the Ninja World timeline, but the new chapter says that this Ninja World is related to the Dark Summoner World. There is no relevant information about the entire Ninja World timeline except the Breath of Heaven? It's not that you didn't foreshadow it, but the previous foreshadowing was a bit insufficient compared to this revelation, making people feel more suspicious than it was.

The first three golden chapters are a complete mess. The characters, background, and narrative are all incomprehensible.

Let me put it this way, although it is true that I want to raise the author's reputation a little bit, this Naruto is indeed it. Dark Summoner's fan's fan.

The power level system and the conspiracy with Naruto mentioned earlier are quite interesting, but the protagonist's pursuit is not good. After reaching heaven, I can't stand it at all. It is basically fake and empty.

Wasn't it very happy to write about Nan Tong before? Why does this book seem to have no elements of Nan Tong at all now?

At the beginning, it is written that there are hundreds of millions of people in the ninja world, and the ninjas are converted into thousands of ordinary people. Is there such a conversion? There are so many ninjas in the Ninja Village because of the continuous reproduction of Ninja clans. They are not transformed by ordinary people. They are different in nature. How do so many people survive? Judging from the land area and productivity shown in the animation, you told me that they can feed so many people. You use the modern Chinese template to calculate, and you don't even think about how we did it.