Let Go of That Director

I have read both old books. I personally think that the author's writing level is on the rise. But after reading the endings of two old books, I can't help but give my opinion. Can the third book have a good ending? Don't use the open ending as an excuse. In fact, it is no different from the eunuch, and it is even less interesting than a bad ending. Really! If you want to recommend the protagonist girl, her career should not be too short. After all, pretense still depends on your career achievements. The protagonists of the first two books failed to achieve a grand slam by the end, and it always felt like an anticlimax. In fact, the career line you wrote is quite interesting, not as bad as the interaction between men and women! Finally, I once again commend the author for his visible progress in the third book. Finally, there are fewer long paragraphs of psychological description and repeated theoretical analysis. The author's outstanding writing style is basically used in plot advancement, character dialogue and character creation. Congratulations!

Now Korean entertainment is a waste of time and no one reads it

It's right that Korean entertainment mainly writes about girls, but it can't be overdone. Let me think about it, starting from the entangled plot with Lin Yuner and Jin Jiyun dozens of chapters ago, almost every chapter is either preaching to the girl, or the narration analyzes the relationship with the girl. It's really hard to handle content like this. No matter how good the analysis is, it must be moderate. After all, novels are about telling stories, and narrative is more important than argumentative analysis. If you really can't control your addiction to making comments whenever you write about girls, you can write more about your career. You can really write a career line. Even writing about enjoying life, food, clothing, housing, transportation and travel is just fine. The protagonist is a character who does not believe in love, so the sweet feeling is gone. Emotionally, he has to deal with all kinds of female lickers. The fun lies in watching how the female lickers conquer the protagonist, rather than watching the protagonist analyze and preach. Full order to prove innocence, I hope the author will be strong and write better and better!

Park Ji-yeon

Angel on Earth Lim Yoona

Kim Ji-yoon

One update a day is not enough, it's not enough and it's a bit heart-breaking.

I have read 2 books by the author, and this is the third one. I can be considered an old reader. The author's advantage is that he writes very well about the interaction with the girls. He is very close to the facts and does not lick. This is really the author's biggest advantage. The disadvantage is that it writes about career and travel. It is very simple and does not have a sense of substitution. For example, when going to Hawaii, I think the author can write about hotels, Wakiki Beach, and Hanauma Bay to make the plot smoother. He can also improve the number of words. When you meet Jiang Minjing, it is too blunt, and it feels like you meet downstairs at home.

The protagonists of Korean entertainment are not from chaebol backgrounds, so they are really not worth mentioning. The domestic entertainment industry is actually not bad. There is a mythical beast watching from above. No matter how dark it is, there is a bottom line. What do you think of South Korea? Starting from Zhang Ziyan, the Seungri Sydney incident in recent years, unspoken videos of various girl groups leaked out on the Internet. Without a solid background, it is a bit contrary to be able to hook up with a popular girl group and have a pure love in Korean entertainment.

Im Yoona