Dressed as a Playboy from the World of Immortality

I feel that the plot is a bit too taken for granted. It doesn't have the feeling of cultivating immortals. It's a bit like a costume romance martial arts, or a martial arts with a bit of a dull plot.

If it hasn't been updated for such a long time, it's probably abandoned. Nospeech

😍 The best sister also has no CP, so it is best to write a sisterly love story 🤤 The beautiful sister was raped by 🐷, in my heart...

I don't understand that the author always adds drama to the senior sister, and what's the point of writing about being crazy about men? Does it mean that the author just likes scenes of women competing for men and being jealous? I'm so disappointed. The protagonist may not have any interest in his senior brother, but Xia did kill him because he regarded the protagonist as his love rival. I really don't like to watch scenes where women are jealous of men. It's like not throwing away a bunch of cock and putting it on the dining table from time to time. It's not only disgusting to write about the villain, but it's also disgusting to the protagonist.

Zhuzhu is very good, her sister is also very good, and Jiaojiao is also very good, but the female villain is too facial and demented, and I can't stand it886

Finally, there is a story about sisters. The other female protagonists cultivating immortals are all playing weird roles against their older brothers. I hope the author can persevere 🌹🌹🌹

When I saw the name Ni Si Zhu... I suddenly laughed

The characters are interesting but the world setting is problematic. This is already the world of cultivation, and there are still so many stereotypes and bad habits. Moreover, the patriarchs, elders, old groups, etc. Currently appearing in the four major families are all male except for one seventh aunt, which makes no sense logically. You can add a setting that uses dio to absorb spiritual energy faster, and it will be perfect.

When will it be updated? There will only be two chapters in a day. Let's have a blast. It's hard to find novels like this with good writing, vivid characters, few top quality novels, and serious cultivation of immortality. Please do your best 🤭🤭🤭🌹

The author is really wild and unsystematic. The heroine is written as a brainless retard. The further he writes, the less brainless she becomes. She is too arrogant.

No cp? Having a male protagonist should not affect your cultivation of immortality. Some readers say that there are too few articles without cp, but I think there are very few articles with cp.

Huahua

Alas, this article is really a pity. After reading more than 80 chapters, there are no major flaws, but there are constant minor flaws. There are many places where intelligence is forcibly reduced and the logic is illogical. The most uncomfortable thing is that it does not suddenly appear an unacceptable bug and abandon the article. It slowly erodes interest and enthusiasm bit by bit. I've read no less than ten chapters, and I finally reached chapter 80 and couldn't stand it anymore.

Supports no CP, and has many female characters 🤭🤭🤭😡

When I see no cp, I quickly collect it. It's too difficult. Come on, the author.

The introduction is quite attractive, but I find out that the little cancer is the former heroine. After the heroine traveled back in time and worked hard to become stronger, she can no longer be considered a cancer. . . Well. . . It looks different from the introduction

It's really good-looking. It's a fairy tale that focuses on family ties. I've always felt that family ties are more important than love.

Ni Sizhu

I can't stand it anymore. This book is obviously about cultivating the world of immortality and it keeps talking about marriage. I can't stand it, but the female characters that appear in it are either very good-looking like the protagonists and are pursued by a group of men, or they suddenly fall in love with a certain male cultivator or start pursuing the male cultivator at first sight. It's very stupid. Moreover, there are also all kinds of male chauvinism, which seems to be wrapped up in the cerebellum, and the theory that female cultivators are inferior to male cultivators. Although the heroine is a big heroine, the environment is a feudal environment, relying on the defense.

The writing style is a bit jerky, the plot transitions are a bit unreasonable, and some plot arrangements are rather blunt. It seems that they are deliberately arranged to give the heroine magic weapons and exercises. There is too little foreshadowing.

I'm really convinced. In this book, except for the heroine sister and Jiaojiao, the other female partners are competing with each other all the time. Don't female cultivators in the world of immortality need to practice? They surround men every day. The malice of these female protagonists is inexplicable, and they are all jealous of the beauty of the female protagonist.

Why isn't it updated? This article is obviously not finished yet. Why is there no more content if the hole dug has not been filled? It's strange. Family stories without cp are also quite good. I'll write them slowly later. The author must not be a eunuch.

Why did it stop updating again? Did the author abandon the article?

The author will continue to update, you can also see it here

There are a lot of minor flaws at the beginning, but if you tolerate it, it will gradually get better. It is a good novel overall, but the ending is very hasty and many foreshadowings are not revealed. (´△｀)

This is confusing. The main text is not finished yet, and the audiobook derived from it has already concluded.