A Practical Professor at Hogwarts

The introduction was too strong, which put me off a bit.

Change your name and call me eating Chinese food at Hogwarts

Disadvantage 1: The introduction is weak. I have passed this book several times and I have no desire to read it when I see the introduction. Disadvantage 2: The language organization ability is disappointing, and every few sentences will be unsound or awkward Disadvantage 3: The sea, you are all water Advantage 1: The way to open Hogwarts is okay, and the alchemy props are good Advantage 2: The debut is half the peak, shortening the writing required for development Advantage 3: The future is promising.

Don't brag about China. According to Rowling, China doesn't have many wizards at all. There are only 3,000 wizards in the wizarding world. I'm going to exaggerate what you said. The average Kaido strength per capita in China and the divine power of the Holy Lord's Twelve Talisman. I think it's like the dragon people in One Piece really want to overthrow themselves. The protagonist is already British and they are still doing it. Let's imagine that the protagonist walks towards the Chinese wizard and is beaten to death by a giant gnawed melon just as he is about to say hello. This is what your protagonist looks like.

Not everything has to be extremely detailed. . . It needs to be detailed properly! Is it okay to just skip a lot of content without affecting the characterization and plot at all? There is too much nonsense, and the protagonist's personality is not obvious at all, and he does not act like a time traveler. . . After reading the first ten chapters, I just feel that the protagonist seems to be knowledgeable, but I have no idea whether he is wise or cheerful. . .

I just want to ask, what is the relationship between Meyer and Goering?

Can't we concentrate on studying magic and not have a heroine?

How should I put it, it's pretty good, but it's almost chapter 30 and I haven't entered Hogwarts yet.

Is this introduction so simple? You should at least write some.

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Protagonist: If a Death Eater enters Hogwarts, I will change my name to Goring!

Basically every chapter has a large description of food. No content. It's boring to watch too much.

Slow-burning type, full of details, constantly updated, not unfinished, not lower than the current level and then increasing its popularity, this book will become popular. It would be even better if original plots could be added. Similar to the Wizarding War, a world war between Muggles and wizards. Come on, author!

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Practical combat classes are difficult to hold at Hogwarts. After all, Hogwarts is a magic school, not a military school. There is a profession in the wizarding world that requires practical combat, namely Aurors. However, Aurors will take a long time to train before joining the job. Duels are also covered in the Defense Against the Dark Arts course. Lockhart also opened a duel club. If a practical class is opened, it will be repeated. Even if it is offered, it will only be an elective improvement course for senior students at most.

Fleur Delacour