I Became a Female Video Villain

Shennong is back! This book is mainly reflected in the characterization and psychological description of interaction. Generally speaking, it is worth reading. The author is a little slow, but understandable. This kind of book collapses quickly, but it would be better if the author speeds it up a little.

The writing style is delicate and has a special sense of freshness. In order to show the characteristics of the writing style, the progress of the plot is slightly delayed. This situation is very disadvantageous in online novels; in general, the progress of online novels is faster and the character creation is concise. Such a book is not suitable for classification as history. This book gave me a feeling of being a little tasteless and a pity to abandon... But I dare to say that if I can finish it, it will be a masterpiece.

It's pretty good. The "book gambling" part comes down to personal preference. I think a lot of people want to be "helpers", but for the protagonist, or for most people, the first choice is to ask the helper first. There's no problem. Maybe it doesn't bring the perspective of the protagonist. Besides, even if it doesn't It is brought into the perspective of the protagonist, but when it is written from the perspective of the protagonist, it is also necessary to think about whether what he did is "right" from the perspective of the protagonist. Even if the protagonist's sisters did something wrong, maybe if the protagonist "washes it clean" according to the original intention, then there will be arrangements for the follow-up, right?

Let me tell you how I feel. Although it is quite beautiful, I cannot be the protagonist. I put myself into the Liang family, which made me feel really uncomfortable when I saw the garden part. After all, the decency here is real decency, and it is the protagonist's sister who was at fault first. I feel that this kind of thing can be easily resolved. I just need to ask my sister to apologize and call her adoptive father. I don't need to hate this kind of paragraph. Maybe it's my personal reasons. If decency is really good, I hope that the good and the bad will reconcile. Nowadays, the villain stories are all the way to the end. The anger is very strong. It's been a long time since there was a reconciliation villain story. I feel that this can actually become a quite heartwarming article... If the author has a clear plan, let's follow his own. This is just my feeling.

The female video article, the man is too weak, reminds me of Xiao Zhan, Ji Kun, the writing style is very good, but it is very tiring to watch, don't be greedy for a small taste, otherwise you will get a big headache

No, the writing is too immature. I am really a novice. Please write slowly and polish your writing skills. Don't deliberately pursue writing style or flashbacks and narrative writing. Just let the main line follow the flow. The author cannot control "group portraits", so there shouldn't be too many branch lines. The content should be more substantial, and the male protagonist should be more proactive. If the male protagonist is not strong, he will be GG. Even if the male protagonist is just hanging around, he should still write about the value that a male protagonist deserves. Be less gay, the boy has more inner drama than the male lead, and he is also drunk. Novice writers don't need to pursue too much. After staying up late to read the rough plot, I will withdraw this book first (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on, author

But um, I'm the author's trumpet. I just want to say here that I promise that this book will not be eunuch, otherwise I will become a white-haired lolita for you hehehe (ºº ). Well, that's all I'm going to say.

One person per floor, let's see how many people there can be (Brothers, please pay attention to me...)

Why do you like the princess? Perhaps it's because she is leading to the most brilliant and glorious moment in her life, how can she not be tempted? Think of her white ankles or mutton-fat wrists. She can run, jump, and laugh, and has all the emotions of all living creatures. If she runs, she will be as light as a young deer in the forest. If she is dignified, she will be as cunning as a white fox. The princess is The girl is as cute as a gift from heaven. She is white cotton, a faint flower, a butterfly flying in the sun in her hands, and a naughty kitten caressing in her heart. If all the beauty in the world is in her, how can you not love her? So, the princess with the temperament bursting out like a plant sprouting is like a treasure. I really like Chu Shu so much! ——The princess made a speech that pushed people to lose consciousness. JPG

Why! ! ! Why? Obviously so beautiful, obviously about to be sweet, but with such an ending, I am really sad to death. Your eunuch is more uncomfortable than me when I fall in love...😭😭😭 I burst into tears, I really can't help it.

A female author writes pornographic stories under the guise of harem novels?

The writing of this book can be considered to be first-rate. The author has not yet developed the plot, but at least it seems to be unconventional at the moment. The only suggestion is that the author can adhere to the flowing prose and fresh and elegant writing style, and appropriately discard some "cool points" such as the novice elements in the "fighting poem" plot that he has written so far, which will better improve this book. Also, I personally think that the male protagonist's inherent obsession with wearing books can be completely downplayed.

My cousin will do it for me. My cousin is the heroine. Can we have more cousin plots? I want to reward my cousin.

You look down on the protagonist's character, you want to whitewash yourself and do what a villain should do

Among these heroines, my favorite is Qin Ruxue. I like that she keeps her promise and remembers the childish jokes made many years ago in her heart; I like that she rides a horse to meet her sweetheart; I like that she is brave and heroic and has strong martial arts skills; I like that she is virtuous and declines the invitation of her sweetheart for the sake of her fiancé. She is really nice and good-looking

To be honest, I don't know what the main plot is now.

I just want to know a question! Is there any poison in this land? Marrying an old man in my previous life was really unacceptable. If you marry an old man, is it just status or everything else? I don't want to be poisoned! Please give the author an answer! How do you write it?

Lu Shutong

My most intuitive feeling - after watching it, I prefer my cousin to any other female character.

After reading Chapter 30, I feel lonely. So far, I only know that the male protagonist wears books and is a villain. In order to survive, he went to Beijing to hug his thighs. The princess is a thigh, and the second uncle is a thigh. Where is the enemy? ? ? What about the identity of the enemy? ? ? What power does the enemy have? ? ? The princess is a thirteen-year-old girl, both of her parents are dead. To put it bluntly, the princess is living under the emperor's hand. She relies solely on the emperor to miss her old love, which does not reflect the princess's power. So the male protagonist is a silly fool, why doesn't he want to rely on himself? At the age of seventeen, although his father retired from the court, as the head of an aristocratic family, it is impossible to rely on official positions. His mother was born in a general, and his second uncle is also a minister. As for the male protagonist, it's chapter 30! ! ! Still having nothing to do, and still thinking about going to a brothel 😅😅😅 Even if he doesn't rebel, the male protagonist can use the existing resources to gain a lot of power, so why should he be afraid of the original female protagonist? That's it! Even if the original female protagonist is the emperor's concubine, as long as the male protagonist is powerful enough, the emperor will have to be cowardly, and if it doesn't work, he will rebel. The impression I have so far is that the male protagonist has nothing (waste), everything (things), anything (some), anything (mind)

The writing is quite good, especially when I see such a writing style in a male channel. I am really surprised. Although some parts are still a bit immature, it also shows that there is a lot of room for improvement, so don't give up. Update a few more chapters. You, the author, have great potential.

The Shu brocade robe is cut by oneself, and the peach blossoms are about to grow their tassels.

Lu Shutong Lu Shutong or the male protagonist's sister

Game

Alas, I made up a full order, but it's a pity that you are no longer here... Chu Shu, Pei Junyi, Qin Ruxue, Lu Shutong, and Pei Junmo are all gone ... How should I feel about reading this book...

So few, raised😰

It's been a year. Is it true that I won't come back to finish the trap? There is obviously still a lot that can be written...

How can I say that a good-looking and rigorous book can be reflected in the first ten or twenty chapters? I saw that after 60 chapters, it really cannot reflect the main progress of the novel. After writing fifty or sixty chapters, it feels like returning from a trip and copying a poem by Li Bai for more than ten chapters. The original heroine mentioned in the whole text has basically not appeared. Chapter sixty? Well, the summary is that the old lady's foot-binding cloth is long, thick, and as rough and tasteless as chewing bark.

In the series of my lifetime, I hope the author can complete this novel. I can't bear to read the spoilers. Alas

Tomb sweeping. Jpg