Great Immortal, Times Have Changed

As a new book, I don't know what the Golden Three Chapters are. I've read more than 10 to 20 chapters, but it's not exciting or exciting, and the pace is draggy. Plus, the character of the male protagonist is like oh my god. He has the cultivation level of the Mahayana period but not the brains of the Mahayana period. It's a total noob. I have thought that the author is afraid that the protagonist will fall apart every second and then his combat power will collapse, but he should let the protagonist perform appropriately. , Can attract readers. If you don't have enough writing power and the ability to control the plot, it's better to just go to the end. The plot and other things can be self-justified. There is no need to explain all aspects in a coherent and detailed manner. It is recommended to make an outline of the abilities and skills that the protagonist should have in the Mahayana period, and then release them slowly. This will make it much easier to write.

I read the comments in book circles to mention my feelings Maybe it's because I have relatively little experience and I'm not too old. Apart from online novels, the books I read are "Quiet Don" and "Selected Essays on Diderot's Aesthetics". Yes, so if you have different opinions, please don't embarrass me 🙂 I also write science fiction novels, and my works have won awards and been published in major newspapers and periodicals. I know that it is really difficult to write an excellent work. Although this book has flaws, its grand fantasy really attracted me (except for The Three-Body Problem, The Galactic Empire, Fire in the Abyss, and The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy, I have never seen such a grand world view [maybe because I have little knowledge]), and the integration of mythology and plot is also ingenious. I think It cannot be written within five years (of course this book cannot be regarded as a pure science fiction novel) 😭 The author's writing style is very clean, the characters are full of emotion, the logic is reasonable, it can be self-explanatory, the plot is clear and has no ambiguity, and the description skills are very high. A quite famous writer (probably so) commented that my writing was "restrained". This is what the author's writing gives me. There is no unnecessary nonsense, what should be stated clearly and what should be concealed is sufficient to reflect the author's overall control over the plot. In a word: It's amazing. I hope the author will continue writing. Anyway, I'm definitely committed to this book! 😍

You Mahayana monk is too lazy! He doesn't even know how to control air flying!

Alas, the readability of the last dozen or so chapters has been so poor that I felt tired just reading them. The main reason is that the plot and style conflict. I don't know if the readers are willing to read some plots, so I just want to skip them quickly without writing in detail. But the plot has to be written, and in the end it becomes a mere pile-up without polish. I didn't dare to be too watery, but the number of words couldn't be increased. In the end, it was dry, numb, and not mellow at all. Let me think about it, how to write better...

Is Xiandu so weak? Immortals shouldn't physically travel across the stars and destroy planets with one hand.

I don't know why you have to give this immortal status? Good readers, I really don't believe that I came to see Mahayana monks learn computers. No fighting power, no immortal intention. To put it bluntly, it doesn't matter if it's as plain as water, it doesn't matter if you tell others that the quilt containing water is made of diamonds.

The beginning is not good, the protagonist has no aura of cultivating immortality, and the author's writing style smells like two-dimensional. It is recommended to avoid such things when writing books.

The subject matter is interesting, but unfortunately the writing is not very good. The dialogues are densely packed, and there is very little other background information, character expressions, emotions, etc., Which makes it look empty. However, there are too many dialogues, making it seem like a stagnant water.

The ten-year-old bookworm said that he couldn't stand it, the theme setting was good, but the plot was uninteresting 🥺

How could a Mahayana monk be described as the same as a young man from a remote mountainous area😅

Your book is not a big deal as a whole, but if you look closely, it has quite a big problem, like the time issue you mentioned later. It can't be only two thousand years, but there is a bug that is constantly reversing time on the earth. Technology is also rising and falling. First of all, when technology is developed, human beings will immediately want to increase their life span, and then they will pursue physical strength. Programs with magical effects also appear in the article, over exaggerating the effects of spells. If humans can reach the point you write in your article, then energy will not be a problem at all. As for the lack of unification, I can only say that such high technology is ridiculous. Asgard turns out to be just a children's playground.

It was a bit chaotic and I couldn't stand it anymore, so I withdrew first. Come on everyone. This book doesn't suit my style.

After reading Chapter 60, judging from the current content, it is difficult not to think that humans name things based on Nordic mythology, but why would a powerful cultivation civilization not even be able to retain the title Immortal? Is it because the bottom layer is out of reach or the world has changed?

Help, why is the theme that I was looking forward to so much filled with useless plots? It's not readable at all. Loki and Valkyrie are so annoying that I'm going crazy.

It's very well written, don't write it again in the future

Look at my undefeated magical skills of poison reading for ten years, and I can defeat your stupid method of spreading poison and attracting stars! Ha ha

Can't stand it. So boring. .

That extra chapter said that his identity has already been in the file. Does that man not know that he is living flesh? It's scary.

This book feels weird... And not interesting...

In my opinion, the immortals are at least smart people, not to mention superior IQs. Don't let this novel be so touching. How can you achieve both magic and immortality? This little bit of xinxing. . . . . Looks too awkward

I don't know why so many people admire the so-called immortals who are affiliated with the underworld and even wear devil heads in immortal skins. This is the closest thing to an immortal I have ever seen.

Poison, cough cough cough cough, I can't stand it

I always feel that this cultivator is a fake immortal, it feels like it has no skills, and with a lot of BOSS behind a weak aura, it is even a bit inferior to this.

The subject matter is very good, the plot is too exciting

I think this book would be more interesting if the protagonist becomes the person who created this interstellar era, and teaches a group of cultivators who have been in seclusion for thousands of years to discover that the world has changed, that the times have changed...

Is this result too bad? Or is my taste so different from the mainstream?

The subject matter is okay, but there is no plot and nothing to watch.

I just started watching yesterday and finished watching it today

Is there any investment income from finishing this book? It feels like I have no profit...

Came here for archeology on April 23, 2026, I saw my ancestors, times have changed, and after searching it turned out that this is the source (almost) 😁😁😁