Battle Through the Heavens: I Have a Martial Arts Cheat Device

Three major flaws: 1. The writing is too overpowered, with dozens of chapters dedicated to the Dou Zong sect. 2. Establishing a dynasty through imperial connections is problematic; this is Doupo, not Three Kingdoms, where individual strength is paramount. 3. The phrase "subduing" others—seeing it in the table of contents reminds me of those overpowered protagonist novels from ten years ago. Of course, if this is an infinite flow novel, then disregard what I've said.

Forget everything else, his pursuit of Xiao Mei is just baffling. Before Xiao Yan lost his talent, his relationship with Xiao Mei was similar to his relationship with Xun'er. But after Xiao Yan lost his talent, they became strangers. Why would you take in someone who can't share hardships?

Damn, if I weren't a Shennong (a legendary figure known for his insightful observations), I really couldn't have kept reading. After reading the first few chapters, Nalan is reborn, Xiao Xun'er wasn't touched and seems to have acquired the original Doupo novel, and I haven't even figured out Xiao Mei's character yet.

The author seems to have a good attitude, writing what they like. Keep it up! However, it really is addictive; it's one of the most addictive novels I've ever read. It's completely self-indulgent, so proceed with caution.

Hmm, I think even if Nalan Yanran were reborn, she would still choose to annul the engagement. (Probably) P. S.: Don't argue with me, you're right!

Yunyun

What kind of trashy novels feature characters who sleep with every woman they see?

Ah, this has a strong "loser" vibe. Some of the inner monologues really don't need to be so explicit; you could show the protagonist's psychology indirectly.

How is this written? The combat power is a complete mess. In the original work, excluding Battle Qi, the fourth rank is Battle Spirit. Yet, your protagonist, while still a Battle Master, flies into the sky and subdues a fourth-rank flying magical beast.

The first few chapters are quite off-putting; the protagonist comes across as extremely arrogant and conceited, making you instinctively frown. But the later chapters are alright and become readable.